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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 8:



The door clicked open and she turned to find HIM standing there and as usual she looked into his eyes which held so many questions in them

She knew tht she wont b able to answer them and moreover she cant look weak infront of him

She cant let anything happen to him

She cannot risk his life

She looked at him for a brief second and asked

Antara: so what brings u here Mr Naik she asked him in a cold demeanor

Raghu stood there shocked as she addressed him with his surname

Raghu: antara she cut him off in the middle

Antara: sorry but it is Aratna not Antar so can we sit and talk about the tender

Antara: plz have a seat Mr Khan

Raghus anger was rising now how can she just change her name like this and why was she acting this way what has he done???????

Why didn't she contact me in these five years if she was alive

does she know how miserable his life has become in these years

does she even realize????????

His eyes had become bloodshot due to the pain and anger

He balled his fist such tht the nails were digging in his flesh

and his last ounce of self control was lost when she casually smiled at him

He advanced towards her and pushed her against the wall

for a second she was scared

this was not her Raghu he was a calm person

he was never like this probably the time has made him like this and i am the reason for it she smiled at the irony of life

Antara: what are u doing Mr naik behave urself

Raghu: u r tellling me to behave

dammit look how r u behaving do u even know how difficult it was me to live without u and how can u leave so suddenly after what we both shared

He was looking like a defeated man he was completely broken

Antara: plz leave me my husband is on my way to here so plz leave before he comes

Hearing this Raghu became numb he didnt know how to react

He shook her and told her to look in his eyes and say that

She could not look into his eyes and say that so she turned away

Raghu: i knew it why are you doing this and why did you leave me plz come back with me

Antara: i cant i dont want to hurt you by coming with you

Raghu: your hurting me more by not coming

Raghu: antara i need you tell me why you left me now

Antara ran and hugged raghu

Antara: im sorry

Precap: past and reason for seperation

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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG ye ka kiya tune Sonia?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: alishamerchant

OMG ye ka kiya tune Sonia?

Kya kiya maine ?😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
tune fir se cliff hanger de diya!!! Aur what Antara itni jaldi gave up to raghu?
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Posted: 11 years ago
kya cliffhanger par update end kar di
do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: alishamerchant

tune fir se cliff hanger de diya!!! Aur what Antara itni jaldi gave up to raghu?

Haan ill update the next part now its ready 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

kya cliffhanger par update end kar di

do update soon

Sorry ill update now the next parts ready 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 9:



Whilst hugging raghu she started remembering what had happened

Flashback:

5 years back

It has been 5 months since they were in a relationship

everyday was special for them

they had started getting physical too initially Raghu was against it but Antara was the one who had told her decision too coz she knew how hard was it for him to control

and she had also heard from her friends that these desires are more strong in men than in women

Even she could not control herself when he just used to kiss her

she could feel as if she is gonna die if he didnt go further and so she insisted him not to stop himself even then Raghu didnt want it

So she had taken the frst step and had gone to his home when he was alone

And tht is when they did it for the first time but bfore doing it Raghu had said

Raghu: Antara r u sure jaan that u want to do it

Antara: yes i am

Raghu:ok jaan

and tht is when they both had made love for the frst time

It was another day when they both were laying in each others arms after their love making session

Raghu: jaan

Antara: hmmm

Raghu: u neva talk abt ur family who,is there in ur family
Antara stiffened hearing this suddenly Antara became cold

and told Raghu neva eva to talk abt her family

Raghu shivered for a second hearing her cold voice

and with tht he pulled her in a bone crushng hug

Raghu: sry jaan...i wont ask ever again

Antara reached home the one she hates to b called as home

it was jst a house not home no one was hers except her step sister

her father had died when she was 14 yrs old

and then her mother had married her ex lover who was a total drunkard and and a gambler

her mother had made grave mistake which Antara was regretting not her coz she killed herself

leaving Antara alone in this cruel world and wth her so called father

The one she could call her family was er step sister Zeenat, Her step dads real daughter

her so called father used to beat her abuse her only and Zeenat used to save her

Antara entered her house only to meet her sulking father shouting at her Sister

she ignored and was about to enter her room when her father called out to her

Antara: ji papa

Step dad: ye ham kya sun rahe h tumhara kisi ladke k saath...chiii...kya naam h us namakul ka

Antara: RAGH ... RAGHUNATH NAIK and the roar of slap echoed through the room

Step dad: kal se tumhara college jaana bandh

Antara was crying sitting there quietly she had had enough of it

Antara: aap hote kaun h mujhe roknewale mai aapko abbu nahi maanti...samjhe aap...and one more slap

Zeenat tried her best to stop her father but he did not stop he eat her to no extent

At nite she was sitting in her room crying bitterly cursing her fate...she so wanted to b in Raghus arms she cried the whole nite and slept

Next morning she felt dizzy and started to throw up but she.jst thought it to b the previous night's effect

But she needed to go to the doc for her injuries she sighed she wont b able to go to colg olso especially infront of him and like this no

he will jst kill this man if i tell him...she jst left him a msg tht she wont b cumng for nxt one week aftr tht she had kept her phone on silent knowing he would ask 100 questions

she took a bath and went to the doctor

The doctor did the checkup with a doctor she was her mother's frnd she knew what Antara goes through

Antara: what happened khala...is everythng fine

Doc: antara how can u...u r...u r pregnant

Antara was sweating by now

Antara: khala r u sure these reports r rite

Doc : i dont want to hear anythng...u will abort the baby...and thts final...next week meet me

Antara was still in shock...she was walking through the road aimlessly...somehow she reached home...she
could c some men staring at her but she looked down and walked inside her room.

she was unable to compel what to do...goddd she is jst 17...they shld hav taken some precaution

At nite when she was abt to go the dining table she heard her father talking abt her wth someone.

Step dad: tum samajhte q nahi mujhe thoda aur waqt chahiye paise ka intzaamat karne k liye

Man - mai kuch nahi jaanta hamne jo tumhe samay diya tha woh waqt khatam.ho chuka h...tumne 1 crore ki baazi haari h...us wajah se tum apna 50 lakh ka ghar haar chuke ho...aur baaki 50 lakh k liye hamne tumhe 1 mahine ka waqt diya tha jo ab khatam ho chuka h

Step dad: ek aur hafta dedo mujhe

Man - nahi...ek raasta h
Step dad: kya
Man - woh jo tumhari sauteli.beti h...use hame bech do

Step dad:- mai taiyar hu lekin woh jis ladke se pyaar karti h woh bada khatarnak h ...maine pata lagaya h uske baare mein

Man - huh...toh use maar denge

Step dad: ye hi thik hi rahega...toh thik h tum jab chahe us ladki ko le jaa sakte ho

Man - thik h ham use kal lekar jaayenge

Antara just couldnt believe what she heard

She ate her dinner and was continuously thinking what to do...she touched her stomach which had a new life growing inside her which gave her an unknown power coupled with raghus love...she decided she would runaway from here tonight itself...she thought to contact but she could not risk his life
She packed her bags, took some jewellery which her mother had given, gave her sister a last look...and went away never to return back in this hell

She ran and came to Raghus house gave a last look to his room where he was standing never to c him again...and she came to kashmir

At the same time Raghu was feeling restless since the time she had told him abt her health...he called Zeenat and enquired abt her but the response she gave made Raghu feel tht his life has gone

Zeenat - Raghu.. Antara is.not home...she had left a note for me..tht she has left us forever

Raghu kept his phone when he heard Maan calling out to him

Maan - Raghu ... Raghu ..look at me Raghu

Raghu looked at him

Maan - do u know where antara

Raghu: no

Maan - i know...i had seen her with her bags and catching a bus

Raghu and Maan both hurried towards the bus stand but they were late the bus had long gone

Raghu felt like a defeated man .in the morning there was another shock the bus they were searching for had a major accident and no one survived...

but Raghu somewhere had hope tht she is not dead...and hence he became what he is now...he left no stone unturned to lool for her

Initially she stayed at a widows place till her delivery...and she had felt complete holding her and Raghus love in her hands

Antara came back to reality with raghu saying

Raghu: antara antara kaha kho gayi hai tu

Antara: raghu mai ab tumhe sach batati hun

Antara told him the truth and says

Antara: raghu ab tum chale jao yaha se plz

Raghu: nai mai tumhare bina nai jaunga aur phir mai mumbai ja kar uss insaan ko maar dalunga

Antara: nai raghu woh kuch bhi kar sakta hai plz

Raghu: nai chup chap ghar chalke bags pack karo

Antara sighs and says fine but mera aik bara wala package bhi hai (smiling)

Raghu: usko bhi saath le chalenge luggage ke saath

Antara starts laughing

Antara: woh luggage nai hai uska ticket bhi book karwana hoga




Edited by princess555 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww OMG yaar you are going so fast like DDEJ nowdays haha
OMG thats a terrible flashback! so they both don't live in india now???
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: alishamerchant

awww OMG yaar you are going so fast like DDEJ nowdays haha

OMG thats a terrible flashback! so they both don't live in india now???

I think i am its going to end in the next part so i can get back to my other ff 😆
I know 😆
That was written wrong by me it was meant to be that they are going back to mumbai from kashmir 😆

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