OS Good Luck Miss Call Last Part Page 7 - Page 2

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

That was too cute

Originally posted by: Rehana86

and where the heck is "To Be Continued..."????😡... you are so mean! *sooper khafa* 😭... oh man, it seems like what? nearly 5 years that I actually read a FF/SS... but this one seems like an one shot? 🤔... the last FF that I read was Destiny from kis desh forum... now lemme tell ya something, I am a bad ass when it comes to be a reader... trust me when I say that, I do NOT get impressed easily with writing...I am NOT a good writer myself but when it comes to reading, I like smooth writing with details in emotions, plus the flavor of the characters must be there so that I can imagine the full scenario...I hate to read cheesy, fast, and forced romantic scenes 🤢... such scenes needs to be steady so that you can feel while imagining the scene... and you DID it 👏... very impressive I must say...I liked how you described Raghu helped her on the jeep... although it was quick but was needed to be like this, because that is natural... how they ignored their inside feelings and carried on with normal attitudes ... and the way you maintained the blend of composure and friction in their conversation is very commendable ... I could totally picture the scene you wrote... hope to see something similar like this on the actual epi 😊... thanks for sharing dear🤗... keep up the great work...😊

Please continue *begs on knees*

luv

rehana

Originally posted by: 22pundirabhi

Welcome to the RaNtara crazy world btw its awesome yr...very well writen ⭐️

Originally posted by: SONAL30

wow yaar

awesome os

Originally posted by: gal.angel

wow wow n juz wow
m juz speechless .. u hav written it soo beautifully
itz juz awesome dear
welcome to d forum dear

Originally posted by: JalebiHearts

Aww you guys are soo nice I didn't expect such lovely comments!! thank you so much!! *hugs!!* :) x

Originally posted by: gal.angel

m glad to read ur awesome writing n u deserve all d lovely cmnt dear .. n m Osina :-D n *hugs*

Originally posted by: JalebiHearts

Okay so guys Im going to try and continue today and tomorrow because of Rantara withdrawal and your lovely comments then after that we'll see... How that? :)