RANTARA-THIS IS NOT THE END (FF)EPILOGUE PAGE 47 - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Twinks..

Omg i read part 10 11 n 12 in one go n i must say ur writing speed is faster than my reading speed lovely concept excellent updates m a huge fan of this ss thnx 4 pm 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for all ur comments i will soon update the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: amfi123

thanks for all ur comments i will soon update the next part


Till when... I m waiting!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg yaar this is eally good i cant belive it
u story it really good loved it sooo much
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Posted: 11 years ago
my lik button is not working so i couldnt lik ur updates 10 11 n 12 ...read it in one go ...awesome ...u hv written each n every emotion so beautifully ...specially whn Antara finally speaks her heart out to Raghu ...each n every word were so correct so heart touching ...i felt if i had been there in Anatra's place my situation wd be exactly the same ...n the same feelings n reaction wd hv come to my mind ...i can not explain how wonderfully u hv drawn Antara's character n her situation ...n yess Antara is lucky ..she had friend like Armaan in her life ...not everyone is that lucky u know ...once again i thank you for writing this wonderful story ...and wll be waiting for ur next update eagerly ...n i lik this that for ur updates one doesnt have to wait tooo long as u feel our minds n update quiet soon ...thankyou for that also ...keep writing more ...god bless you ...😃 luv u
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey it was amazing..
Antara gng US.. pls no..
I understand she is angry...
Raghu bechara..!!
Update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg antara going to us koi gaal nai bhej dey i will welcome her but what about raghu 😕

Lovely lovely lovely update thanks for pm do continue soon 😊😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
eagerly waiting for the next part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a heart touching part. I am sorry i couldn't comment for other parts. It was just amazing.
Do update the next part soon.
Do pm me.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 13:



5 yrs Later:

A very big day for NAIK CONSTRUCTION as dere MD has won d Best Businessman of d year Award third tym in a row. Its been just 4 years since he's handling d business nd no one has reached to dis Level in dis much Short span of tym where he is. He has became d Role Model for d Youngsters but yet dere was something about him which no one can predict. Its not easy for anyone to impress him. He needs Perfection in everything. One mistake nd u r out of d office. Despite of being his ruthless nature he was still respected by every staff of his office nd derefore dey arranged for a small celebration for their MD. Everything was perfect but yet dey scared wid his Reaction as he don't like Staff getting personal.

Alarm of d Office rings dat indicates of his Arrival. Everyone started rushing here nd there, taking their places checking their ties, arranging d important files.

Nd dere he arrives in his black Mercedes along wid his Bodyguards. A Young man in his 20s, determined, Passionate, Rich, Powerful nd Extra ordinary Sense of Business. D rivals have to think twice before dey can plot against him. He has climbed all the peak in his career & achieved the heights in business field that no one could.He gets wat he wants. He is RAGHU NAIK, MD OF NAIK'S CONSTRUCTION

As he entered inside his office he saw d arrangements made by his staff in honor of him. His hands turned into fists in anger as inspite of being Warned by him also his staff still getting personal wid him. He was about to Yell at dem wen something stopped him

"If someone do something for you whole-heartedly wid all dere Love, den you should appreciate dem even if u dnt like it also rather den Discouraging dem"

He closes his eyes remembering d words dat she use to say to him. He takes a Deep breath nd looks at d faces of his staff members. Dey were extremely Terrified nd scared seeing him in Anger. some of dem have even Frowned also wen dey felt dat dere Efforts r all waste, dey cant make dere Boss happy. Just den all of dem saw him smiling silently appreciating for dere Efforts. Well dat was a site dat dey usually never sees. He looked at d calm faces of dere staff nd smiled nd to their surprise he spoke softly to dem

Raghu: Thank u. Thank u everyone for all ur Efforts. I really Appreciate wat u all had done for me. Its because of hard Work of u all dat NAIK CONSTRUCTION has reached to dis level nd m getting honored like dis. I hope u all will support me like dis only in d future also. Nd for dat u all need to get back to ur respective works. So get back to work now.

He said nd walked straight to his cabin nd rested on his chair. He made a call to his secretary asking her to cancel all his meetings for today as he needed to spend sometime wid himself today. He closed his eyes nd rested his head on his chair just to get lost in her memories.

Raghu's Monologue:

I closed my eyes remembering her wondering hw she still managed to control me nw also even not being wid me. Its been 5 yrs since she left me but it seems like it was yesterday only wen she walk out from my life saying "I cant trust u anymore". Dose were d last words dat she said to me nd den walks out from my lyf leaving a scar on my heart but dat was nothing to d comparison to d wound I gave to her. she was right hw can she trust me anymore wen I myself cant trust myself anymore. I broke d heart of d girl who had always truly loved me, forgetting all her past dat she was having she just loved me whole heartedly nd in return I only gave her pain which has teared her apart. She is not wid me today but still I feel her presence around me. Her appreciation is dere in my every success, she was dere to console me wenever I fail to perform. She was dere to share my happiness, her permission is dere in every decision I take. Just like today wen I was about to yell at staff she stopped me from doing so. She has never gone far away from me. Hw can she wen she's still in my heart

But still my Heart Bleeds. Still my Heart cries. Still my heart is craving just to hear her voice once again, just to touch her once again, just to see her smile once again, just to see dat Love, dat trust in her eyes once again which I had broken, just to hug her once again to keep her closer to me not to let go away from me. I know d punishment m getting staying away from her is truly deserving infact I deserve more den dat. I deserve d worst punishment for hurting d Angel dat holds my hand in d darkness.

(Raghu's Monologue ends)

"Raghu, u doesn't care for me nw, but u'll realize my importance once I would be no longer in ur lyf!!!!!!"

Dese r d words dat always buzz in his mind wenever he think of her actually dere is not a single moment wen he don't think of her. but she was right he thought. He really didn't care for her wen she was wid him nd nw wen she has gone from his lyf he realize her importance, hw much she mean to him. he has lost everything since d day she walked out from his lyf. He punishes himself everyday for hurting her. His inside is on Fire nd he knows dat only she can relieve him, only she can sooth him from his pain.

He opens d drawer nd takes out her Photo nd smiled. Dis was his only companion since she left him. He talks to her photo Everytym like she was in real. If any outsider sees him like dis den definitely consider him as a Mad person but he didn't care for anyone all he cares for his Antara. He closed his eyes once again nd again his mind drifted towards d memories of 5 years ago wen she left him.

******~~~~~~Flashback~~~~~********

He fell on his knees, closing his eyes in pain. Tears have started falling from his eyes. Hid Life, his only Love has walk out from his life. His heart shattered into pieces wen she said dat she cant trust him anymore. He don't know to whom he blame; himself or d Circumstances dat forced him to break her heart. He cursed himself for being dis much immature dat he breaked her heart. Machmach nd Ruksana tried to console him but dat couldn't help him. He slowly gets up nd starting moving outside. Ruksana tries to stop him but Machmach holds her hand gesturing her to leave him alone dis tym. He needs tym to absorb everything.

He was walking lost in silent road wid a heavy heart not sure where he's heading to. He was just walking. He was unaware of d whole world. His whole world has shattered in front of his eyes nd only he was responsible for dis. hw badly he wished dat all dis turned out to be a nightmare but unfortunately its not. The words of Antara were still echoing in his ears while he was walking

"Y it was only about u Raghu? Ur Feelings, ur Love, ur care, ur confusion, ur guilt, ur forgiveness"

"in sab me main kaha hoon Raghu?"

"Y had u came to my lyf Raghu? Y? I haven't called u, I had accepted d fact dat dere is no one in d world who can love me, who can care for me nd my feelings den y had u came nd given me false hopes dat u love ,me, dat u care for me but d fact was u also turned to be like others."

"U dnt care about me Raghu u had never cared about me. U had always taken me for granted Raghu. Everytym u just cared about u nd only u."

"Tumne mujhse Friendship kisi ke kehne pe ki thi, Mujhe Propose kisi se pooch ke kiya tha? Nahi na? To fir kaise kisi ke kehne pe yeh Faisla le liya dat dere was never Love between us".

"Kaise insaan ho tum Raghu jo khud apne hi Dil ki baat nahi samajh sakte?"

"Aaj keh diya aaj ke Baad kabhi mat kehna ki Trust me. I cant trust u anymore nw Raghu."

Nd as he remembers d last statement given by her he broke down completely. He fell on his knees in d middle of d road nd cried his heart out. D fact dat Antara dnt trust him has teared him apart. He remembered all d moments he spend wid her.

"ANTARA!!!!!!" he screamed out loudly like it'll help him to reach his voice to her ears.

"Y? Y I did that? Y did I broke her heart? She always gave Love to me nd I just gave her pain in return. Antara I m Sorry pls come back. I promise I'll never hurt u again. I promise I'll never let u cry again. Pls give me one last chance. I LOVE YOU ANTARA PLS COME BACK."

He said nd broke down in tears completely. It started raining but he didn't move an inch. It seems he lost d track of tym. All he could think is Antara, her pain. He hates himself for being dis much mean. He hates himself for being dis much immature.

He don't know hw many seconds, hw many minutes, hw many hours he sat over dere crying until Machmach came in search of him nd take him to his home forcefully.

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