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wow guys .. u both has written it soo beautifully ... wen apa jumped on d bed was hilarious n Raghu dialogue iz soo intense .. itz touch to mah heart too :-P n der eyelock mein bahon k darmiyaan background was perfect .. i lov ending part wen raghu was little naughty dat he want massage frm antara :-P .. tenxx for pm guys ..i enjoy alotz while reading it

Originally posted by: TALIRAlinda

thanks a lot for PM

beautiful OS

Originally posted by: ..eyecatchers..

Thanks for the PM both of you.
I am not an Indian but i understand it when it is spoken but i don't know how to read Hindi.
It's a little difficult task for me.
I hope you understand but I can say that you two must have written this after a lot of effort.

Originally posted by: aishwaryagayen

thanks for the pm hotties ... huh i l read and come back to let u know how was it ..good u guys are attempting writing on a new jodi .. i am still hooked on my old premeer and its the only jodi i can write about ... !! wil be back

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omg .. hillarious

aapa doing taaka jhaki and raghu bhaagoing .. banda sahi hai . pohocha to pohocha antara ke room mein hi pohocha .. and how can we forget the eye lock .. 🤣 inka koi kaam bina eye lock ke hota hai bhala

and heheehe raghu dancing . the mighty has fallen :P ... antara can onlly make him do this ... :P but our hero is hero ... came back with a retort .. i really wanna see a scene with antara massaging raghu :P ... i would die laughing ...!!!

Originally posted by: tintin0602

First of all thanks for the pm.
I just love the os. If possible continue... Love tbe way raghu pleaded antara not to tell anything to apa n that dialogue.. Mujhe bhukh lagi h.. Was so guttery. That part was so hot.
While readind the os i was imagining it n blushing

Originally posted by: gal.angel

wow guys .. u both has written it soo beautifully ... wen apa jumped on d bed was hilarious n Raghu dialogue iz soo intense .. itz touch to mah heart too :-P n der eyelock mein bahon k darmiyaan background was perfect .. i lov ending part wen raghu was little naughty dat he want massage frm antara :-P .. tenxx for pm guys ..i enjoy alotz while reading it

Originally posted by: ..Babydoll..

Awesome huh.. Itna lamba eyelock? oh yea eyelock toh lambe hi hote hai though was a nice touch *wink wink* Raghu dancing LOL bechara kahan phas gaya! :P Slow Dance was again nice touch...and Noor Apa toh just being herself 😆

Originally posted by: ifians

thx for the reply...😊

do update soon

Originally posted by: tintin0602

do update soon