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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update
Always a thrill to read your update
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so well guyzz thanks to writers ghosts which pampu send on my hose i again managed to write another part😆. it's generally filler part. hope you enjoy.

Chapter 26

"but abbujaan!! I thought it would be better to end the enemy before creating havoc." Aman answered looking at the men sitting in front. A middle aged man wearing white kurta pajama and golden frame glasses with so much personality! "aman how could you be sure that the girl is enemy. She just got inside your room and she didn't even stole anything. Aman how many times I have to say that think once before taking any steps. But you are as usual. Suppose if that girl is just a normal girl like others your action will normally raise her doubts against us. This is not our policy aman. We have to keep intact our reputation for society so that no one could doubt about our other identities...sahabuddin siddiqui's and aman siddiqui's another face!!" The middle aged man said. "sorry abbujaan... I assure you that it won't happen again!!" aman said. "we have all ready faced so many problems for your temper aman. Just because abdul and suleman got arrested by armies, you just killed the doctor who got them arrested by exploding that bomb. Aman you know what mess it could have been?!!" siddiqui said. "but abbu, should we fold our hand and see our group members struggling in army base camp?!! No abbu!! We had to take revenge nd I took that!!" aman said in full high speech. "if you want to kill doctor then there were so many ways. But due to your blast, the havoc created and military and security agents became alerted. Do you know how many peoples I had to handle and give money to close their mouth. Aman why don't you understand, that we can't waste our arms and peoples on those not so important person. We have bigger plan to execute!!" siddiqui said. Aman didn't answer. "aman now tell me did you know about the money I told you to send?! Did mrs Daya naik got the money?!!" siddiqui asked. "I don't know abbu. I told anwar to find about the matter." Aman said. "bravo!! What a group of fools I have made. Wasting their time on some random people they forgot about the main mission. Do you know that if we don't get the thing we can't make the device and daya naik is the only one who can provide us the thing!!" siddiqui said with disappointment. Aman didn't ans. "I have to handle the things from now on. I can't believe anyone. Even my son!" siddiqui said.

"raghu please darwaja kholo..." Antara screamed pushing the door. "naii miscall!! Apun tabtak darwaja naji kholega jabtak tu maaan nahi jati..." raghu, who was standing outside said with an indifferent voice. He was standing in a very relaxed mode crossing his legs. "raghu pagal mat bano... tum jo kahe rahe ho woo nahi ho sakta...please ab mujhe jane do!" she said in a poor voice. "arey apun tere ko kaunsa himalay charne kahe raha hain?! kyun nahin ho sakta?!" he asked raising his voice. "raghu main tumhe kaise le ja sakta hoon siddiqi mansion mein?!!" antara said from the other side of door. "kyun apun ke pass pair nahin hain kya jo apun khud chalke nahin ja sakta, tujhe utha ke le jana parega?!!" he said in irritated voice. "raghu!!!..." antara huffed. "dekh miscall tu jitna rona hain ro le mere ko koi farak nahi parne wala... pahele meri baat maan le uske baad ye darwaza khulega samjhi?!!" he said in that cold indifferent tone. Antara nooded her head in disappointment and slowly sat on the floor digging her hand between her knees. She knew that he would never open the door until she got agreed on his condition. From the morning he was telling. From the morning he was telling her to take him with her in siddiqui mansion. But as usual antara denied. It was too risky for both of them as also he was known to them. It would surely create problem. How many times he tries to make him understand that she would be all right but he was not ready to hear a single word. He was not ready to leave her alone in that house after the incident of yesterday night. And when she was about to leave he closed the door of her room. He was really such a mad person. No one could understand what he would do at next moment. That's why she felt hell irritated with him sometimes. Whatever, she had to reach at siddiqui mansion and she couldn't get out of that door. But wait!! She looked towards the windows. She slowly got up from the floor quickly. For a quite time raghu didn't heard antara's voice. He got worried a bit. "miscall?!.." he uttered slowly. No sound came from the other side. "eee miscall naraz hain kya?!!" he asked in a voice full of guilt. Still no sound!! That time he really got worried and quickly opened the door. "arey miscall..." but as he opened the door, he got startled. Antara was not there! Even a single glint of her was not present. A gust of wind came through the open window and ruffled his hair. His eyes widened for a while then suddenly kicked his leg impatiently. Damn! How could he forgot that it's ground floor and she could also go out using those windows!!

Antara hurried inside the siddiqui mansion. While she came in the huge hall, she found zoya was eagerly waiting for her. "ohh antara at last you are here. We were waiting for you!" Zoya said with a smile. "goodmorning zoya di!" antara said. "Come on I wanted you to meet someone!" zoya dragged her to the dining hall. A middle aged man was seating on the huge wooden table and having his dinner. Antara didn't take a single second to recognize him. Though, she was meeting him first time in person, he was that same man who was the center of this all game. "abbujaan!! She is here!!" zoya said greeting the person. "ohh so!!" the middle aged man kept his spoon and rubbed his face with hanky. Then he looked at them. just like antara saw in that photo. A great personality with very powerfull presence! The kind of man who could bow down anyone in front of him if he wanted! He took the wooden stick grooved with silver and slowly come near them. The eye covered with golden frame glasses was directed to that new girl's face. Like he was trying to read her with his gaze! Antara's eyes automatically became a bit hard. "abbujaan she is Zara's new music teacher and antara he is my abbujaan!!" zoya introduced them to each other. "oh yeah!! You told me about her!! miss antara kaul right?!" he turned towards her. "hi miss antara kaul! It's a pleasure to meet you young lady." Me siddiqui greeted her. "mine too sir!" antara looked at him with sharp eyes and greeted back. So that was him. shabuddin siddiqui!! "hope you are not feeling uncomfortable in our house. Hope everything's all right!!" mr siddiqui asked. "of course sir!! How can anything be wrong at mr sahabuddin siddqui's house. You are the example of perfection to all of us!" antara smiled a little. But still that hardness was intact in her. she didn't know that how she was controlling herself standing in front of his father's killer. But she had to keep the mask intact. Otherwise everything would fail. "ohh that's really nice to know that u can set examples to the young generation. After all they are the future of country." Mr siddiqui said. "thank you sir!! Glad to know that you aspire our generation so much." Antara answered back. "antara, you should go now. Otherwise it would be late." zoya said. "okk zoya didi..." antara said. "it's bad that I couldn't get to talk much with you young lady. I hope that in future we will get more time to communicate." Siddiqui said. "sure!! It's always pleasure to be near a person like you. I am taking my leave now! Have a good day sir!" antara greeted and moved towards music room. Siddiqui continued to observe her with quite eyes. Aman had doubt about the girl. But she didn't seem dangerous or something like that in her first appearance. Unless her eyes. It seemed like her smile didn't reached to her eyes while she was talking to him. there was a slight hardness intact always.

"appa!! You know I am not happy with grandpa's return." Zara said keeping back her guitar on place. "why zara?! Mr siddiqui is your grandfather after all!! She loves you a lot!!" antara said. "no appa it's not like that. But you know whenever he is in the house the air becomes so heavy. Like everyone has started to panic. Yes he is my grandpa but you know every member in the house has a panic for him inside. Even my ammi is always so carefull about her everything when he is here. If anything happens which he doesn't like, he doesn't spare easily." Zara said. hmm!!... had to be... he is the like lion who is wearing goats mask. This type of dominance over family is natural for him..' antara thought. "okk zara me going now!! Bye and have a wonder full day ahead." Antara smiled. "okk apaa bye!!" zara smiled. Antara came out of the room and started to get down. While moving through that first floor's passage she observed the door of siddiqui's syudy room from quite a distance. The room's door was open. So it got opened at last!! She saw aman coming from the opposite side and getting inside the room. He didn't notice her. Might be, he went to talk to his father. antara was thinking to keep track on their talks but after some 2 or three munites she saw zoya coming from the other side. They looked at each other and smiled. They meet near the door of siddiqui's study. "hey antara, class over?!! How is zara's progress" zoya asked. "yes zoya di. Don't worry zara is quite sharp and swift. She catches everything quickly. "whi is there?!!" siddiqui's voice came from the other side of curtains hanging at the door. "abbujaan it's me and antara. I brought your medicine." Zoya informed. "okk come inside." Siddiqui said. "you should also join us antara." zoya said. So antara came inside. But after going in she became a bit shocked. Siddiqui was seating at the reading table and doing some writing works but where was that aman?!!! Strange!!! He came inside just a few munities ago and she didn't even noticed him to go outside. Antara was damn sure about that. Then where did he vanished all of a sudden. Antara took a quick glance to the each and every corner of the room. The room was really filled wwith valuable artifacts, old paintings. There was not any other door rather than that front door. There was only a single window at opposite wall which was closed. There was a writing desk where siddiqui was seating and at it's side there was a book shelf filled with books. There was not a single place where someone could hide. And why should aman hide at his own house. "aaah.. there you are zoya. Give it to me. I have to go outside for some important work." Siddiqui took the medicine from zoya's hand and look towards antara whose eyes were wandering around the room. "hello young lady! We meet again!!" siddiqui said addressing her. antara seemed to be coming out from the trance and greeted siddiqui with a genuine smile. "hello sir!!". Siddiqui again gauged her expression. "it seemed like you have started to admire this room a lot." He said. "actually from the time I came here I saw this room was always locked. Now it's open. As you know sir curiosity bites a lot!!" she answered. "hmmm... curiosity is good! But too much curiosity leads to danger sometimes!" he said. Antara wandered if there was a slight glint of warning in his statement but however she ignored. Siddiqui stood up with his stick. "now I have to go zoya. Sorry young lady, we again can't talk to each other properly." he said. "don'y worry said. We have so many times left. Afterall I won't leave this house and it's peoples so soon." Antara said. Siddiqui gave her a stern look and then get outside followed by antara's eyes. "she is always a busy personality.." zoya said from side. "yup it's has to be..!!" antara agreed. "Antara I made sewai for you. you like that right. Pls don't go before taking a bowl." Zoya offered. "but zoya di you do not need to take troubles. I know you have so much work in your hand. Why did you waste your time on that?!" antara asked. "antara!!" zoya rolled her eyes. "you are my sister na?! so if I make something for you that won't be wasting my time. You get that?!" she finished in an ordering voice. "ohh okkk!!" she smiled.

"waooo.. it's yammiiee!! I don't know after how long I get to it that much tasty sewai." Antara said taking a spoonful sewai in her mouth. "ohh thx for the compliment miss antara kaul. Master chef of siddiqui mansion at your service!" zoya teased. They really developed a sisterly bond in these few days. "I am honored mademoiselle!!" antara said with a smile. suddenly their cheerfull conversation broke due to the chaos coming from outside. Both of them were startled by the sound of security guard from the outside. "just close your mouth and come inside with us!!" they hard the harsh sound of one of the security guards. "abey!! Aa raha hoon na... kyun khali pili English jhar raha hain... abey coller se hath hata..." they sound another voice. A chill ran down antara's spine as she heard that voice. "my god!!..." she gasped. "what's going on?!!" zoya rushed towards the door followed by antara. "siddiqui sir, zoya madam... see we have got someone..." two security guards got inside dragging a man by collar. Antara's eyes widened looking at the man. He noticed antara standing there. "oye miscall dekh apun ne entry le liya... kaha tha na tera picha nahin chorne wala apun.." he said with a victorious smirk.

Precap: "arey... tu aise mat dekh mujhe... arey bole toh god promise... Apun ka wo matlab nhin tha... woo to zoya bhabi ne samajh liya... Ab dekh main kaan pakar ta hoon..." he was about to hold his ears and to his surprise she burst into huge laughter.

Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
soo here cums senior siddiqui ji...
Grt update..
Ommgg raghu kitna ziddi h n nw
He reached sidhiqui mansion antu k peeche
Peeche also...😆
Precap seems interesting dear...
N aman kaha gayab ho gya..
Kk update soon
.thanku ria mam 😉
Edited by ankusanu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yeh raghu bhi na...
Hw can antu take raghu with her..

Siddiqui n antu meet.. Siddiqui too found antu little hard...

Now wr did aman vanished...secret cellar thr:o

so intrestinggg

waiting for precap
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Posted: 11 years ago
tu toh thriller likhne mein expert ho gayi re behena...
so much suspense...so siddiqui is Dr. Kaul's killer...
m still wondering where did aman go...there is secret passage in that study room..
raghu is so stubborn...he came to siddiqui mansion at last...
precap sounds exciting...waiting for it... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Raghu will be raghu kon samjhaeye usse 😆
Like it so much, but aman all ofsudden kahagaya mr.india to nai hogaya 😆
Dm n siddiqui ka relaton thts strnge wanna read more
Bht sare suspense khuleygy
Lovely lovely update ria, continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update ria!
raghu to kabhi kisi ki sunta hi nhi hai..,😆
siddiqui has many faces...
aman kahan gayab ho gaya😕..i think koi khufiya jagah hai...study room se connected.🤔😆
ab kya karegi antara raghu pahunch gaya mansion😆
thanks fr pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg Raghu and his mindboggling weird ideas ... he has to go with Antara inside Siddiki house ...My God ...I can undrstand how much is Antara tolerating ...but yess Raghu to hai hi aisa ...no one could guess what he is up to ... i loved this so much ...Antara bhag gayi but piche piche Raghu akhir pohoch hi gaya Siddiki house ...wow ... abh to yeh baat DM tak pohoch jayegi shayad ... I like that ...
And yess i loved the way u hv shown Mr. Siddiki ...i can even see him in front of me ...fantastic job ...👏👏👏
UFFF Ria ...the way ur story is unfolding its tremendously interesting and fascinating ... i loved this update and
for ur kind information ...i had fixed a deal with the writers Ghosts ...that they wd never gonna leave you ...hahahhahhaha...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ria...you ate amazing write yaar... what a thriller story...
Raghu and his weird idea's...ufff !!!! Bechari antu she is really very tolerate in siddiqui mansion...hayee raghu aaa gaya...zoya ne kya use antu ka bf...fianc ya fir husband samaj liya...Wonderful update dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mast update ria...
Kia mast tareka hai raghu ki entry ka...
Mast update...
Loved it so much...
Perfectooo...
Thanx for the pm...
Update soon and pm me...

PS:- what about Gun And Guitar?? I m waiting for that update...

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