Last Night SS Index Updated on Page 1

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Hi guys yeh mera pehla OS hai to I am sorry if it doesn't meet your expectations! (If you like it I might turn it into an SS)

Requested by @honeybees22

Antara woke up to a sunny morning with a very nice feeling! Last night felt like the best time of her life and she wanted to re-live it again and again! She slowly got up from her bed with the biggest smile on her face.

Geeta(Antara's mom): Are aaj bada muskura rahi hai meri beti kya baat hai?

Antara: K..uch ..Bhi to nahi hai maa!

Geeta: hmmm apni mumma se chupao gi! Pehle sab kuch aapa ko bataati thi kal raat woh bhi chaligayi to ab kisse bologi

Antara started thinking about Raghu and her mum's clicks suddenly rouse her

Geeta: Kaha kho gayi! Chal theek hai nahi bataana to mat bata

Her mum gave her a warm smile and walked away!

Antara quickly took a shower and got dressed in red anarkali- Raghu's favourite colour on her! She then went downstairs blushing and her maami catches it!

Maami: Lagta hai aaj kuch bahot khaas hai..apne aapa ke jaane ke baat bhi dekho humari Antara kitni khush hai hana didi?

Both of them laugh and tease her! Antara blushes...

Antara: Maami aap bhi na main to aapa ke liye khush hoon

Maami: haan to Antara maine kab kaha ki tu kissi aur ke liye khush hai

Antara blushes and is just about to leave the house that...

Ishu: are didi aapke gale par yeh kya nishaan hai??

Antara: Kya hai?

Maami: kya hua? Kaisa nishaan hai? Dikha to sahi!

Geeta: Are Antara yeh chot kaise lagi tumhe?? Kisine maara kya tumhe?

Antara was so confused as she didn't even know what all her family was talking about so she just gave a weird/ confused look and walked away.

@Naik Mansion

Antara goes into Aaji's room with a massive smile on her face.

Aaji: Antara beta tu aagayi?

Antara is busy day dreaming and doesn't reply to aaji. Aaji turns around and finds Antara to be staring into space.

Aaji: Antara kiss duniya mein khoya huyi hain?

Antara suddenly realizes and starts stammering

Antara: Aaji sorry..wo..hh main..

Aaji smirks but then it suddenly disappears and turns into a shocked expression.

Aaji: Antara yeh tere gale par kaisa nishaan haan?? Kya hua?

Antara suddenly remember Ishaan asking her about this and looks in the mirror and is petrified at the sight. It was a big bruise right under her jawline.

Meri nazar mein yeh kaise nahi aaya? She thought to herself.

Antara P..ata nahi aaji kaha se aaya...yeh sab choda na mein chai bana kar laati hoon

Antara hesitantly walks off goes to the kitchen and starts making tea. She starts to pour the tea but doesn't realise that it is about to fall on outside the cup as she is too busy thinking about that massive bruise. She starts to get flashbacks from last night and just then Raghu who was walking past the kitchen notices that the tea is about to fall on Antara's hand and makes a quick run to save her hand from burning.

Raghu: Ehh Miss Call yeh kya rahi hai haan tujhe dikhayi nahi deta? Haat jal jaata toh?

Antara: Raa..ghuu tum?

Raghu: Haan main, kyun?? Pehli baar dekha tune mereko?

Antara: Nna..hi to who mera matlab..

Raghuu starts to close her and gets a naughty smile on his face as he understands why she is behaving like this.

Antara: Dekho Raghu tum...

Raghu: Mein kya? Bol na moon mein taala laga kar kyun khadi hai?

Antara starts to get scared and pushes him away! Antara quickly gets shy and runs before Raghu gets hold of her. He looks in the direction she ran in and closes his eyes remembering his beautiful Miss Call last night.

PS. I know you are all going to bash me for putting so little Rantara and not telling you what happened last night (By the way it's not exactly what you think..well it is but it isn't at the same time!) but hey ho suspense is needed.

And Hina I know you are going to kill for this! It's okay I am ready for whatever you want to throw on me or any gaaliyan you want to give.

Please do leave your comments below and don't hesitate to tell me any improvements! 😊

Guys if you want a pm after the update then plz buddy me and like this post..makes life much easier!

INDEX

Part 1- Above!

Part 2- page 10

Part 3- page 22

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ayaazukideewani thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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maine kaha h tha na ki bohot aachi likhogi
great os dear👏
Edited by ayaazukideewani - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i loved it great os but clif hanger why why why
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayaazukideewani

maine kaha h tha na ki bohot aachi likhogi

great os dear👏


really??? its hardly got any rantara and you still like it?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ifians

wow yaar wonderfull os👏


Sach??? Thank You! i thought everyone was going to bash me for hardly any rantra
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: alishamerchant


really??? its hardly got any rantara and you still like it?



of course 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I hope you guys are being honest!
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Yes Hina ke liye likha maine aur woh hi gayab hai! kidhar gayi?? itni naraz hai mujhse?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: alishamerchant

I hope you guys are being honest!


yaar main toh hamesha saach kehrahi hoon😛

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