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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon

lovely as usual yaar, tu tho kamal hai re, each and every time you recreate rantara magic. Antran ishu ka bonding, dont i adore them, raghu poor thing again he is in a fix, aw the precap, 😭. RIA IT IS ONE OF YOUR FANTASTICALLY WRITTEN UPDATE, and madam jaldi upadare kariyo warnaaa Grrr 😆

main roj jaldi hi update deti hoon...par tu hi late comment karti hain..😆
chal koi baat nahin...always wait for ur comment re..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
abhi GAG ka likh rahi hoon...sajda kaa sayad kaal...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
haan khatam hote hi post kar doongi..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
kart di hain update...dekh le..😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
All parts r so interesting and nice...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 9:mess recreated.

Antara got down from the train and steped over the platform. After a whole three months had been passed when she left that station,leaving her everything behind. In that whole three months, she wanted so many times to come back and again start her simple life. Simple?!! She questioned herself. The word seemed so meaningless to her now. The life would never going to be simple from that time. She was not that happy go lucky, bubbly girl anymore. She had come hear for a purpose. In this few months, the time had changed her from a tender vulnerable girl to a matured woman. The incidents of these whole three months flashed into her mind again. That man, raghu!! She went to Mumbai with mama-mami just to spend some time away from his father's memory. To compose herself from the heavy shock she got. But when he needed some lonely place to shed her silent tears she got a huge crowded basti in Mumbai where that gunda raghu suddenly entered into her peacefull world with a bang and the huge storm started in her life. Antara bit her lips to controle her tears. Why the heack she was thinking about that gunda? It's useless. She had left all those things behind, her tears, her emotions, her sorrow, her happiness didn't matter anymore. She had to be the strong and emotionless, just like those people whom she had to destroy. She couldn't allow any weakness to resist her feet. Her jaw became hard and she brushed away those tears from her eyes. But before, she entered into the battle ground. She had to fulfill her promise. She let out her cell to call ishan.

Raghu didn't moved a single inch from his position. His empty eyes were all fixed towards the wall. Ishan was observing his silently. He didn't dared to call him. He couldn't understand what just happened to raghu after he informed him about didu's mission. Didu told him that he didn't care for her at all. But he seemed worried?! Did he?! Ishan was confused and decided to leave the place in silence. But suddenly his phone rang. Ishan got excited seeing the number and he forgot that he was about to leave. He received the phone at the spot. "hello didu..." Ishan said in excitement. At that very moment raghu's motionless feature suddenly got jerked and he moved to ishan. "hello ishan, I am at jammu-tawi station. Now you are happy na?" antara asked in a cheerfull voice. "yeah didu... U know I ..." but before ishan could continue the convo a hand flashed in front of his eyes and grabed the phone from his hand. "hey..." Ishan said angrily looking towards raghu who was holding the phone. He completely ignored ishan. On the other hand antara was bit confused as she couldn't get ishan's voice. "hello ishan?" antara asked in confusion. No sound, all silent. Antara got worried. "hello ishan?! why are you silent?! Kya huya tujhe?" she asked in worried voice. "agar itni hi fikar hain to chorke kyun chali gayi?" that furious voice came from the other side of phone and froze her to the spot. Her eyes wided in shock. "raghu??!!!..." she blurted out. "haan main...!!" That irritating arrogant voice, "kyun tujhe kya laga teri boyfriend hain?!" his mocking voice raised her anger again. "raghu mera bhai kaha hain?! Kya kiya tumne uske sath... usey phone do jaldi se..." antara almost screamed in phone. "oye jansabha ke pandal ki mike, apne gussa express mein break laga..." He started again in his usual tone. "tere pyare se piddi bhai ko maine kuch nahi kiya. Arey mast ek tango pein khara hain apne balcony mein aur mujhe gusse se ghur raha hain... mereko bas uss se kuch puchna tha... to maine bas thora sa daraya tha..."" he said. "what?!! Tumne mere bhai ko daraya?! Sharam nahi ati tumhe ek bache ko darate huye?" she again fumed in anger. "arey tera bhai toh bacha hain par tu kya hain haan?!! Na dhal na talwar, chali gayi akele un terrorist ko pakarne miss super kaul!!" he said making a face and ishan was all silently looking at their convo. On the other hand, blood drooped from antara's face. "tum kaise jaan te ho?..." she asked slowly. "ee miss call! Tujhe kya laga mujhe kuch ata pata nahi lagega? Apne khopri mein kuch nahi khatega haan? Aur kya hain tu haan?! Mach mach ne tujhe AK 47 kaha to tune seriously le li kya uss baat ko?! Ab ye pagalpan jaldi bandh kar aur wapas ajja.." he said in ordering voice. For the whole time antara was silently listening to his words. "main wapas nahi jaaongi.." she answred in a calm voice. But raghu's anger increased upto top point. "dekh miscall mujhe koi behas nahi chahiye. Tu abhi ulti train pakar rahi hain aur Mumbai wapas aa rahi hain... nahi toh main ja raha hoon tujhe khich ke wapas lane ke liye... samjhi?!!..." he contimued his blabbering and antara was listening silently. "...aur jyada nautanki mat kar samjhi na?.. main bahut achi tarah se jaan ti hoon kit u kyun ye sab kar rahi hain?!... paise chahiye na tujhe?! iss liye ye pagalpanti sar char gaya teri?!.. arey jitney paise chahiye na tujhe uss se double den eke liye tayityar hoon... mooh mangi rakam...itna ki aunty ji ke ilaaz aur ishu ke parayi baad bhi tu tere akha life enjoy kar sakti hain apni pota poti ke sath. Samjhi?! Wo bhi bina sud ke.. Bari chali hain desh bhakti dikhane, sab malum hain mereko..." his eyes was catching the dangerous angry look again. He didn't noticed that antara was all silent, "bas ab bahut dekh li teri kashmiri picture ki action... tu abhi issi time wapas aa rahi hain...samjhi miss call..." he was all fuming in anger. "ANTARA!!!..." suddenly her calm but steal hard voice came from the other side of phone. "hn..." raghu was all startled and his continuous blaberring got reisted. He never heared this kind of tone from antara's voice. He didn't knew why he felt chill through his vains as he heared that calm composed but some how dangerous tone of her. "mera naam antara hain..." her cold voice got into raghu's ear from the other side of phone. "koi miss call ya yeri ya job hi tum bolo wo sab nahi...sirf antara..." she continued in that steal hard voice. "chalo khair... tum mujhe job hi bulao mujhe uss se koi farak nahi parta... kyun ki tumahre khene se na to mera naam change ho raha hain nahi ye fact ki main apna kaam chor ke wapas aa rahi hoon!!" she said in her clear cut voice and raghu felt he was loosing his voice by her cold dangerous tone. "maine jo kaam bhi liya hain wo pure dil se kiya hain... chahein wo ajji ka dekhbhal kyun na ho ya phir aur kuch... do you understand?!!..." she asked in that same hard tone. "dekh miss call. Mere ko pata chal gaya hain galti teri nahi thi.." Raghu's word stumbled "maine galat ilzam lagaya tha tujhpe... main tereko sorry haan... dekh maine maafi bhi maang li... ab jaldi se apna dimag thanda kar aur wapas ajja..." he said quite urgently. He was really feeling shiver all over. He never confronted her this side. "maffi??..." he heared a quite laugh from other side. "main kaun hoti hoon tumhe maaf karne wali? Mujhe tumse koi shikayad nahi hain raghu..." She said in that mocking tone. But raghu didn't noticed that. He was feeling releaved after hearing that antara was not angry at him but her next sentence again hitched his breath. "kyunki gussa, maffi ye sab apno pein kiya jata hain... ya uss insaan pein jo tumhare close ho...and for your kind information tum kisi bhi category mein nahin atey ho...you are no-one for me!! Na dost na dushman!! Kyun ki nafrat ka bhi ek rista hota hain aur main tum jaise insaan se koi bhi relation nahin rakhna chahti..." she said. "ANTARA!!..." raghu screamed loudly. "chillao mat!!.." antara replied back in same hard tone which again dominated him. "main ab wo antara nahi rahi hoon jo tumhare chillane se dar jaye... kyun ki tumhare teases aur loud screams sun sun ke mere kaan pak gaye hain... Ab mujhe in se koi farak nahi parta... waisey bhi jo insaan samajh ta hain ki main ye sab paiso ke liye kar rahi hoon uss se muhhe aur koi umeed nahin hain..." her voice again caught that calm expression letting out her furi at once. Raghu felt his feet grounded at the spot. He understood that he again created the mess bigger. "tumne mujhe kabhi samjha hi nahi raghu... tumhe humesha se yahin lagta hain na ki main ek selfish aur matlabi larki hoon jo sirf apne bare mein sochti hain right?! Ok fine... I am selfish!! Apne family ke liye, apne desh ke liye hoon main selfish. Mere papa ki un morals aur values ke liye jo unhone mujhe marte dam tak sikhate rahe. Aur ye selfish larki na un sab ke liye apni life bhi sacrifice kar sakti hain..." her calm composed anser just frozed raghu's words. He wanted to say something. Defend her words but he felt like his word died in his lips. "aur haan do akhri baat! Mama mumy ko mere Kashmir an eke sach ke bare mein bata ne jao ge to I warm you ki wo tum pe kabhi yakeen nahin karengey. Tumhare pass koi proof nahin hain iss baat ki aur ishan bhi kabhi ye baat nahin kahega. Mujhe khud se jyada bharosa hain apne bhai pein... and last thing mr raghunath naik... mujhe dhoondne ki kousis bhi mat karna!!!... kyun ki wo tum kabhi nahin kar paoge..." antara said in her calm voice and took the phone in her hand. "ee miscall!!... sun... hello.." antara heard his voice through phone. Her face was hard, expressionless. Without thinking for a while she just threw the phone on the railway track beside. In a second a superfast train come from the other side and crushed her cell. Antara gave a last quite glance towards the train and slowly she stepped towards the entrance of station pulling her lugages along with her.

Precap: His eyes wided looking at the name printed on the paper. "ajji!!!..." raghu looked at her with utter surprise. Ajji winked at him mischeviously.

so guyzz what is my dewali gift for this update??anda tomato aur chocolate??😉 khud decide kar lo...

advanced happy dewali to all of you...stay safe, be happy,keep rocking..🥳

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Posted: 12 years ago
kamaal ki update hai yaar👏...antara se ab mujhe bhi darr lagne laga hai
tumhare liye dher saare chocolates...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for pm..nice update!👍🏼 and a very properous diwali to you😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
i am not getting wht to comment

the fabulous part...

the way antu backfired saying my name is ANTARA... waah...

then she really made raghus mouth shut...

now y she destoryed the mobile...😕

how will ishu call her now...? she dnt have the money also...

hw will she keep in contact with others

omg precap...

wts the aaji gift...im so curiousss😉
Edited by Nichuss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb yaar. grate excited to know aagey kya hone wala hai
👏👏👏

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