||COLLEGE DAYS- SS || updated pg 46 || - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Omg lovely update, plx do continue soon this time 😊Pm me as well
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
guys...thank you so much for all the comments i have reached 100 my best ever! thnxs alot guys
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
ohh wow..i could actually imagine Raghu with an open mouth..so cute! 😳😳😳
Loved your update..i can't wait to know what Raghu's answer is! ufff would love it if he says Antara ☺️ LOL😆 Think I am racing ahead!

--> Thanks for the pm and please update soon! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
very well written...
perfect... just read the whole of it now...
raghu gunda but has a heart...
antara is very sweet...
dosti hogai yayyy... pyar bhi hojayai ga...
now what is raghu answer on love?
please do pm me when u update...
i m waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
wow. hello999..
amazing..
antu ka love ka defination was awesome..
pls write soon.. want to hear raghu's defination of love...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
PART 6

Raghu shut his mouth and was going to say something but the teacher called him

Teacher: Raghu tum batao Pyaar kya hota hai...What is love?

Raghu: Wo..ummm...

Antara just got comfortable to hear his answer!

Raghu:(Laughs)..Pyar..Pyar sirf ek bakwas ka emotion hota hai

Antaras mouth dropped open..

Raghu:Pyar sirf ek khel hota hai...(His voice choked)...Pyar hameshacheena jata hai...Kabhi

nahi ek jagah par tikda.Aur yeh Antara khud ek YEDI hai...Humay kya samjai ghi?

He sits down and looks at Antara who is giving him a death stare...The teacher starts talking

again.

Raghu:*wo...

Antara:*Mujhay tumse baat nahi karni!*

Raghu: KYU?

Antara: *SHHH*

Raghu: *KYU...Usnay apun ko pucha pyar ka aur mehnay bata diya*

Anatara: *Tum ek YEDI kay saat kyu baat kar rahay ho?*

The bell rings and eveyone heads for the door..Antara races in front of everyone..geets signals

to Raghu to go pacify her..He follows her and takes her to the corner.

Antara: KYA HAI...Mujhay tumse koi baat nahi karni

Raghu: Leykin mero karni hai!

Antara: TOH? meh kya karu?

Raghu: Tu sun meriy baat!

Antara: Nahi sunu ghi!

She tries to walk away but instead raghu pins her to the wall.

Raghu: Jab meh baat kar raha hu to tu sunay ghi! SAMJHI

Antara just nodded as she knew Raghu's rage

Raghu: Haa..mehnay tumhay yedi bola..kyunki tum ek yedi ho!..Aur hamesha roho ghi!

Antara: Kaisay admi ho tum...Phelay yedi boltay ho...phir sorry bhi nahi boltay!

Raghu: Apun kisi say bhi maafi nahi mangtah!

Antara: Jaisay Larki kay saath dosti nahi kar tay ho?

Raghu: Tu khaas hai!

They shared an eyelock..They broke their eyelock by a car horn from outside. Antara smiled and

was going to leave.

Raghu: Miss Kaul..

Antara looks back...Raghu slides his fingers through his hair and says sorry while

winking...Antara gives a cute smile...They share another eyelock

Raghu:Abb chalay..MM aur Geet wait karahay hogay.

They both headed to the canteen..While walking they started talking and laughing..Everyone was

staring at them...as they had seen Raghu with a girl for the first time...They all knew that

there is something special about her...They reached the canteen...and sat down.

MM: *Bhai kya huwa?..maang ghi?*

Raghu:*HAI*

MM: *Kaisay...*

Raghu: *Maafi manghi..aur kya*

MM: KYA!

Antara: KYA huwa..sab thik to hai nah

MM: HAI..Wo bhai nay tumsay maafi manghi?

Antara:HAI..KYU?

MM: Kutah andhay day..aur raghu bhai maffi mannghay..yeg dono kabhi nahi ho saktay!

Raghu: Leykin ho chuka hai!

MM: (to raghu) *Bhai..Yeh larki tum ko badal rahiy hai)

These 7 words bugged Raghu alot...all day...Soon college ended..they all headed out...MM went to

drop off Geet..while Raghu dropped of Antara...They were in the middle of their route when

Raghus bike stopped working.. he got off to see what was wrong..and all of a sudden it started
raining...Raghu quickly went under a tree to stay dry..and told Antara to come numerous times but she wouldn't listen.

Raghu: Tu sachmay YEDI hai! Tum bheeg jao ghi

Antara: HA..Hu meh YEDI..Aur mejhay bheeg nay do...Mujhay Baarish bohat achi lagty hai..aur

waisay bhi...yeh choti choti khushiya...jeevan ko yaadghar banatiy hai.

Antara started spinning round and round with her arms spread out...Seeing this something

hypothesized Raghu to come out..into the rain...he slowly came out and stood next to

antara...Antara suddenly stopped...and she started thinking of something..Some tears formed into

her eyes..Raghu held her shoulder...she quickly turned around scared.

Raghu: Kya huwa?...Abhi abhi tum itni kush ti..aur abb roh rahiy hai!

Antara just hugged raghu...really tightly...raghu was going to do the same but stopped...but

then he couldn't help himself..he hugged her back with twice the passion twice the junoon..he

rested his chin on her head and closed his eyes...Suddenly...the noise of thunder brought them

back to reality they quickly released each other...Antara started crying really badly and ran

away from there..Raghu saw he was standing in the rain..which he hated..he lifted his arms like he was freeing his soul from his body...He again remembered those 7 words that MM said to him..
But all he needed to do now was find Antara...He walked a little distance to find antara sitting on a bench crying her heart out...he went and sat next to her.

Edited by HELLO999 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
love it why did antara cry
please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
reallyy so so lovely...plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
I"m wordless Wow wow ❤️
"Raghu slides his fingers through his hair and says sorry while

winking...Antara gives a cute smile...They share another eyelock" omg

i'm dead

Lovely update continue soon please want to know why Antu cries
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Yes really a nice one...
Plzzz update soon...

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