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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

hey sona,

nice prologue,

really the story sounds interesting, specially its association with kashmir

whos the lady is she antara ?

plenty of questions raised ...:P

will love to see the tussle bw the protagonist they seem to be at each others neck :P

some serious miss understanding seems to be lingering around:P

upd soon...pm me...thanks for the pm:)

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Sona (Samwllms)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: VIBS_DD

hey sona,
nice prologue,
really the story sounds interesting, specially its association with kashmir

whos the lady is she antara ?
plenty of questions raised ...:P
will love to see the tussle bw the protagonist they seem to be at each others neck :P
some serious miss understanding seems to be lingering around:P
upd soon...pm me...thanks for the pm:)

thnk u for appreciating...will updt sooner

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Sona (Samwllms)

@AVELINA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Teaser...]]

the tune was breath taking...she was lazily playing with the little tedy...but when the tune of mouthorgan touched her soul...she started to walk towards it slowly...she saw her mother was busy in her room with some work...she secretly stepped out of the house with small kiddish steps...but before she could go out of her premises, her mother angrily called her "Antara...!"