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Lovely update rachna great work 👏
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Lovely update... Seriously em missing all these scenes alot...
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very nice dear abh to jee bhar ke tera os ka maza bhi nahi le pati ...but it was fantabulous... still going through shock ...
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wah wah wah..kya tareef karu tumhaari main! Kya mast idea tha...khoon se maang bhardi! kinna sona update tha...update soon & thanks for the pm!!
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Part 6

Raghu was getting call by call from antara but he was ignoring her call. atlast he picked and says

MS. Kaul kya hai dekh nahisakti kaam par ho
Antara- Raghu papa mummy aaye hai
Raghu- to acchi baat hai unka sar kha mera koi kha rahe ho
Antara- papa mummy ko mera jawab chayie
Raghu- kis bare mein
Antara- mere shadi ke faisle ke bare mein
Raghu- to suna de na ki sahib se shadi karna chahti ho
Antara- Raghu mujhe tumse shadi karna chati ho
Raghu got surprised and says Dekh MS. Kaul yeh teri khopri ho gayi hai kharab. lagta hai tujhe Mumbai ka muasam ne bimar kar diya hai
Antara- haan mein bimar ho gayi ho aur tumhare pyar ki dava chayie mujhe

Raghu cut the phone and throw the mobile to the ground
MM_ bhai kiska gussa ab is mobile par nikala. chal phir ek naya mobile lene padega. ey pakaya koimast naya model ka mobile jisme photo aur kahe to logo se baat kahe to wahts up ho le aa bhai ke liye

MM- bhai kya hua tujhe kuch dino se paresan lag raha hai
Raghu- yeh MS. kaul ne pagal bana kar rakha hai
MM- kya who yedi ne lekin kya kiya usne
Raghu- kehti hai mere se pyar karti hai , arrey sahib usko pasand karte ha mai se milane aaya hai aur yedi mujhse
MM_ bhai tum bhi paaasand karte ho
Raghu give him angry look.
MM- arrey bhai mere matlab jab tere mann mein nahi hai to kahe ko tension lena. sahib sambhal lega
Raghu- rakshas hai . dekha nahi toofani raat mein ms. kaul ko akele chod diya tha. who kya sambhale ga zindagi bar.raat raat bar gayab rehte hai. kuch hosh nahi kya kaam ho raha hai aur tu kehte hai ki sahib sambhale ga
MM- tu koi chinta kar raha hai . teri MS. Kaul ne khud pasand kiya hai usko
Raghu- pata nahi uske saath Mumbai aayi aur kehti hai mujhe pyar karti hai

At NAik Sadan

Dr. akul- so meri beti ko kaise laga Mumbai
Geeta kaul- arrey shayad pasand nahi aaya dekho kasie utra hua chera ha mere beti ka. kya hua antara
Antara- Maa kuch nahi bas kisi ka jawab ka intezaar hai
Dr kaul- kiska beti
Antara- papa Raghu ka
Dr. kaul- Raghu kon, tum to satya ko pasand karti ho na
Antara- papa Raghu se milne ke baad pata chala kisi ko pasand karna aur kisi ko pyar karne ka antar
Geeta- tu hamari beti ab badi ho gayi hai. chalo accha hai. tumhe zaindagi khatna hai tumhe decide karna hai
Dr. KAul- lekin yeh Raghu kon hai
Satya enter the room when Dr kaul was asking this
Satya- Raghu hamre ghar ka naukar hai
Antara- nahi tumhara bhai hai who. MAi ne tum dono ko apna beta man kar pala hai
Satya- beta banana or real beta mein antar ahota ai antara ji
Antara- lekin dil yeh antara nahi janta. maine tu us insaan ko pasand kiya jo dil se accha hai. he is pure soul.
Satya- to kya mein kharab ho
Antara- maine aise nahi bola ki tum kharab ho maine yeh kaha ki mujhe tunse zayada insaan who laga.

Satya leave the room

At Night

Raghu come back to the Naik sadan and he saw antara waiting for him on terrace
Raghu- MS. kaul tu yahan
Antara- haan jawab lene aayi ho
Raghu- kaise jawab ms. kaul mein tere se pyar nahi karta samjhi
Antara- to pyar nahi karte to mujhe bhag koi rahe ho kaho
Raghu- mein tumse nahi apne kaam ke pass jata ho
Antara- Raghu meri ankho mein dekh kar kaho mujhse pyar nahi karte.
Raghu see her eyes. it was full of tears . it was making him restless. he cant see antara in this pain but he was controlling his feeling
Raghu- lo tumhari ankho mein dekhkar kehta ho tumse pyar nahi karta
antara tears drop fom her eyes. this make Raghu more restles . he wipe her tears.
antara- pehle anshu dete ho aur phir poochte bhi ho
Raghu- tumhare ankhoo mein ansoo nahi dekh sakta mein and he turn back
antara hug him from back and says to ansh koi de rahe ho in ankhoo ko . keh koi nahi dete mujhse pyar karte ho
Raghu turn around and pull her hair and says tumhe ek baar samj mein nahi aati ki mujhe tumse pyar nahi karta.
antara- mujhe dard dekar koi aone aap ko aur dukhe kar rahe ho
Raghu leave her hair and hit his hand to the wall
antara- koi itna dard de rahe ho apne aap ko. thik hai dard dek ar pyar chupa rahe ho apna to thik mujhe dard mein dekh kar to pyar ka izhaar karoge

Antara start moving towards the cot and pick knife from fruit basket which was lying there and cut her hand.
Raghu saw this and ask her to stop but she again cut her hand
Raghu this time come and take knife from her. he was very much furious. he pull antara towards himself and give her angry luk. he take our handkerchief from his hand which he always tie in his wrist
he tie her hand then ask her
Raghu- tum mujhse pyar koi karti ho bolo
antara- tum ho hi itne pyare ki koi bhi tumse pyar kar sakta hai.
Raghu- accha yeh batao kya karo gi mujhe se pyar kar ke. is naik sadan ki naukar ki bahu ban kar
antara- bas tumse pyar hi karo gi
Raghu- pyar se zindagi nahi chalti ms. kaul. meri koi aukat nahi bas raat din mai ke hokum par chalta ho. raat din maut ka saaya hai mujh par.
antara- kal maroge, parso maroge, ek week mein ek month mein . jab bhi maaro lekin jitna din zinda ho mujhe apne saath le kar chalo. mujhe koi farq nahi padta ki tum kab mar rahe ho ya tum kya karte ho. lekin pls jabtak ho apne zindagi mein mujhe shamil kar lo.

Raghu was surprised ki who jitna din zinda hai uske saath jeena chati hai.

Raghu come near to her and pull her towards him by pulling her waist. now she was very near to him.
Raghu first kiss her forehead and says- mere se itnapyar karti hai ki mere liye yeh haath cut kar diya aur to aur mein jitna din zinda ho utna din mere saath jeena chati hai. pagal ho
antara- haan tumhare pyar mein

Raghu take a deep breathe and close his eyes. he then turn back and ask antara to leave.

antara- Raghu mujhe jawab do mujhe s pyar karte ho ya nahi

Raghu kal subah tumhe mein bata doga pls abhi jao

antara was shocked but he decide to leave.

Next Day

Dr kaul , Geeta Kaul, DM, satya, Antara and Raghu were sitting in drawing room.

Dr kaul- so antara tumhara jawab kya hai
Antara- mein kisi ka jawab ka intezar kar rahi ho
DM give luk to Raghu . Raghu close his eyes and take a long breathe

DM- ask kiska
Antara- Raghu ka
DM ask Raghu - Raghu tumhara jawab kya hai Raghu
Raghu come forward and take antara hand in his hand
Raghu- antara 'WILL YOU MARRY ME"


Sorry thoda rubbish update ke liye. lekin kuch samaj mein nahi aa raha tha isliye

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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
i just loved it.. richu. .. it was very good..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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No yaar it was very nice...luved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you . Very nice 😊
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Haye 😳 mar dala rachna 😳 lovely update its awesum dear 👏 pls continue asap 😊 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hayeee love it u gave a smile on my face after so long thankx richu🤗
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