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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hareem27

Omg!! its so.emotional 😭 I've tears in my eyes 😭
Aww.. Raghu in coma and antu pregnant 😲
Thank god! Raghu is fine 😊
Aww..Rantara's child 😳 this is amazing!!
This ff is gonna end 😕 I'll miss it soo much 😭
Anyways thanks for the pm
And please give us some Rantara romance in the last part 😆


Hareem ,
thank you so much !!! FF is gonna end but I will be back with a bang in Prerna style..
Thanks again..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

Prerna First of all really like your name 🤗
Update key bare mein kya kahoon
It was mind blowing
What a twist yar ek tarak baby born dusri taraf Raghu ko hosh agaya
Im so happy for Raghu 😃
Mera to dil kar raha tha dance karo jab Raghu ko hosh aaya
Loved it
What a filmy update 😳
But next will be the last update
Im sad yar but you must keep writing
Love you 🤗


Nikki ,
Thank you so much !!
Love you !!! 🤗
Tere comments hamesha mere mood ko happy bana deti hain..
By the way, I love the fact that you like my name..😆
I will keep writing and will soon be back with a bang..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Serene ..
So beautifully u wrote the emotions of Raghu-Antara...
I am happy that finally everything is alright now...
Commendable buddy...
Waiting for last one...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nbw16

Serene ..
So beautifully u wrote the emotions of Raghu-Antara...
I am happy that finally everything is alright now...
Commendable buddy...
Waiting for last one...

Thank you so much !!! I will update the last one tonight !!..
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG...what an update 👏
loved it on the whole😳😳😳
Antara gave birth to a baby girl...awww...thats so cute...🥳
pls do update soon😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PurpleSunset

OMG...what an update 👏

loved it on the whole😳😳😳
Antara gave birth to a baby girl...awww...thats so cute...🥳
pls do update soon😉

Thank you so much !!! It means a lot to me..
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Posted: 11 years ago
woww!!!its so emotional n beautiful update prerna...😊
do good news....raghu is back ..he is all fine...😃antu suffered a lot!!..
i am so happy fr their baby girl.aww sho shweet...😳
this was second last part of story..😭
i loved this story a lot...😛
tfpm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

woww!!!its so emotional n beautiful update prerna...😊

do good news....raghu is back ..he is all fine...😃antu suffered a lot!!..
i am so happy fr their baby girl.aww sho shweet...😳
this was second last part of story..😭
i loved this story a lot...😛
tfpm😊

Love u suchi !!!! 🤗
Mere FF ko itna support karne ke liye thank you. Aur iske baad i'll be back with a bang.. very soon
Thank you again..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Guys,
My heart has become heavy while writing this update. I love all of you for your support to this FF. Thank you so much !! Thank you suchi, nikki , haya , kiret,rima, hina, ria , pampz, nazi786, nbw16, hareem27,Twinks,Purple sunset , Niyaz_Lover,sweetieswagata and all the others who have read my FF . Sorry for any of those of you whom I have missed.Love you all !!!
PART 19 :
Five years later -
"Papa , main aapse ek baat poochon?"asked a little girl with baby brown eyes looking like an angel descended on earth. "Haan ,bolo beta"said Raghu. "Aap mumma se kaise mile the ? Aur kab mile the"asked the girl . Antara looked towards Raghu waiting for his answer. "Main aapki mummy se market mein mila tha. Woh Kya hain na , aapki mummy ko maine Rs 20000 ke liye khareeda tha!"said Raghu with a smirk. "Raghu , chup raho"said Antara hitting him. "Kya kaha papa ? Mumma ko aapne 20000 rupees ke liye khareeda !! Par aap ek human ko kaise khareed sakte ho?"asked the little girl innocently. "Aapki mumma ek exclusive object hain. Unhe museum mein rakha gaya tha. "said Raghu pulling Antara's leg. "Mumma, kya aapko museum mein rakha gaya tha?"asked the little girl . "Nahi, Kashish ! Aapke papa aise hi mazaak kar rahe hain"said Antara smiling. "Nahi , main mazaak nahi kar raha hoon. Kashish beta , aapko meri baat par wishwaas hain?"asked Raghu. "Haan papa"said Kashish running towards Raghu and hugging him . "Ja Kashish , papa ki pari kahiki ! Mumma ke paas mat aana"said Antara smiling. "Kashish beta . Main mazaak kar raha hoon."said Raghu laughing. In the meantime Rukhsana and Machmach enter the hall. "Kashish beta , aaj hum aapke liye ghar pe pizza order kar rahe hain ."said Rukhsana. "Pizza !! Yay "said Kashish smiling.. "Bilkul apni maa pe gayi hain. Antara ko bhi pizza bahut pasand hain"said Raghu smiling. "Par tum aur Antara do dino ke liye vacation pe jaa rahe ho"said Machmach. "WHAT ?"said Antara and Raghu at the same time. "Haan, jabse Raghu coma mein gaya tha tabse tum dono kahi bahar nahi gaye the. Kashish ke paida hone ke baad tum dono uska dhyaan rakhne mein kahi bahar nahi jaa paye the. Abh Kashish paanch saal ki ho gayi hai aur inn do dino mein main aur Machmach uska dhyaan rakhenge"said Rukshana. "Par Rukhsana, usko hum aise chod kar kaise jaa sakte hain?"asked Antara. "Arre meri Yedi Behna !! Hum dono hain naa ! Uska dhyaan rakhenge"said Machmach. "Par hum do dino ke liye jaa kaha rahe hain ?"asked Raghu. "Mumbai. Mumbai ki basti mein"said Machmach. "Kya? Itne saalo baad hum dono udhar waapas ja rahe hain"asked Antara. "Haan ! Humne flight ki tickets book karwa li hain. Kal subah ki flight hain."said Rukhsana. "Yeh Kya Rukhsana ? Pehle toh inform kar lena chahiye tha na ?"said Raghu. "Surprise tha Raghu . Pehle kaise batati ?"said Rukhsana.
"Kashish beta , mumma kal jaa rahi hain. Come fast and give mumma a big tight hug"said Antara. Kashish runs and gives Antara a big hug. "Papa bhi aa rahe hain"said Raghu joining the hug.
NEXT MORNING :
Antara and Raghu depart for there flight and leave Delhi for two days. "Raghu itne saalo baad hum waapas jaa rahe hain!"said Antara. "Haan Antara, itne saalo baad... Abhi udhar sab theek ho gaya hain. Dayamayi aur Satya abhi jail ke andar hain. Uss Din jab Satya ne mujhe chaaku maara tab tumne usse goli maari thi. Accha hua ki police waalon ne chaaku par Satya ki ungliyon ke nishaan dekh liye. Uski wajah se Satya ko unhone pakad liya "said Raghu. "I didn't know that sending Dayamayi to jail would be that easy. While I was pregnant I found out that Dayamayi had an internal rivalry with her fellow terrorists. I sent Machmach back to Mumbai while Rukhsana stayed back with me here in Delhi to take care of me. Machmach helped the police in capturing Dayamayi. Thode dino mein Satya ko phaasi ki saza milne waali hain. I am very happy that my parent's murderers are finally getting punished"said Antara.
Once they reached Mumbai , both of them were feeling very nostalgic.
"Raghu , main yaha rehti thi . Aur tum Naik Sadan mein. Naik Sadan ab pura khaali hi gaya hain. Dayamayi, Satya sab jail mein chale gaye"said Antara. "Haan. Uss Balcony se main tumhe dekhta tha."said Raghu . After walking for more steps they reached the Kalyana Mandap . "Aur idhar main tumse chup chup kar dance practice karti thi"said Antara giggling. "Aur mujhe tumhaare ghoongru ki aawaaz bahut irritate karti thi."said Raghu. "I can't believe that you ripped of my skin while taking of the ghoongru! How rude"said Antara. "Uske liye maine sorry bola tha na. Tere kaaran main jungle mein kho gaya tha uss din"said Raghu. "Oh Hello , jungle mein main bhi tumhaare saath thi. Uss din maine vrat bhi rakha tha !! Tum bahut gandhe the"said Antara. "Agar Gandha tha toh mujhse shaadi kyun ki?asked Raghu. "Kyunki mujhe ek gandhe se pyaar ho gaya tha"said Antara smiling. Saying this she hugged Raghu, her perfect half. "Tumhe pata hain ki jab tum aaji ko gaana suna rahi thi .."said Raghu. "Kaunsa woh Kashmiri gaana?"asked Antara "Haan wahi. Tab main tumhaari aawaaz mein kho gaya tha. I loved that tune that I started playing it on my mouth organ"said Raghu. "Aur tum roz raat ko mouth organ bajate the. I loved that tune too !! Tumhaare mouth organ ke bina mujhe neend nahi aati thi. At first , I didnt know you were the one who played it , but when you confessed I got to know. I was hell shocked... !!!"said Antara. "Haan tere chehre pe dikh raha tha. I remember the time in the church. You told me about the mouth organ player without knowing it was me. You asked me so innocently if whether I knew the person who played the mouth organ or not"said Raghu. Antara started blushing out of embarrassment ."Oh god !! I was such a fool"said Antara. "Afterall , you are my Yedi Miss Kaul na .."said Raghu smirking.Saying this those two kept recollecting all their memories and spent the entire two days in the basti. They thought to bring Kashish to this basti after a few years. They were loving it in the basti. Antara at times got a little emotional remembering her mom but Raghu managed to distract her. So this was their love story . Full of complications but at the end , they were together. Afterall, they are Do Dil Ek Jaan. Antara too kept her promise , that she still loves him ... and always will.

THE LAST PART... PLZ DO COMMENT.. I want to know how you liked/disliked it.. 😊


Edited by abhiyaswaron - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Congozz fr completion of ur story...👏🥳
it was such a happy ending!😃..kashish so beautiful name...😛
yup!! antu to museum mein rakhne layak hi hai...😆
aww mm n rukku has done such a fab job they r true friends...👏
rantara forever...😳 😳 😳 😳
rantara on naik wadi..hmm..purani yaadein tazaa ho gayin...😳.
u recalled all memories so perfectly😊,i loved this FF...n i know u will come back with a bang!!.😆.with another story..come soon...thanks fr writing beautiful story on rantara...
here is something for u.hope u like it...







Edited by Tsuchi - 11 years ago

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