os: the night we shared together part 2/2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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'''~~~~OS The night we shared part 1 - page 1~~~~~~~~~'''''
part 2 - page 2
Heyy guyz i love writing os,ss about shows i love and my newest crush and the couple i think about very sec is raghu andantra... I more then love them, i love the show, i hope it stays this awesome even in the coming episodes, and we get to alot of antra and raghu romantic scenes, anyways i have written this os after a really long, so i jope it is good, please comment and hit the like button, will try to upload the next part soon! :-)

Antra thinking to herself: uff yaar bhook se needh bhi ahrahi, kya karu, us saruu raghu ko khohoon khanna ka intazaam kara, after all he said he will take care of me and my brother until we meet our family, beachara ishu bhooka peit hi sou gaya... Kash papa abhi tal idher toh asey halat khabhi na hotay...
Antra starts to get teary, for two reasons one being her dad and other being hungry!
Antra finally gets the courage and walks upto raghu whoses eyes are closed
Antra in a soft low voice: excuse me... Uhh... Raghuu
There was no answer, Antra snaps her fingers infront of his face, and suddenly raghu holds her hand after one snap
Raghus eyes are still closed: kya hai?
Antra: haath choro
Raghu: nhai choru gay
Antra starts to twist her hand around in raghus strong grip, which was no point at all, the more she would twist her hand, the The more Raghus grip would get tighter
Antra: mujhey dard ho raha
Raghu: toh haath mat hilao, bolo jo kehna hai
Antra stop moving her hand, and Raghu kept on a firm grip around her wrist know, antra also just gave up fighting with him as there was no point at all
Raghu, all this time kept his eyes closed: ab bolu gi bhi? Kya hai
Antra: mujhey bhook lagi hai
Raghu finally opens his eyes and starts to laugh, still holding Antras hand
Raghu: what do you think is this some kind of five star hotel... Yeh garage, mein khana kahan se loon gay bolo?
Antra: but you said you will take care of us until you don't get me back to my mom, if you couldn't keep your promise, then you should have never made such a big promise in the first place...
Raghu: likan mein khana kahaan se loon gay? Anrta: jab tum mera haath churo gay
Raghu who totally forgot he was holding her hand finally let's go of it: acha tik hai mein dekta hoon par tum bahir mat likalna just stay in here
Antra: acha
So raghu leaves antra in the garage and starts looking for food, after ten mins of walking in the dark raghu finally spots a small tea stall with some pakora, since Raghu is raghu he didn't have to pay for it and started walking back!
Meanwhile back in the garage the lights had started shuttering, they would turn on and then completely turn off, this was scaring antra alot, all she could hear was ishaan small snores in the pit darkness, suddenly the lights went off, there was darkness everywhere, even ishan small soft snores started scaring antra, just then she herd a squeaky sound, she could see someone was walking towards her... Maybe the same goons, the image started Coming closer and closer, Antra screamed loudy, and then she saw light, light from a lighter, it was raghu... Antra quickly went up to raghu and hugged him as tight as she could, Raghu immediately wrapped his hands around her back hugging her firming, he felt Antras tears on his shoulder, he hugged her a bit tighter assuring her he was there for her,
Antra still sobbing on Raghus shoulder: itney daar laga di... Pata hai mein kitnay daar gyi thi?
Raghu started moving his hand around Antras back, all the way to her middle back to her lower back
Raghu: mujhey nhai pata tay tum daar joan gi, I am sorry...
Antra closes her eyes and feels his soothing hands motion in her back
Raghu is also loving the way how Antras hairs are smelling he puts his face more onto her shoulder so he can feel her smell, and treasure it forever... Raghus hands get more naughty and move over to her upper back and as he moves his hand around he feels her bra strap, and just starts playing with it... Antra has completely lost her senses and is going into a different world with his touch...


So i know.it is a bad part to end, so to read the next part comment and hit those likes!
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tintin0602 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was an minddblowing part but do u really need to stop there. My gutter mind got activated in the end. God i cant wait to rwad more.. Please please please update soon .. I mean very soon.

N dont forget to pm me.

I just love there hug n that hand holding.. So perfect. Conti soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice i actually really liked but want to know more plz do update soon next part..!
Edited by sonu-monu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tintin0602

That was an minddblowing part but do u really need to stop there. My gutter mind got activated in the end. God i cant wait to rwad more.. Please please please update soon .. I mean very soon.

N dont forget to pm me.

I just love there hug n that hand holding.. So perfect. Conti soon



Thanks for liking it! Lolz I also have a HUGE gutter, majority of os are 18+ but just cuz this was my first on this forum, I thought I would go easy! 😳 😛 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Tintin 🤣 you are totally like me! HAHA

and @ topic maker, loves it! pm me please 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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U serious??!!! HOW COULD U stop there??!!! daammmnnn cant wait for the next part! gosh the they r holding each other!😳☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: zzinia2411

U serious??!!! HOW COULD U stop there??!!! daammmnnn cant wait for the next part! gosh the they r holding each other!😳☺️

Thank you, so much for liking it, and awww don't worry i will update soon, maybe by tomorrow or something, lets!😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part Two;
His touch is making antra go crazy, raghu hands go to her bare skin at the top of her kameez... Antra leaves a small moan, finally raghu can't control anymore so he goes and kisses antras shoulder nape , deep inside, this time antra leaves a bigger moan her eyes completely shut, just feeling this unknown feeling... Raghu kisses her around her neck more furiously but he is having difficulty due to her duppata keeps on coming in bwt, so he pulls her scarf out and throws it on the ground and antra is losing her mind, she has a tight grip around raghus neck her hands are playing with his hairs... Raghu moves over to her other shoulder and kissing her there as well, with his same force, leaving small love bites everywhere... Finally raghu moves to her cleavage spot and kisses her there, the sensation of raghus kiss was a lil to much for antra to handle, she let out a louder moan, which made ishhu scream from horror, suddenly antra and raghu break there motion and are awkwardly standing infrnt of each other ishu comes running towards antra and hugs him
Ishu: didi kya hua
Antra who is very ashamed of what has happened... Her eyes are down
Ishu: what happened
Raghu: kuch nhai hua, go and sleep
Ishu: acha didi come with me
Antra goes with ishu, soon ishaan falls asleep, but antra is wide awake and even raghu is awake sitting in the chair, both are want to talk to one another, but they can't get enough guts to face one another... Antra finally takes a peek over at raghu and see his eyes are closed, she take the opportunity to find her duppata, she looks everywhere but can't find, as soon as she turns around to go back to the seat where ishu was sleeping she sees raghu standing behind her holding her dupatta,, i Without making much eye contact , antra extended her hand forward but instead Raghu put the duppata on her head like a ghunghat, Antra couldn't believe what was happening she knew this was a start to something, something beautiful, something she never expected! :-)
That is all i hope you guyz like, it and i am sorry but i dont send out pms, they are too much of work! hope you guyz understand! :) So hopefully i write another hot os again, anyone have any indea what the next scene setting should be? leave it in the comments Yea i know it is a short part, next ones would be longer promise 😃😳
Edited by Mina H - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Areyyy Ishan ban gaya kabab mein haddi! :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was hot.. Bt a small one.

Well the next u cn do when the whole family was out except antra n raghu enters her house..

P.s. Der i asked u for ur index plese give me.. I wanna read ur work

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