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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Wow yaar sab kuch superfast xpress ki tarah tha!!
D update ws lovely nd ws a treat to read.
OMG!!! ☺️The liplock- how much I wished smthing like dis to happen in d show.
Yeh DM kabhi sudhar nhi sakti kya???😡
The precap ws awww...
Ab jaldi se nxt update bhi likh do. I'm dyind fr d it.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
richu its really good..
pls write next part soon..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 4
It was now 2 days that raghu has not been in Naik sadan. Antara was feeling restless. She was fighting with her own feelings that why she is missing raghu.

Daya Mai notice this that Antara is missing raghu badly. She don't want that raghu take in place of her heart as she know that this satya wont torlet and this naik sadan will become kurushetra of Mahabharat.

Daya Mai Ask Satya to take antara out. Satya know that she is missing raghu but he was not feeling jeoules instead of jeoulsey he was feeling happy that now antara and raghu will fall in love and then he will snatch antara from raghu. He was knowing that raghu has shifted to his friend Machmach kholi.

So he planeed some thing and ask antara to come out with him. After having dinner satya and antara was coming back but suddenly their car broke down.Satya Ask Antaara to stay in the car as its raining heavily outside. He will bring mechanic with him.

On the other hand Raghu and machmach were sitting inside one tea corner and enjoying the rain.
MM_ bhai aise mausam mein to bas mirchi ki pakori hone chayie chai ke saath
Raghu was not listening hima s he was thinking about his kiss with antara
MM_ bhai ,bhai . He come near to raghu and touch his shoulder and again says- BHai
raghu come too his sense and see in puzzled manner to Machmach
MM_ bhai kahan khoye rehte ho aaj kal kya hogay hai tere ko chal tere ko who matka wala mazar par chal tere jhar phor karwo/. Lagta hai koi chudial tere upar chad gayi hai.
Raghu- kya bakbak karta hai. Chal mein jaata ho tu peeche se aa jana
MM_ bhai barish mein koi bheeg rahe ho sun chata to lete jaa
Bur raghu doesn't listen him and start walking towards the road.

Antara was sitting inside the car. Suddenly one man come and knock the window.
Antara looked that person and open the window od car.
That person take out the pistol and ask her to come out the car.
She got scared and come out. At the time she come out the car 5 more person joined that person.

First man- kya item hai bhai. Chal aaj raat ke liye to solid cheez mil gayi
Antara was not comfortable as they were luking and laughing .she look here and there and suddenly she push one man aside and start running.

Antara was running continuously and she was not finding any single person or place where she can hide from that goons.
Suddenly she saw park and she start running towards that park.
She hide herself behind the tree. She was breathing properly. She was thinking now what to do how to contact satya as she has left her mobile in the car. .
Goons also come inside the park and start searching her. One of goon she one shdow behind the tree. He finger that side and ask every 1 to go there by eyes.
Goons come in front of antara . she start screaming and shouting "HELP HELP'
One man- ab kahan jayigi ab to tere se doori bardast nahi ho raha hai. Bhayio pehle no to mere hai.

"SILENT HO JAYE NAHI TO MEIN VIOLENT HO JAOGA"

All look towards that voice. All men start scaring as it was none other RAGHUNATH NAIK.
All says bhai galti de de , hame maafi de do . ab hum kabhi aise nahi karege. Antara was shocked to see those goons were so horriable before few mintues now they are folding hand in front of raghu.
Raghu give them very angry look. They move back and left the park

Antara close her eyes for some time. Now she was almost relax and open her eyes. Raghu was even now standing at gate of park. It was raining heavily but even she was not blinking her eyes. Tears was coming out of eyes. . she start running and hug raghu tightly. She was crying badly but same time she was telling "raghu tum kahan chale gaye they. Tumne kaha than a ki tumne mujhse dosti ki hai aur mera saath kabhi nahi chodege. Phir tum kaise mujhe chod kar chalegaye. Tum jhoote ho. Tumne mera biswas toda. Dost ban kar dosti nahi nibhayi"

Raghu now start hugging her back and says mS. Kaul chup ho jaye mein kahin nahi gaya tujhe chod kar. Dekh tujhe maine kuch hone nahi diya. And he tighten his grip. MS. Kaul aaj ek aur wada karta ho ki tujhe kabhi nahi chod kar jaoga.

Suddenly satya come and see them hugging. He come near to them and says
Raghu yeh kya ho raha hai apni bhabhi se pyar

Antara and raghu get away from each other . and see satya- antara little bit get scared and hold raghu hand tightly. Satya notice this and says
Jaan tumne shayd galat hand ko pakra hai . mein yahan ho .
Antara- Nahi satya maine aaj zindagi mein pehli baar sahi haath pakra hai.

Precap:- Rantara confession
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
i liked it very much
A great rantara moment ❤️
Thanks👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
awesome richu...
waiting for next part now... rantara confession..
Edited by SweetiePie25 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
rhey..woww! yaar antu samajh gyi jaldi😳..nice..😊
Edited by Tsuchi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
Thank you 😊 lovely update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
yaar richu ye toh dhamaka tha,,,, too good... gunde bhag gaye😆... ek baat bata kahin sattu ne un gundo ko to nahin bheja😲
jo bhi ho acha hi huya😆
awsome chapter⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
wow richgu this is really good
pls cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
Very good update...
Tum gusay mein satya kay khilaf bohat acha lekhing...
I loved it..
Yay antara ko akal aa hi gai...
Thanx for the pm...
I m excited for the precap..
Update soon and pm me..

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