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PART 1:
The sky is slowly lightnening up as the sun rose in the east while setting in the west of other side of the world. Around 5:00 in the morning, Nayak Wadi a street in Mumbai set aside from the loudness of the city where the roads are still dark and there was such a silence that the chirping of birds could be heard throughout as a wakeup call. This silence broke when the main door of a house clung open and a girl of age about early twenties wearing grey coloured tracks paired up with pink T-shirt and matching sneakers and headphones, had her hair tied up as a
pony. She looked stunning with big eyes and wide smile on her face as she welcomed the new fresh day. Her voice said "Ma, I am going for a jog" addressing her mother when from inside came voice saying "Antra, Come back before 7:00 today". Antra passed the dimly lit roads while listening to the tracks playing on her ipod jogging the way which led to the Sanjivni park which was a mile to the east of Nayak Wadi.

She reached the entrance gate of the park jogging when another girl joined her who was completely dressed up as a boy with bobbed hair and she could only be guessed as a girl when she usually starts her blah blah. She as usual started her funny gossips but she has to stop it soon as she received a serious glare from Antra which followed "Jikky chup chap se Jog kar yar." Jikky understandingly remained silent for a long time plugging onto her headphones until a third person, an unknown guy joined them on Jikky's side. Jikky now and then glared at that guy as if she was observing him and when caught used to give a fake smile whereas Antra just ignored everything else and was jogging so vigorously as if she has to win a medal in Olympics. After few minutes of silence that guy slowly tapped on Jikky's shoulder sighning as to talk to her and they both slowed down. When before that guy could even utter a single word Jikku started "I know you want to know about that girl" she said pointing at Antra. Then again without listening to what he was going to say Jikku started "You have a very big risk in following her and do you want to face that? I think you are going to say yes as you seem to be daring and dashing." The guy stares at her with an exclamatory expression over his face. Jikky asks him "But I think you want to know what that risk is..." with a cute smirk on her face as if she was enjoying this whole thing. When the guy nodded hesitantly wondering what she is upto, Jikky started "Did you ever hear the name Raghu Veer Singh." On hearing this name that guy had flashes of boxing match when a guy was knocked out within very less time and he curiously asked Jikky "Are you talking about THE INTER-CLZ KICK-BOXING CHAMPION for the past five years." For which Jikky replied "Ha then I think you know him and if you know him you must also know that this girl about whom you were asking is his beau." Then that guy just wanting to escape from this situation smartly said "Arey yar chill maar. I was just taking a chance. Forget about me and continue ur jog." After saying this that guy left when Jikky blurted out her laughter when she was paused by a tap on her shoulder by Antra who seemed to complete a round and came back to the same spot. Jikky was relieved as she knew that Antra din't hear her talk with that guy as she was completely normal which she wouldn't be on hearing Raghu's name.
Antra started doing her strict drill when she got flashes of what had happened that day
-------*******FLASHBACK TWO MONTHS BACK*******-------
The climate, surroundings everything was normal like as usual. Antra and Raghu came to Sanjivni park for their daily routine with which they start their day together. As they were jogging an unusual silence was in between them by which Raghu was agitated as that kind of situation was new for them. Raghu thought "I will watch you uptowhen can you stop talking." He just kept on glaring at Antra while she remained silent as if she was ignoring him but still jogging by his side. Suddenly she blurted out "Stop glaring at me. I am not going to change my decision as now
you are not affecting me anymore." On hearing this Raghu's anger broke out and at an instant pulled her off by the jogging path pinning her to a sideby tree where noone else surrounding could view them. Raghu pinned both her hands to either sides of the tree and at that time he has mixed emotions of anger, pain, fear of losing something very important which were clearly portraying by his eyes. Antra could clearly feel his emotions as she was also
going through the same. They stared in each others eyes intensely for an unknown time until both Raghu's and Antra's eyes were welled up when a small tear rolled down on her cheek and Raghu immediately turned back fearing his tears would be seen by Antra which were by this time bursting out. He hurriedly moved away from that place who was followed by a concerned Antra. He reached to the public tap and sprang water with force on his face so as to stop his tears or atleast hide them from Antra even though he knew that he cannot hide anything from her. He then started packing his drill bag and meanwhile when he just had a glance at Antra he found Antra staring at him for which he stated "I know that I can't hide anything from you just like you. No need to stare at me like that. I am fine. You don't have to worry about me. Let's go home. Moms are waiting for us."
-------*******FLASHBACK ENDS*******-------
Antra's thoughts were disturbed by a phone call when she thought "Maybe its Raghu. After two months just like me he also may be is thinking to patch up again." With that thought she had a cute blush on her face and immediately grabbed her mobile but her happiness disappeared as she was disappointed on reading the name of incoming call which was none other than her mom. She hesitantly answered the call as she remembered her mom told her to be at home by 7:00 and now its 6:55 and spoke out "I started ma. Just on the way. I am very nearby. I am able to see our basti's board." Saying this she cut the call and immediately asked Jikky to start and they both hurriendly ran off on their path.
wll continue soon...
Hope you guyzzz liked it... Sorry for this late update... It has been two weeks since I write the prologue... Next time I will try my best to be quick... Do you guyzzz want character sketch...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsum story!!! Update soon plx!!!yes a character sketch will be and we will be able to understand!!
Edited by hayakhan5 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great job...ur really awesome..all the best...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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👍🏼good yaar pls.continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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HEY GRT WRK... THANKS FR THE PM..KEEP WRITING..:):D
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Interesting story😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ohhhmmmyyy!!! what a start! Cutie, u have done a lovely job with this very different concept of ur's! i was simply great & i love it! please continue asap! will be waiting! 😃
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nice update

character sketch will be good👍🏼
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Amazing nd interesting story..cont.soon dear
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PART 2:

Tring Tring... land phone was ringing in Kaul's house when the main door was banged open with Antra's hurried entry on being late and within few seconds she reached the phone as there was no other person nearby to receive the call. Antra picked up the receiver but couldn't utter even hello as her breathe was too quick and her heartbeat was rapid but the next second she felt that her heartbeat paused for a minute as she heard "HELLO" from the receiver. She could sense by a single word that it was Raghu and on the other side Raghu could only hear the fast breathe of Antra when he could sensibly guess that its his Jaan. Without a second thought he spoke out "Antra, I know its you. I know that today its a very important day for you and so to relieve from that stress you must have done strict drill, even after which your stress levels are not down. Am I right?" On hearing these words from her Raghu after awaiting such a long time of two months for the first time in their whole lives, Antra tried to calm herself to reply but within that Raghu spoke again "I know I am right as always and I also know that you are still angry on meand doesn't like to talk to me yet." Raghu's anger has raised by then when he blurted out "But you know what, I don't care. I don't care about you anymore as I am very happy on living alone here." These words made Antra sad but then she had to listen to more "And yes now go and meditate while listening to light music, it will reduce your stress and will as well lighten up your mood, only then you would be able to concentrate. And I am once again clarifying you I don't care for you, even now I called up only for aunt. And one last thing ALL THE BEST & TAKE CARE." Raghu cut the call on completing his lines leaving Antra confused. Antra said to herself "This Raghu whenever I feel that I know him he will prove me wrong, now what does he want, if he din't call for me then why din't he cut the call immediately, if he is happy there then why he did he let me know that he is feeling lonely, why does he even think that I will do whatever he says." Antra threw her drill bag onto the sofa angrily and started murmuring to herself "And what were the last words ALL THE BEST & TAKE CARE." These words all of a sudden stuck up in her mind then she thought to herself "If he doesn't care about me then why is he bothering about me at all." With this thought Antra's face lit up like a 1000V bulb.

Antra smiling to herself shyly paced to her room and in that mood she played her long time favourite playlist which started with "Hum hain iss pal yaha..." Antra started humming the beautiful lyrics when meanwhile opened her almarah when her glance a lehnga which made her thoughts roll into memories

-------*******FLASHBACK THREE YEARS BACK*******-------
It was a fine morning and the clock struck ten when the main door of Singh's house banged open with Antra's rigorous entry then she went shouting into the house "Aunty, I am ready, let's go quick otherwise all the good stock in offer sale will be over. Aunty, where are you?
Come out quick." Antra awaited for few moments then started barging into each and every hook & nook of the house but at last she heard some noise from the kitchen when she paced to the kitchen saying "Aunty, let's go na, I will help you after coming back" but as she reached there the person present there was Raghu, who was cooking. Seeing Raghu cooking in his light mood while humming a song as if he could hear nothing, Antra's anger rose which made her to say "Hey you, can't you listen me shouting, couldn't you stop me?" On hearing Antra, Raghu made the flame low and spoke out at last "First of all why were you shouting and even now why are you blurting out at me? And by the way mom is not at
home, I know she might have promised you but she got an urgent call from her office, so she had left and I am cooking for today. Please don't disturb me and now just leave." Raghu started cooking again when Antra just stared at him with a smile which is her usual behaviour since she realized Raghu s something special in her life may be more than a best buddy. Raghu felt Antra's glare on him when he turned to her saying "You are still here, now leave na. I am warning you don't even try to disturb me." Antra came back to her senses then started "Raghu today is sunday and it's an off for aunty. Then why does she have to work even today. We have to settle off early so that we can take care of her." Hearing to this Raghu's anger raced within a moment then he blurted out "I won't leave my relations for selfish reasons like someone else. I know I have to take care of my mom and its not we its just me." Saying this Raghu leaving the kitchen paced towards balcony who was followed by Antra. Antra just stood by Raghu's side for few moments until his mood was set right. After some time Raghu's mood became light on having his unknown support system by his side then turned towards Antra saying "You know na, I don't at all like mom working so hard but its just for now. As soon as possible I want to take over my responsibilities and am sorry yar for blurting out at you. Let's do one thing, let's go out and refresh. I will accompany you for shopping." All this while Antra was just staring at Raghu with her usual smile but suddenly she twirled her nose as to sense something and at last spoke out "KK, we will go but first let's complete cooking." Saying this she ran into the kitchen who was followed by Raghu and his words "What happened?" Antra after switching off the flame said "I just saved it otherwise..." Raghu glared at Antra for this "Otherwise,nothing would have happened. Today again I would have eaten at yours." ended smiling.

Raghu and Antra were in a mall fully crowded. Raghu who was astonished to see the crowd said "Baabre what is this? Is this a mela? I always thought only mom and you were crazy about this offer sales but I think all the ladies of the whole city are here today." Saying this Raghuturned to Antra's side who was missing by then. Raghu said to himself "She went off. Now in this whole lot crowd where would I find her." Raghu thinking logically decided to stay at the same place itself and he just messaged Antra his whereabouts. He then caught glance of a bench sideways where some other men were resting, on seeing them Raghu thought to himself "I think their cae is similar to mine." Raghu caught a place at the edge of the bench where he took out his mobile and updated his fb status then started checking out everything in fb and then watzapp. After few minutes when his neck started to pain (as he was continously peeping into the phone) he just twirled his neck round when suddenly his eyes got
stuck at a site on the second floor. Immediately he dialed out for Antra and when she answered his call, Raghu just kept on staring at that site in the second floor and said "Second floor" for which he got a reply "Second floor, did you go there but I am in first floor. Those second floor dresses are not on offer sale and are also out of my budget. You go back down and stay there, my shopping is over, even I am coming down." Saying this Antra cut the call after which Raghu ran to the second floor to the lavender lehnga which caught his eye. He immediately called his mom to take permission to spend money knowing that she won't deny and then he asked them to pack that dress on getting his mother's permit.
Grabbing the packet he again started running hard ot of the mall to his car, to hide the packet from Antra. Meanwhile Antra reached there and could just have a glance of Raghu doing something but ignored it. Antra called out for Raghu and by lifting showed the packets which were her hand full with a big wide smile. Raghu said "Now with these many bags full are you satisfied" on hearing which Antra made a face saying "I din't do shopping just like that. Day afer tomorrow its my birthday and as usual I bought for mom and aunt even this year and..." started to say something but was cut by Raghu "KK. Let's go now. I am really hungry." Then they started for home and as they reached when Antra was about to get off the car, Raghu called out her name then took out the packet from the back seat and handed it over to Antra saying "Today, while I was waiting, I thought why to sit idle, so just roamed around the whole shop when I liked a dress, so bought it but I think mom won't wear like those dresses, so you can take it." Antra's face was lit up with a wide smile on receiving a gift from Raghu and she just ignored his explanations knowing that he would never accept that he bought it for her.
-------*******FLASHBACK ENDS*******-------

Antra's thoughts were interrupted by her mother's call of "Antra, be quick" for which she replied "Just ten minutes." Antra grabbed some formal dress from her almarah and closed her door.

On the other side Raghu is shown who sat on a couch who seemed to be idle but was deeply involved in some thought process. He was interrupted when he heard "Hum hain iss pal yaha..." the ringtone of his mobile.

Sorry guyzzz, for this late update but this I am dedicating to my Ayaz Bhai...

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