Part 19 on Pg 43 ..FF : I still love him..and always will

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abhiyaswaron

@abhiyaswaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: sweetieswagata
OMG what an update...
iss kamina sattu toh...arghhh
hope raghu kills him soon
continue asap :)

I'll try updating today 😉

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abhiyaswaron

@abhiyaswaron

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Sorry for the late update !!!

PART 10:

Raghu saw his Antara immediately collapse on the ground. He could feel her pain and that was killing him. "Miss Kaul, Please get up !! Antara...!"Raghu said patting Antara's cheeks while Antara was unconscious.He put a couple of drops of water on her face to wake her up and he did succeed. She woke up ."Miss Kaul,tu theek toh hai"Raghu asked worryingly. Antara let out a laugh. "Raghu tum bhi kya sawaal pooch rahe ho? Main obviously theek hoon!Raghu , chalo na mere school jane ka waqt ho gaya hai. Ma'am daategi agar mein late gayi toh."said Antara. Raghu was hell shocked "Miss Kaul, yeh tu kya keh rahi hai?"Raghu asked. "Arre ! Maine toh apna homework bhi nahi kiya. Abh mujhe punishment milegi !"Antara said making a sad face."A-AAANNTTTARRA ! Hosh Mein Aa !"Raghu shouted with tears in his eyes. "Raghu , Mujhe school ke liye late nahi hona. Tum mujhe chod rahe ho ki nahi? Agar nahi chod rahe ho toh main apne aap chale jaoongi"said Antara. Antara was getting out of control and was about to leave. "Antara ruk ja !!Mereko tere teacher ne phone kar ke bol diya hai ki school ek mahine ke liye closed hai. Vacations shuru ho gaye hai tere.."said Raghu trying to handle the situation. "Sacchi? Yay ! Vacations. Ab main bahut masti karoongi"said Antara with a smile on her face leaving Raghu stunned."Accha abhi mujhe bahut neend aa rahi hai. School nahi hai isliye main abhi sone jaa rahi hoon"said Antara. Antara went to the bed and lay down. "Raghu ! Chadar dalo"said Antara. Raghu went with tears in his eyes and put the blanket over her."Thank You"Antara said with a smile. Raghu was heart-broken to see Antara loosing her mental balance. He kissed her forehead and leaned over her to give her a tight hug. Antara went into a deep sleep within 5 minutes. Raghu couldn't help himself. He started weeping his heart out. "Why ? Kyun Bhagwan kyun?"Raghu asked God. "Aap ek ladki ke saath itna sab kuch kaise hone de sakte hain? I trusted you ! Antara ne apne papa ko khoya hain aur abhi usne apni mumma ko bhi kho diya ?Why ? She has lost her mental balance now. She was anyways not in a good state when I was not there with her. Why is there so much of tragedy in her life? Mein usko aise nahi dekh sakta. It hurts me"said Raghu crying.

"SATYA NAIK !! Main tumhe abhi nahi chodunga ! I WILL NOT SPARE YOU ! You have hurt my Antara and you don't know how much you are going to have to pay. I WILL JUST KILL YOU !"Raghu said in anger.

After a few hours :

Antara woke up from her sleep and looked like a perfect angel without any tension and stress in life , just like a small child. Raghu was hoping that she would be back to normal by now. "Raghu,mujhe tumhaare saath khelna hain.."Antara said."Raghu was very upset to see that she wasn't back to normal."Antara, yeh tum kya bol rahi ho?"Raghu asked. "Main apna homework raat ko kar loongi"Antara said . "Antara , tumhari age kya hai ?"Raghu asked. "Main 7 years ki hoon"Antara said with a smile. "ANTARA !! Please !! Come back to normal. Mujhe Meri Miss Kaul wapas chahiye"said Raghu pleading her to come back to normal. "Pehle catch me" said Antara. Antara started running all around the hotel room. "Antara please, Bhaagna band kar"said Raghu crying.

TO BE CONTINUED...

Kaise thi ? I have the entire story decided already . This is going to be a long FF 😉 .

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

i liked the update!

bt...antara lost her mental balance...oh no!! feeling so bad fr rantara...😭

wht will raghu do nw?hw he will handle antara and bring her back to normal

thanks fr pm😊

Edited by Tsuchi - 11 years ago

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gargi21

@gargi21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Omg!!! Antara lost her mental bal...

Shit yaar n 7 yrs of age...dats too small...

Plzzz continue soon...

It getting very interesting... :) ;)

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abhiyaswaron

@abhiyaswaron

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: Tsuchi
😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
i liked the update!
bt...antara lost her mental balance...oh no!! feeling so bad fr rantara...😭
wht will raghu do nw?hw he will handle antara and bring her back to normal
thanks fr pm😊

Raghu will do anything for Antara. These difficulties will make their love stronger.. 😊

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abhiyaswaron

@abhiyaswaron

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: gargi21
Omg!!! Antara lost her mental bal...
Shit yaar n 7 yrs of age...dats too small...
Plzzz continue soon...
It getting very interesting... :) ;)

Antara is under immense shock and therefore she has lost her mental balance. l'll try continuing asap 😊

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Hina Kamran

@honeybees22

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#167

I was eating and drinking while reading ur update and the part when antu talked abt school I choked m still coghing I got the biggest shock ever

pls cont asap

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abhiyaswaron

@abhiyaswaron

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: honeybees22
I was eating and drinking while reading ur update and the part when antu talked abt school I choked m still coghing I got the biggest shock ever
pls cont asap

LOL!! You shouldn't eat or drink while reading my update 🤣. I will try continuing as soon as possible and thanks 4 ur support 😊

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bokul

@bokul

Master

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#169

i feel so bad for antara prerna

but i did not understand 1 thing

raghu was not her school friend

he met her her when she came to mumbai

so why is she talking to him ?

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abhiyaswaron

@abhiyaswaron

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#170

i feel so bad for antara prerna

but i did not understand 1 thing

raghu was not her school friend

he met her her when she came to mumbai

so why is she talking to him ?

/QUOTE]Antara has completely lost her mental balance !! She is not in her senses and is therefore talking like that . Raghu was not her school friend 😊 . She is completely under shock and doesn't know what she is saying..

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