RaShi OS : True love never dies..!(updated two parts.)

Hello friends this is my small contribution for the 200 epi celebrations.
This is the first time iam writing an Os in my life.so please spare me if i have done any mistakes..iam writing this from my mobile so please spare me.

part 1
Raghu and shivani,both were adamant about changing their decisions.Raghu was adamant about accepting shivani as his wife as he always felt like betraying maliksa whenever he thought shivani as his wife.He has always felt indebted to his maliksa for all the support to him and his family.Shivani was not at all ready to accept raghu as his naukar as she madly loved raghu for his utmost care towards her.She always felt incomplete without raghu even when she dint realize her feelings for him.He used to be her jaadugar and when she realized that cupid struck her and raghu is the man of her dreams,she began to see raghu at every place and in every man she came across.Shivani always loved dreaming about raghu and she used to dream raghu romancing her the most times.these were the mindsets of two souls raghu and shivani who are made for each other for sure but god was taking time to test them.


The other day shivani was waiting for raghu to return from office and then raghu has finally arrived greeting shivani"good evening babyji".
Good evening raghu ,sumithra is waiting for you raghu,told shivani and thought that actually i was waiting for you raghu.
"Yes babyji"told raghu by further enquiring shivani how the wedding celebrations going on..
"Everything is going great raghu "told shivani.
Shivani went upstairs and sat in the room thinking "my happiness is with raghus happiness."thought shivani further assuring her heart that her mans happiness is seeing me getting married to karan.
Shivani thinks of the night when whole thing of marriage started by herself accepting for the marriage.

(flashback)
shivani saw
Raghu was sitting in the dark with his maliksa's photo and crying that he cannot think of babyji as his wife at all,dont know why babyji is not understanding this"said raghu with the photograph.
He further told that"maliksa atleast you tell that i dont consider babyji as my wife.I can protect her for my whole life as naukar only.If i think of babyji as my wife i almost feel like dying and i know that babyjis happiness is not with me but it is with karan.karan loves shivani so much.I love to see shivani happy with karan and then i would be happily married to sumithra."
His eyes were moist and soon he felt asleep.
Shivani comes near to raghu and tells"Raghu so you want me to get married to karan,its impossible but my love for you make it possible man says shivani to the man who is asleep and leaves.
The next day shivani tells raghu that she is ready for the marriage with karan.
Raghu is quite happy and asks whether shivani is happy with that decision.shivani tells that yes my dear iam happy because you are.And raghu hugs shivani for the first time and shivani smiles and feels happy seeing that her man hugged her for the first time.(flashback over)
As soon as shivani comes downstairs she received a call from karan saying that he is arranging a special date for her in the evening.
Shivani tells"But karan tomo is our wedding so please no"
"thats the reason shivani.from tomo i can see you as my wife but not my lover so i wanted to make this day more special."said karan.
"But still"said shivani.
"No baba i even talked to raghu about this and even raghu and sumithra are coming with us"said karan.
"oh raghu is coming,then i will come too"said shivani.
Second part very soon.

Part 2

sumithra comes to shivani and ask her whether she has any jewellery matching her saree.shivani sees it and feels that the saree is not that great and asks sumi "if you dont mind,will you year this saree today.its looks great on you.blue really suits you."
Sumi is quite impressed with the saree and thinks that this saree is more beautiful than the one she has brought and takes it from shivani and thanks her.
Shivani is happy because she wants to see raghu happy.
Downstairs raghu calls the two ladies.
Shivani is all ready in a red saree and looks beautiful and comes down.raghus heart starts beating fast seeing shivani in a red saree and feels that a smile on her face would add more beauty.shivani sees raghu in a black blazer and thinks this man is exactly the man in my dreams and only in my dreams:(.
They share an eyelock then sumi comes down and she is beautiful too..
Sumi tells that he is looking like a hero.raghu is feeling shy.
Karan comes and asks raghu whether he can take shivani in his car.and asks them to come along with them.
Raghu says you can take babyji and we will come by an auto.shivani wants to come along with raghu but still leaves with karan..
They both sit in the car.karan says"shivani you are looking beautiful in red just like a rose and shivani too complements karan.
KaShi finally reach the place and karan asks whether shivani likes to have something.shivani says noting and karan asks shivani whether she wants to tell something to him on this special day.
Shivani says"karan,you know i always loved raghu so it will take sometime for me to accept you.I know you love me but iam really sorry karan".
Shivani,whatever the situation is ,i will always treat you as my best friend first and my wife at the last"said karan.
Shivani tels"thank you rockstar".
Karan says where there people got stucked.karan informs shivani that raghu told him that today he will propose.its a very special day for them.
"oh really "says sad shivani.
Raghu and sumithra too arrived and they greet each other and karan takes shivani for a dance and invites SumRa too.
They all dance on teri meri prem kahani hai mushkil.shivani is staring at raghu and raghu at shivani.
Then suddenly raghu goes on the stage and takes the mike..KaShi think that raghu is going to propose sumi atlast.and shivani is all sad again.
Raghu says"good evening ladies and gentlemen".all the crowd turn to him.he says"Iam here to propose to a gal who is really really special to me and i love her to the core but i have never known it.My gal is special and has left all her property to get love from me.she is so kindhearted and good natured that she always supported me when i was rejecting her too.and she was even ready to marry someone just because of me.and further added "babyji from the day you accepted karans marriage proposal iam missing the smile on your face for which i can even give my life.babyji you made the impossible to become possible.you made me fall for you.ATLAST IAM SPEAKING MY HEART BABY JI I LOVE YOU".I know that i have hurted you alot but kya karoon babyji main tumhare jaise romantic nahin hun buddhu hun.jo maliksa ne kaha main usse samaj nahi paya babyji.It took so long for me to understand that maliksa too wanted us to stay together."
Shivani thinks and checks whether she is dreaming.
Raghu says "i love you babyji"
shivani palm in karans and shivani looks at karan and karan leaves her hand and tells her"shivani go finally your love is calling you"
shivani runs on the stage and gives a tight hug to raghu and raghu holds her too.tears rolling down their eyes they say i love you to each other more than hundred times.
.raghu sits on one of his knees and asks"shivani will you marry me."
shivani surprisingly says"what did you say"
raghu hesitates to repeat the above line again..
Shivani hugs again and tells tum toh sach mein buddhu ho.
We are already married.dont waste money for tomos marriage again.
RaShi unite and karan and sumi too happy.
RaShi plan for a honeymoon that too in a park which is next to their galli as shivani does not want to make fusool karcha as honeymoon toh honeymoon hota hain chahe woh paris main ho ya gali mein.
HAPPY ENDING..
hope you liked it.

Very impressive start 👍🏼

I always felt that Shivani might eventually agree to marry Karan after she sees Raghu in private sulking in front of Maliksa's photo and then she might decide to sacrifice for his happiness and only after that he will realise her love ...

Loved the start .. waiting for the next part now .. I m sure date gonna b awesome with RaShi attracted to each other 😉

Great story Uma.

Awww the second part is so adorable .. I can see this happening in future where Raghu will surprise Shivani by going down on his knees and proposing her finally .. cant wait for that day to arrive .. and now I so want to see Shivani in red saree only and Raghu in suit when the confession comes 😆😳


Nicely written Uma 👏👏

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Very impressive start👍🏼

I always felt that Shivani might eventually agree to marry Karan after she sees Raghu in private sulking in front of Maliksa's photo and then she might decide to sacrifice for his happiness and only after that he will realise her love ...

Loved the start .. waiting for the next part now .. I m sure date gonna b awesome with RaShi attracted to each other 😉

thank you so much di...iam happy that you liked it.

Wow Uma just fantastic👏👏👏👏

Loved it, so well written, you should do more, you have a talent for it.

In your OS all the characters were positive even Sumi, really liked that aspect of it.

It was so romantic, the way Raghu proposed to her in front of everybody

Originally posted by: awida

Great story Uma.

Can't wait for the second part.

I have nothing against Karan. He'll be a good husband for Shivani. Can't say the same thing about Sumi .🤢As for Raghu I don't want to say any thing. I know I'll end up scolding him.😡

thank you so much itidal.updated the second part too.please do read it.

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Awww the second part is so adorable .. I can see this happening in future where Raghu will surprise Shivani by going down on his knees and proposing her finally .. cant wait for that day to arrive .. and now I so want to see Shivani in red saree only and Raghu in suit when the confession comes😆😳


Nicely written Uma 👏👏

thank you once again di..actually i was sceptic about writing.but now happy

Originally posted by: rekrn

Wow Uma just fantastic👏

Loved it, so well written, you should do more, you have a talent for it.

In your OS all the characters were positive even Sumi, really liked that aspect of it.

It was so romantic, the way Raghu proposed to her in front of everybody

thank you so so much di...glad that you liked it..will try to do more