OS-Bandhe ek dori se... A query on pg 4

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rekrn

@rekrn

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Wow a wonderful OS. 👏⭐️

Beautifully written. Loving your Shivani she is headstrong but she still has that lovable quality.

Love how Raghu knows how to handle her and he is suspicious of Abhi.

Thoroughly enjoyed it.

Looking forward to the next update.

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awida

@awida

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: kautilya04

Thank you dearie 😳

Yeah, that is what I wanted to show about their bond 😳 I was worried it wouldn't come across, but your words were so encouraging :) Lekin yeh toh OS hain, so no update! 😛😆 🤗

No update?😲

Then plz..write another OS.

I loved your way of writing , dialogues, and description. 👏

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Snigdha

@Snigdha_Khanam

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Awesome OS.Very well written.enjoyed reading it.loved the bond between RS..Nice new year gift.thank u :-) keep writing more..

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Latha.I

@Latha.I

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

very nicely written...dear...

loved it...keep writing...👏

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kautilya04

@kautilya04

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Renu111
wow ranju very nice os..and i like this shivani...and the incidence u take from the show...plz continue... 😳

Thanks Renu :) i guess you're talking about the Doli :D I'd liked the idea of a gift a lot. I felt it signified many things😳, so...😆😳

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kautilya04

@kautilya04

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: rekrn
Wow a wonderful OS. 👏⭐️

Beautifully written. Loving your Shivani she is headstrong but she still has that lovable quality.

Love how Raghu knows how to handle her and he is suspicious of Abhi.

Thoroughly enjoyed it.

Looking forward to the next update.

Thank you so much Rekha :) I wrote it crazily in a few hours so I was really hesitant to put it up😆, I went ahead because of the support shown by you amazing guys 😳

It's a one-shot so there won't be further update :/ sowwieee :(

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kautilya04

@kautilya04

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: awida

No update?😲

Then plz..write another OS.

I loved your way of writing , dialogues, and description. 👏

Sure dear, if something strikes me I'll write another OS 😳 Thanks again for the encouragement!

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kautilya04

@kautilya04

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Snigdha_Khanam
Awesome OS.Very well written.enjoyed reading it.loved the bond between RS..Nice new year gift.thank u :-) keep writing more..

Hey thanks a lot for reading and commenting 😳 and you're welcome! :)