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Posted: 11 years ago
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I haven't wrote one of these in a long time. So bare with me, if it's rubbish feel free to say so lol. I do hope you like it tho :)

Previous to this part of the story. DM has noticed the closeness of Rantara and has found out about Aman giving the bomb unbeknownst to Ragu who in turn unbeknownst to him killed Antaras father.
Ragu and Aman have regained their friendship. He worships the group Ragu walks on.

DM has just weaved her evil and told the truth about it all to Antara, whilst Ragu looks on helpless.

"Antara wait let me explain" cried Ragu running after her.
Antara turned, her face like stone. "I knew you had a past Ragu, i knew what you were, but this, a murderer? No i never thought you were this person. It turns out you were someone different. Every time i look at you i will know that you killed my papa. I feel sick looking at you, i never ever want to speak or see you again, as far as i am concerned you have ruined my life, it would be better for you to go to hell. I hate you so much Ragu" Antara let out the only bit of emotion she felt, she was stunned. She run in to her home crying.

Ragu stood their motionless those words kept going around in his head "It would be better for you to go to hell" He was interrupted by Aman

"Ragu, Ragu, i am sorry, i am so sorry, please forgive me" Aman cried as he fell to his knees.
"I can't talk to you right now Aman, you have taken everything from me" Ragu spat out.
"Ragu i need your forgiveness, i am sorry, i was made to do it, all because of the feud between Daya and Aadesh Rajan" shouted Aman desperate for Ragu to listen to him.
Ragu looked down at his friend "It doesn't matter now Aman. Without knowing i committed this crime. Antara is right, just because we have our own colony does not mean all the other laws are exempt for us. I can see you Aman, i know what kind of person you are, and its not that person they wanted you to be, you like me were just a pawn in a game of chess. The person i have become is something i am ashamed at and now i have lost it all. I must do the right thing."
"Ragu what are you saying" asked Aman puzzled
"I am going to hand myself in to the police" sighed Ragu
"No wait what are you saying" shouted Aman
"Its ok i wont mention your name, just please look after Antara for me" whispered Ragu as he walked away
"No Ragu, don't do this" screamed Aman as he watched his friend walk away.
Aman thought quickly, he couldn't let Ragu do this. Ragu was a kind hearted man.
He ran in to Antaras house
"Get out of here" screamed Antara when she saw him "You have no right to be here" she cried
Aman grabbed her by the wrists and pushed her to the wall.
"I know your hurt Antara but you don't know the whole story, its not ragus fault and if you don't listen to me then you are never going to see him again" shouted Aman. He let go of her wrists
"What do you mean" sobbed Antara
Aman quickly gave her the run down of the story. Antara looked on shocked, her stomach churning at the story. "I am sorry Antara its all my fault i should be the one sacrificing my life not Ragu" Aman cried
Antara looked at this feeble man "Aman do not cry, i have seen all that you have been doing for Ragu for the past few months. You were not to know it was my father. You and Ragu are the same, just seeking someones love. You found that in the friendship you have with Ragu. I can see you are seeking annulment of your guilt and Ragu will see that. I forgive you Aman. If its anyone's fault its Dayas and the feud between this Mr Rajan. I can see that now." Antara said as she held her hands to Amans face. "I need to find Ragu, where is he, where did he go?
Aman quickly came to his senses "He has gone to the police station to hand himself in" Aman said ashamedly
"No" screamed Antara "i have to find him"
With that Antara ran , screaming out Ragus name as she tried to find him.
Suddenly there he was, walking away down the road.

Ragu thought he heard Antara calling his name, he turned and she was there.
"Leave me be Ms Kaul go back home, i will help you keep your words, you do not have to see me again" he sighed
Antara ran towards him and pushed him against the wall
"You stupid man what are you doing" she cried "Aman told me everything, you cant do this, you cant do this too me"
"Antara i am doing this for you, for your dad, for your family. You can rest in peace knowing that justice will be served. I killed your father Antara now go home" he replied.
"You killed him unknowingly Ragu. You didn't know what was in the package did you. You can't do this, i wont let you. If you want to avenge for my fathers death this is not the way to do it. Do you think my papa would be happy to see how much your hurting me right now" Antara sobbed.
"I have hurt you a lot, let me do this Antara. I dont want to hurt you anymore. You are better off without me, there is no reaosn for you to worry about me" Ragu calmly replied
Antata screamed frustratedly "Of course their's a reason Ragu, i love you!
Ragu and Antara stood their staring at each other, Ragu shocked at Antaras words
Antara saw her moment in the silence "Ragu, i...i...i do, i love you, i don't know when or how, but i do. If you don't feel the same way then tell me and i will let you do what ever you need to do to forgive yourself, just know that i forgave you the moment i saw you."
Ragu staggered "Of course i love you Antara this is why i have to do this."
"Ragu if you love me and you do this, know that i will be unhappy for the rest of my life" Antara sobbed
Ragu looked up and saw the love in Antaras eyes.
"Please make my papa happy and keep his daughter happy" smiled Antara.

Ragu grabbed Antara into his embrace and hugged her. "I love you so much Antara, i would go to hell for your happiness.
"My happiness starts now Ragu with you" Antara replied, knowing that somewhere out there her father was at peace.


How was it? Please leave me a comment :)

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sweetdesire thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome OS
Really loved it
do write more
suzi... thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice!! Keep it up...do write mre...n make it mre romantic nxt tym k...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: suzi...

Nice!! Keep it up...do write mre...n make it mre romantic nxt tym k...


Ok thanks for your critique :)😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow awesome post.. 👍🏼 keep posting 😛
honeybees22 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow dear this is osam pls write more

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice loved it hope esa hi ho epi mein :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: divzz29

nice loved it hope esa hi ho epi mein :)


thanks, could you translate last bit.
sorry to be a pain.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: britishgirl


thanks, could you translate last bit.
sorry to be a pain.

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she said that should happen in the epi as well
where r u from?
britishgirl thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: honeybees22

she said that should happen in the epi as well

where r u from?


I am a non-indian (white woman😆) from UK :)

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