OS:Based on the spoiler

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi friends,
I have never written any os till now.so please ignore if there are any mistakes.

Sandhya writes in the paper that she wishes the child to fulfill her dreams which sandhya herself could not do.

there comes a

-flashback-of sandhya standing beside her father dreaming to become an IPS one day...

at that point of time sandhya never thought that she would be married to a halwai.even though she initially disliked him she never imagined that she would eventually fall in love with him.

-flashback ends-

the paper somehow reaches suraj's hands and he is astonished to see this.
he slowly starts realizing the hidden meaning of all the words of Sandhya up to date...
the way sandhya felt happy on being bestowed upon the inspector's cap even when it was for a moment...

he then comes to reality and once again reads the paper to confirm whether what he read was written there or it is only his mind's illusion...

after reading it once again he finds bhaboo standing beside him

bhaboo asks him what he is doing here and tells him to come as everybody is waiting for him..

suraj quickly folds the paper and says her that he is coming and goes behind his mother...

suraj realises his position now between jeevan sathi wife Sandhya and his janamdhata bhaboo.

Suraj is in a dilemma. Suraj understands that in either of the way he has to see one of the women in distress...

If Suraj encourages Sandhya to become an IPS officer he has to see his mother distancing herself from him and if he remains silent and let the life go it's way Sandhya would never be able to achieve her goal by the result of which she will never be happy wholeheartedly even if she manages to plaster a smile on her face in her whole life.

Suraj decides to himself and takes a strong decision in front of God that she will fulfill Sandhya's dream with Bhaboo's approval in any way...

PS:once again sorry for any mistakes.please like and comment.
thanks for all those who liked and commented in advance🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice OS Priya. Something of this sort will happen in DABH as well, and you have nicely picturised the scenes. The dilemma of Suraj is nicely portrayed as well.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: SAIBALROUTH

Nice OS Priya. Something of this sort will happen in DABH as well, and you have nicely picturised the scenes. The dilemma of Suraj is nicely portrayed as well.

thank you so much😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priya_990

thank you so much😃



You are welcome dear. 😃 😃 Continue writing, waiting for your next part. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: SAIBALROUTH



You are welcome dear. 😃 😃 Continue writing, waiting for your next part. 😃

well i have not decided about it.
i thought of keeping it as a one shot.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was Very Apt to Cvz thought


He is in the Midway between Janmadhata and Jeevan Sathi

If he want sandhya Body ,Mind Present state then he has to see his Mother Distancing Form him

If he dont like to hurt his Mother then Suraj has to see Sandhya plastering her Mouth without Light reflecting Smiles

He Surely Need to take a strong Decision in way Neither of them gets Hurted.

this is What the Cvz will show

Nice and Exact OS to current Track


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: _srija_


it was Very Apt to Cvz thought


He is in the Midway between Janmadhata and Jeevan Sathi

If he want sandhya Body ,Mind Present state then he has to see his Mother Distancing Form him

If he dont like to hurt his Mother then Suraj has to see Sandhya plastering her Mouth without Light reflecting Smiles

He Surely Need to take a strong Decision in way Neither of them gets Hurted.

this is What the Cvz will show

Nice and Exact OS to current Track



thanks for your wonderful comment😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely os 👏 i could actually visualise it happening ..
good going dear keep writing
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shehjar

lovely os 👏 i could actually visualise it happening ..

good going dear keep writing

Hey thanks a lot.you made may day.😊😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice OS Priya.This is going to happen in the subsequent episodes.Suraj is no different from most Indian men.They are also often torn between their wife and mother.Convincing Bhabo for higher studies will be difficult,and IPS ALMOST IMPOSSIBLE.It will be interesting to see how the CVs handle this one.I for one am strictly against Bhabo being kept in the dark over this issue and Sandhya secretively pursuing it with Suraj's help.

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