RaNtara FF~~Dil Toh Pagal Hain!!!~~Up Part 2-Pg 12 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: .Safina.

Oh wow interesting start! :) Looking forward to the next part ;)

thanks safina 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: zzinia2411

lovely start cutie! just loved it! but i wish it was antara instead of that ruku in raghu's arms! please continue asap! will be waiting!

thanks zebin 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: SONAL30

wow parin nice part buddy

loved it

thanks sonal 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Hey dear

Love the first chapter

What a start

Really loved it

Waana read more

So do try to continue soon

Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love

Geet

aweee geet thank u so much dear...love u too 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow great start parin
Raghu wit guitar omg still dreaming :-D
Raghu n ruku burn d stage :-D
Luking forward for further story


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: gal.angel

Wow great start parin
Raghu wit guitar omg still dreaming :-D
Raghu n ruku burn d stage :-D
Luking forward for further story


Osina

thanx osina 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2


The show got over and the curtains of the stage were down. Raghu now makes Ruku stand properly and seeing the excitement all the over Ruku within an instant hugs Raghu. Raghu too reciprocates.

"Raghu our show was a superduper hit! Wow we rocked" Ruku said with lots of excitement in her voice.
"Yes Ruku you were too good today. And we truly rocked".

Now Machmach, Battery, Arshad and Noor too ran on the stage and joined them. Everyone congratulated them and appreciated their work.
"Bhai you were mindblowing. And the way you entered the stage. For a second we thought you wont come but the moment we saw you...by the way why did you changed your entry" Machmach said all this non-stop.

"Machmach at the last moment the bike which I was going too use for my entry got jammed so I had to change the plan and enter the stage using the harness" Raghu replied.

"Thank god the bike jammed" Noor murmured.

Now everyone looked at her with a shocked expression.
"I mean...if the bike wouldn't have jammed then we wouldn't able to see this rocking entry na.." Noor cleared their misunderstanding.
Everyone laughed at her and Arshad even gave a slight pat on her forehead.

"Ok now lets go and change. Don't we have to leave." Raghu said this watching the time in his wrist watch.

Everyone disappeared. Ruku went to the green room and changed herself in her casual t-shirt and jeans. Raghu also changed his attire and wore shorts and sleeveless t-shirt.

After changing the entire group was waiting near the jeep of Raghu in the parking lot and chatting and waiting for him to come.
Raghu took a while to come but the moment he came he had a totally changed expression. He looked very very serious and without even talking to anyone he sat on the drivers seat.
Everyone got tensed seeing his look and now without any talks all took their place. Ruku sat besides Raghu on the passenger seat. Whereas Machmach, Battery, Noor and Arshad sat behind.
Raghu again without uttering a single word started the jeep and drove off.
After few minutes of drive -

Noor was pushing Ruku after every few minutes and signaling her to ask Raghu exactly what happened. Even Machmach was giving an eye signal to Ruku to ask him. But Ruku didn't had courage to even utter a word.
Raghu was noticing all this from the front mirror and was giving a sarcastic smile to their reactions but this wasn't noticed by anyone.
"Raghu...Raghu..." Ruku uttered something after lot of courage.

"Yes Ruku...I know my name is Raghu..Whats the matter say fast" Raghu now started to tease seeing their scared expressions.

"Raghu...what happened? Why are you so upset..Did anything happened in the show?" Ruku again asked but now facing Raghu.

"You want to know what the show's director said about our show?"

"What happened? What did he said?" Arshad asked Raghu.

"He said...He said..." Raghu said in a real loud voice

"What Bhai?" Machmach now got really scared.

"He gave us the biggest contract for the largest show in Mumbai" Raghu said this after stopping the car and giving a big smile on his face.
Everyone hearing this got shocked and surprised at the same time. They didn't knew how to react for a moment. But later everyone got really happy and Ruku even smile. She hit Raghu on his arms lightly and said "You scared us you know that".

"Wow Bhai this the best news ever" Battery said in excitement
"So finally we made it to the biggest show" Arshad said feeling really proud.
"Yes we really did it and I am so happy. With this show our troupe will be become the most popular. This will the be biggest show ever and I wont miss any opportunity to please the viewers" Raghu said in a real excited voice and also dreaming about making this show the most perfect ever.


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a/n - Realy sorry for short update...i am falling short of time. but promise to give a longer one next time 😛 till then you all enjoy reading, liking and commenting on this one 😛
Edited by pkarvi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres
awesome updt...

its like seeing visualing...
nice work dear😳
Edited by Nichuss - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
wen i saw dtph on monday i remberd this ff

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