RanTara ff -SAATHIYAAN pt3 pg4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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HI my dear rantarians this is a new ff on my most fav jodi RANTARA😛 .In this story we'll see how Raghu is always there 4 Antara whether she knows it or not. in this Raghu will help Antra to fulfill her papa's dream tht is to make her a singer(i noe in shw its dr bt still in this its diff).So this is the gist of the ff shd i conti it or not is the concept nice? i will conti it only if i get a good response 4m u guyz so please share ur views😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ofcrs u should cont it dr...😃...and don't forget to pm...
btw welcome to the forum..🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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concept sounds awesome
can't wait to read it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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U should continue it
Waiting for the first part :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept
continue soon
do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I liked d concept...its diff...n...yes ofcourse...plz continue soon...
n pm me weheva u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ok guyz bcz u all said here is the 1st part.
PART 1
The story starts from Antara getting ready to go 2 interview.
MAMA'S HOUSE:
Mami:arre Noor aapa kya aapne nashta tiyar kiya kuch hi der mein Antara ko interview ke liye jaana hai na.
Aapa:haan haan meine tiyar kar li bas uska hi intezaae hai par woh hain kahan?
Antara comes down the stairs.
Antara:Aapa mein aa gayi woh mummy ko dawaai de rahi thi. Mamiji aapa muhe aashirwad dijiye ki mujhe yeh job miljayen aur mummy ka treatment acchi tarah kar paun.
Mami & Aapa:jeeti raho tumhe yeh job zarur milega.
Antara:Mamaji kahan hai?
Mami:beta woh unke boss ne unhe zaruri kaam se puna bhej diya par woh tumhe all the best kehne ke liye mujhe bataye the.
Ishu:di mere taraf se bhi all the best waise bhi aap hai hi the best dekho aapko hi yeh job milega.😃
Antara:thank u ishu.ab mein chalthi hun warna late ho jayegi.
AND SHE GOES TO THE ROAD.
Antara:taxi ruko...arre rickshaw...yeh kya hai yeh log kisi ke liye bhi rukhte nahi toh phir kisko leke jaate hain yeh log..uff iss mumbai ke taxi aur rickshaw-wale bhi bahot ghamandi hai bilkul uss Raghu ki tarah.Waise woh aaj subah se kahin nazae nahi aa raha hai? arre mujhe kya bhaad mein jaye woh ladka mujhe toh interview ke baare mein sochana hai.
5 minutes later:
Antara:oh god yeh kya hai aaj ke din hi aisa homa hai kya koi bhi taxi yaa auto rukhne ka naam hi nahi le raha hai.hey Bappa kuch kijiye naa.
now the wind starts blowing and it plays with her hairs and duppata.
and her duppata falls on her face blocking her vision for a min.
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Antara slowly removes har duppata and opens her eyes only to see the person whomm she was trying to 4get...RAGHU.
Raghu was coming in the jeep and saw someone trying to stop the taxi & auto impatiently & he saww tht it was Antara.He thought fine i'll leave her in her office 2day 4 the interview.Suddenly the wind started blowing & her duppata fell on her face & right at tht time raghu also came & stood in front of her.she slowly removed her shawl & there were sme hairs on her face her eyes were closed & 4 a min raghu was lost in her.then she opened her eyes.
Antara:tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?
Raghu:makkhi udane aaya hun
Antu:kya
Raghu:phir kya mein yahan se jaa raha toh tujhe dekha toh socha tujhe office chod dun.
Antara:no thanks par mein khud chali jaaungi
Raghu:theek hai mujhe kya lekin tu kal hi office jaa sakthi ho kya haina koi axi yaa autoawla khud aake nahi rukhega aur teri bulawe par bhi nahi.
And starts to go
Antara: nahi ruko mein bhi aa rahi hn par sirf aaj ke liye.
AND SITS IN THE JEEP.
Raghu:waise tera office hain kahan?
ANtu:pata nahi
Raghu:kya pagal hai kya tu tujhe pata nahi tera off kahan hai?
Antu:mere paas uska address hai ye lo
Raghu:accha yh toda paas hi hai bas 20min mein pahunch jayenge,toh yeh batau kya naukhri hai
Antu:shorthand aur accounts maintenance(sorry i dont noe wat they said in the show i 4got).
Raghu:dekh mein phir se keh raha hun tujhe yeh sab karne ki zarurat nahi hai mein teri maaa ki ilaaj ka paise de dunga
Antu:dekho tum meine pehle hi tumse keh chukhi hun ki mein tumse paise nahi lungi mein khud khamakar maa ke treatment ke paise jamaa karungi.chahe kuch bhi ho.
Raghu:kya
Antu:nahi kuch nah bas itna samaj lo ki mein tumse paise nahi lungi.
Raghu:yedi
Antu:matlab
Raghu:(cant control his smile still tries hard & says)kuch nahi tu matlab bahot puchthi hai.
precap:antu speaks about kashmir & papa's dream.she doesnot get the job & raghun is very very angry.😡😡
guyz 4 nw only this much woah i hve tuition at 3:45 gotta go i'll updt again in the evening after 6'oclock.still tht read this &give me ur precious comments which is very imp cz i'm in 12std & hve lots of work so 1ly if u ppl encourage me i'll have the motivation to write more & i there is any sgg regarding my writing u can tell so tht i cn improve myself.
BYE BYE,
Anya.😃


Edited by Pamalo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first day mein raghu ne choda toh subh hi hoga
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Christeee

first day mein raghu ne choda toh subh hi hoga

nahi ek twist hai kahani mein😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it's a really beautiful update and your style is so good...waiting for next part...😃

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