RanTara SS: Fallen In Love..DISCONTINUED - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update
The night ohh scary as well as emotional
Loved it
Please make it a happy ending
Pls cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank u so much guys..
m sorry m nt able to reply all comments individually..
bt i rly luvd them a lot..
plz keep showering ur love..

luv u all..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely .
Loved it .
Very nice update .
Thxs for the PM .
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome awesome awesome update akki...
Dis story really touches my heart.. I luv it to my core..
D way u describe their emotions is superb...
So slowly raghu is getting attached to antara..wooow..its becoming interesting..
But only 2 updates left ... Oohhh!! Im so sad.. :(
But do update soon :)
Eagerly waiting for d update... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank u so much guys..
luvd ur comments..
means a lot to me...

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Posted: 11 years ago

hey guys.. hope u all r doing well..here is the next part of this story..
hope u'll like it..
guys, plz do read and leave ur comments...
Happy Reading.. :)

recap: antara at her parents home.. raghu alone in his home.. probably missing her.. recalling their wedding night and how he denied her... he feels restless and in early morning he drove towards antara's home..

PART 5

at 12 pm..
antara beta...?
ji papa...
hv u packed all stuffs??
yes papa...
ok.. beta hurry up..
u get ready..n i'll drop u to bus stand..
it's ok papa.. i'll go..
don't worry...
it's fine antara.. i'll drop u..
papa.. weather is not that good..
by the time u'll be back.. it will start raining..
so its okay.. i'll go...

antara, beta lunch is ready.. come..
ji mummy..
antara finished her packing and came out..
they all three sat together for lunch..
after a few minutes..some one rang their door bell...
antara's mom was about to get up..
antara asked her to sit and have her lunch..
she got up and walked towards the door...
she opened the door..and her eyes got widened in surprise..
it was raghu... she was frozen on her position..
she din't move..
who is it beta?? her mom asked..
but she was stood totally mum..
raghu cleared his throat..but she was still lost in him...
she couldn't believe he was here...
raghu gave her two packets which he brought and came inside...
she closed the door and followed him...
none of them spoke to each other...
antara's parents saw him and they got up from their chairs..
aery raghu beta... aap..!!
raghu came forward and touched their feet..
namastey mummy...
namastey papa...
khush raho beta...

raghu looked at dinning table..
i am sorry..i disturbed you...
no beta.. u din't...
we are so happy to see you...u came here so sudden..
it is such a pleasant surprise...
its been so long you came here..
ji..
wo i had some work at this side..and antara also had to come today..
so i thought i'll pick her...
ok ok... bahut achchha kiya.. jo aa gaye bete..
baitho...!!
ji..
antara..beta inke liye bhi khana laga do...
she din't reply...
antara...!! her mother called her again..
ji..ji...
beta kahan khoyi ho...??
ji haan lagati hu... she left from there and ran towards kitchen...
her mother called her again..
beta yahi to rakha hai.. kahan ja rahi ho..
ji.. haan...
yahi to rakha hai..
rantara looked at each other... and her parents laughed..
raghu couldn't resist smiling..at antiques of his wife...
antara lowered her gaze and was about to serve him food..
he denied...
its okay..actually i am not hungry...
what happened beta..??
ji kuchh nahi mummy...
beta kuchh to le lo...
i'll get u a coffee..she said...
no its okay.... he asked her to sit and finish her lunch first..
she sat on chair and got lost in him.. he was busy in talking to her parents..
she kept stealing glances at him...
when he looked at her she lowered her gaze and finished her food in hurry...
she got up and ran in kitchen to keep her dishes..
her heart was beating very fast...
her body was shivering.. she was happy that he came here to pick her...
she was on 9th cloud...
with trembling hands she put a pan on stoveto warm some milk for his coffee...
she heard his laughter coming from outside...
to make sure that it wasn't a dream... and he actually came here...
she pinched herself on her arm..and hissed in pain...
she laughed at herself and then immediately closed her mouth with her palm...
she smiled realizing that she was blushing...
she was lost in thoughts but suddenly she got scared...
some one turned off the knob of stove and took the pan off the stove...
she got scared and took two steps back in hurry.. she lifted her gaze..
it was him...
she kept staring at him and smiling...
raghu looked at her and he was dying in embarrassment...
she was behaving as if she saw him for the first time...
he waved his hand in front of her..
and she came back from her trance..
a...aa..aap..!!
aap yahan kaise...she came forward to pour some milk in a mug...
she was about to bump into him... but he stopped her showing his hands...
she stopped a few inches away from him...
pani lene aaya tha... he said...
aap mujhse kah dete..she said..
he was about to move back...
ji main deti hu.. she said and moved forward...
she was about to pick a glass for him...
right at the moment..raghu turned to pick a glass from rack.. and she got scared..
she was holding a coffee mug in her right hand and took support of slab and held it with her left hand...
raghu looked at her... he din't know what came over his mind..
but he wanted to tease her... he knew what she feels for him...
he moved forward...her heartbeat was increasing seeing their proximity..
he moved closer to her..and her cheeks turned crimson...
he placed his hand on slab near her hand but din't touch it
he leaned over her... so she leaned back on slab..
he lifted his one hand to pick a glass... and his body encountered with hers...
her grip got tightened on the mug and slab...
raghu picked the glass.. but din't move back...not even a bit...
she was feeling weak and wasn't able to stand on her own feet..
this was the first time.. he came this close to her..
she looked at him.. but couldn't see his face.. her face touched his throat..
she stopped.. if she would have looked above a bit more..
she could have kissed his throat..
neither she wanted him to move.. nor to stay like that..
her eyes were widened and her heartbeat was definitely not normal...
she kept looking at him.. though she wasn't able to...
she din't understand why is he taking so much time to pick a glass...
but she wasn't able to speak.. her voice was jerked in her throat...
she smelled his masculine perfume...
she wanted to clutch his shirt and wanted to give him a wet kiss on his neck for looking so hot everytime...
she was breathing hard having all those feelings.. and felt embarrassed on her own thoughts...

raghu felt her easiness and moved back...but she was stood at her place...
ekdum thanda nahi chahiye.. thoda normal bhi lena hai..
kis mein se lena hai?? he asked...
she din't reply to him.. she was still lost in him...
raghu waved his hand in front of her..
and she came back to her trance with a jerk..
j...j...ji..ji ji .ji...
kuchh kana aapne??
pani.. normal wala kahan se lu??
ji.. main deti hu...
she was about to held glass from his hand..
then immediately she stopped..
she gave her mug to him... and took glass from him...
raghu shook his head..
mujhe bata do.. main le lunga..

aap le lenge..?? she took mug from him..
raghu looked at her.. and rubbed his forehead...
tum coffee bana do...
haan..!!
mujhe coffee banani thi..
she turned and was about to move...
but raghu held her hand...
her heart skipped a beat...
she got frozen at her position..
raghu pulled her very lightly and made her turn to look at him...
glass to de do...
huh??? haan...
haan!!
she gave him the coffee mug...
raghu took that mug from her and left her...
he opened fridge and poured water in coffee mug...
main pain ismein pi lunga.. tum coffee glass mein le aana... raghu commented..
ji.. she nodded..
raghu couldn't resist to smile at her innocence..
she too smiled seeing him smiling...
in all those months.. she never saw him smiling like that...
but soon her face turned pale when he stopped smiling...
and then again she turned red seeing him piercing her body with his deep eyes...
she followed his gaze and realized she was not wearing her dupatta...
all the time she was moving here and there without her dupatta..
she felt embarrassed and lowered her eyes...and covered herself with one hand placing it on opposite side shoulder...
she looked above seeing those footsteps coming towards her..
she once again felt weak and took two steps back...
raghu came forward and she got hit in slab near stove...
he held her hand that was holding the slab...
he removed her another hand from her chest and moved it behind her back...
he then leaned over her and she leaned her head back completely...
he placed a wet kiss on her throat.. and she felt thousands of currents in her body..
she clutched his shirt tight from side and a bit above his belt...
her nails diged in his skin..
he placed one more wet kiss on her throat just a bit above her collarbone...
closing her eyes and her grip got tighter on his shirt...
raghu opened two buttons of his shirt...
he took her hand placing it on his bare shoulder...and leaned more on her..
antara was not able to breath with his actions...
her chest fell and rose, getting rubbed with his..
raghu pressed himself on her chest and slid his hand on her back..
he opened dori of her shirt and slid down her sleeve from one shoulder that he could even see her bosom...
antara looked at him with widened eyes...
she wanted to clutch him tight but he was holding her hand...
raghu kissed on her shoulder and deepened his kisses on her skin..
he kept showering his wet kisses on her skin trailing the path of her shoulder to neck and then earlobe...
he took her earlobe in his mouth and licked her skin behind her ear...
she leaned completely on slab giving him more access...
suddenly she got hit with hot burner and she opened her eyes with a jerk...
she saw him standing a foot away from her taking water from RO..
she first checked herself..and thought if she could die at this moment..
she was feeling so embarrassed.. what if he saw her.. she thought...
main dupatta le ke aati hoon.. she said and was about run from there...
but raghu stopped her.. pahle coffee to de do..
bahut thak gaya hu itni driving k baad...

ji .. pahle coffee de deti hu..
n then she noticed that mug in his hand..
aap ismein kyun pain pi rahe hai..
she took mug from his hand...and he took it back..
its okay...
nahi.. main deti hu aapko.. aap rahne dijiye...
ye theek hai...she looked at him with sorry face..
theek h..!! he said...
but she held his hand... he looked at her.. and she left it immediately...
main coffeee bana deti hu.. she said and was about to move forward...and was about to bump into him.. once again...
she stopped and lowered her eyes...
she was trembling.. she was uncomfortable with him in this small kitchen...
and after whatever happened with her a minute before.. she was not able to face him...
hua kya hai tumhe??? he asked with a very firm voice...
m..main...main dupatta leke aati hu...
she said and ran out from the kitchen...
raghu shook his head and made himself a coffee and came out...

antara ran and came into her room.. she closed the door behind and sat on her bed... she was breathing hard...
she was not able to understand what was happening with her..
none of them ever behaved liked this...
why he came here.. did he really had some work or just to pick me up...she thought...
even if he came to pick me.. why is he behaving so strange...
he knew i was in kitchen.. he could have just ask me for water.. why did he do all that...

what did he do antara..?? he din't do anything..
it's just me imagining all those scenes... he only came and took a glass of water...
it's a small kitchen..she explained to herself...
but what if he saw me like that.. oh god.. no.. she closed her eyes in embarrassment
i think he din't.. otherwise he would have given me some expressions...
and what if he did and din't show it to me...
oh! no.. how will i face him now...

she was talking to herself.. when she heard her mother's voice...
antara beta...!!
ji mummy..!!
she opened the door... her mom smiled and asked her to go and sit with raghu...
beta wo itni door se tumhe lene aaye hai..
aur tum yahan aakar baith gayi ho..
jao unke pass baitho...
ji...
aur aap..??
main bhi aati hu...kuchh kaam hai mujhe..
ok...antara said and her mom left...
she straightened herself and took her dupatta..
she came out and saw him sitting with her father and talking about his work...
she noticed coffee in his hand and once again she felt embarrassed...
when she came there.. raghu looked at her...and took a sip of coffee intentionally to make her lowered her eyes...
humein kitni der mein niklana hai... she asked in a low voice..
bas 1/2 hr mein... raghu replied..
ji.. main ek baar saman dekh leti hu..
hmm..
aery beta.. itni jaldi kyun.. abhi to aap aaye hai..
thoda aur samay ruk jate..
balki aaj raat ruk jaiye...
ji papa.. par kal office hai..
beta humein khushi hoti agar aap rukte..
ji papa.. mujhe bhi...magar job ka to aap jante hai..
meanwhile antara got up to get her stuffs...
and he contd.. main jaldi aaunga is baar..
aur antara ko bhi le aaunga.. tab ruk jayenge ek do din..
ji beta.. jaroor aana..
hum log bhi yahan akele hi rah gaye hai...
antara ke bhai behan bhi bahar padhne gaye hai...
koi 2-3 mahine mein aate hai..
ji papa.. is baar aa jayenge hum...
aap fikr na kare...
aur akele lage to aap aa jaiye udhar..
wo bhi aapka apna ghar hai..
antara's father smiled and gave him blessings...
- - - - - "

mrs kaul came out side..
raghu bete..
ji mummy..
aapko antara bula rahi hai andar...
ji??? mujhe..??
haan.. use kuchh kaam hai...
raghu was surprised.. she never called him for anything.. not even at their own home..
he came inside.. she was sitting on the bed playing with her dupatta..
she looked nervous..
mummy kah rahi thi..tumne bulaya mujhe... he asked..
she looked above hearing his voice..
ji..!!
m sorry.. mujhe aapko bulana pada.. main chahti nahi thi.. magar papa k samne khud nahi bula sakti thi...
she was scared.. as she knew his temper.. they actually never talked much unless it was necessary...
its okay..!! he said.. tell me...
ji... aap plz bura mat maniyega... main kah rahi thi ki...
hmm..??
she lowered her eyes and spoke in barely audible voice...
kya hum ruk sakte hai aaj...
papa itna insist kar rahe the...
aur aaj mausam bhi kafi kharab hai..
mera man ghabra raha tha.... she said in very low voice...
raghu heard her and moved forward..
she took two steps back...
is kharab mausam mein akele aa sakti thi.. wo bhi bus se..
mere saath car mein jane se man ghabra hai?? he asked her in very firm voice...
nahi..!!!
nahi.. aap plz bura mat maniye.. mera wo matlab nahi tha..
aap sahi kah rahe hai..humein chalna chahiye...
she was about to turn and get her bag...
antara...he called her in a very soft voice...
ji.. she said and turned...
main bura nahi maan raha hu...
meri kal meeting h morning mein..
isliye jaana jaroori hai..
main next weekend aa jaunga..
tab ruk jaana...
she agreed and shook her head...
okay???? he asked once again..
ji..!!
hmm...

he came out...
mrs kaul was sad.. she asked raghu to have something..but he denied..
mummy.. its okay.. i'll come next time.. n then i'll eat whatever u would want..
this time i came to pick her.. we should leave on time.. otherwise it will get late..

after a few minutes.. they both left...


to be continued...
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loads of luv..
-akki


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Posted: 11 years ago
hey that was LONG,LOVELy updates,loved it so much,thanks for updating but plz updte IIH also eagerely waiting for that also
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update akki
right now i am in rantara land

update sooon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update..
loved it !!!!!! ❤️
Seriously raghu has fallen jn love nw...
loved d whole kitchen part 😉...
raghu caribg teasing antara n
she ws hell shocked n embarresed seeing raghu..
update soon akki..n thanks dear 😊...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update Akki 😊
Loved it very much
Continue soon

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