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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey im back with another chapter in drishkit life..its a long one as evryone requested...

You can find first part here

/forum/divya-drishti/5086106/soulmate-ff-p1

Second part here

/forum/divya-drishti/5086244/soulmate-ff-p2

Third part here

/forum/divya-drishti/5086669/soulmates-ff-p3

Fourth part here

/forum/divya-drishti/5087217/soulmates-ff-p4

Fifth part here

/forum/divya-drishti/5087904/soulmates-ff-p5

Sixth part here

/forum/divya-drishti/5088233/soulmates-ff-p6

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Pls dont comment awesome loved it. I want to know which scene you people liked and disliked. Any suggestions for the further story . Anything is welcome..thanks

Saru



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Posted: 6 years ago
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Rakshit!! Shouted dristi seeing him falling on the ground. I wont let anyrhing happen to you. O god! Please save my rakshit!

Tumhari muh se meri naam sunkar acha laga mrs shergill! Tumhe farak padtha hai! Saying so he went limp in her arms.

Dristi lifted him with difficulty and took him to hut and laid him on hay bed. She looked at the wounds on his neck hands and back of his body and was shocked to see the amount of blood loss.

O god! What to do she panicked. Dristiiii calm down calm down u cant help rakshit this way pls apne aap ko control karo. She took deep breaths and removed his shirt and looked at him.

He is still unconscious. Seeing him this tore her heart. She cried her heart out remembering the way he fought for her and stood by her everytime .She controlled herself and went in search of herbs . She plucked some leaves and made a paste of them and ran back to the hut.

She shifted him gently to her lap and began to apply that herbs paste on his hands. She remembered the touch of his hands and how gently he applied medicine on her wounds. Tears fell from her eyes on his face and he slowly moved.

Dristi!! He mumbled . Ru ok?

Im ok mr shergill how ru feeling now. Pls dont move. Im applying herbs paste it will cease the blood flow.Stay.

Rakshit looked at her face and knew she was crying for a long time. He gently touched her face and trailed his fingers on her cheeks. Pls dont cry! You know i cant bear your tears. This pain is nothing infront of that. Pls mrs shergill !

Aap ko kuch hojatato ? how can i ....i cant bear to loose you. I told you we will leave from there ..kyun nahi mane aap meri baat dekho ab kya hua mein aap ko khonahisakthihu. Itni himmat nahi hai mujme rakshit sir.

Dristi pls look at me . I am fine . These wounds will heal in time its nothing major.

Nothing major ? Did u know the amount of blood you lost? You have any idea what i must have gone through by seeing you in this condition.

Rakshit remembered something and chuckled to himself .

Dristi lost her cool. What? Why ru laughing damn it? Am i looking like a joker to you ? She shouted on him.

No mrs shergill! I just remembered the way i used to panic whenever u got hurt but u never cared . Aaj role reversal dekhar hasi ayi thats it. Sorry.

He looked up to her to see her eyes brewing with fresh tears. He got up from her lap and sat near her wincing in pain.

Seeing him in pain dristi forgot her anger and begam to apply paste on his neck. He winced in pain and held her hand tightly.

Usshhh ..kuch nahi hoga aap ko main hoon na hold me . I will apply it slowly dont worry you will be ok soon. Saying so she held him and started to apply it on his neck.

Sensing him so close to her that she can even feel breath on her face she suddenly began to get flashes of holi where she applied colors to him and remembered the way she ran her hand on his face and neck. She could tell by the look on his face that he knows she is thinking about that.

Mrs shergill . Ru thinking about what i am thinking right now? Do u remember what happened on holi?

She was at loss of words. She just kept on doing what she is doing. She told him to turn so that she can apply on his back. He turned back and thought what drisiti must be thinking now? Is she feels the same way about me ? Did she remember what happened on holi?

Dristi who was so embarrassed by that time felt releived when he turned his back. She applied herbs paste and called him out .

Mr shergill can i ask you something. Did u had any kind of relationship with lavanya? Did u love her at any point of time? Pls tell me the truth!

Rakshit who was expecting something else got shocked at her question and turned sharply to look at her. What's wrong with you ? What kind of question was that? Everyone knows i dont love her. I agree i proposed marriage to her on my moms saying otherthan that i dont feel anything for her. She doesn't hold importance in my life like you do.

I asked you this because on that day after party when i was going to our room i met her on the way . She asked me y did i snatch you from her? She said whatever i do i cant take her place in your life. She called me lawaris low class and what not. I couldnt take it anymore . Am i that bad mr shergill? Saying so she started crying.

Hearing her confessing all these he remembered the way she broke down on that day. His heart went out to her.He will deal with lavanya later. First he needs to care of dristi.

Mrs shergill just look at me. Lavanya was and will never be in my life. I never loved her nor will do . She doesn't exist for me. She is just wife of my yoinger brother thats it and i know what and whom i want in my life .

He wiped her tears and looked into her eyes and slowly took her on his arms. She hugged him .

He heard her heart beating so loudly and said kya hua mrs shergill tumhara dil itna jor se kyun dadhak rahahai.. tumhe bhi kuch mehsoos hota hai mere liye. Bolo?

Nahi kuch nahi mehsoos hotahai mujhe.

Jhoot kyun bolrahiho mrs shergill ? I know what you feel about me. Dont u really care and feel anything for me?

Saying so he gently brushed his lips on the nape of her neck and felt her shudder. He slid his hand around her neck and lifted her face up and saw nothing but pleasure in her eyes. He planted a kiss on both the eyes and began to gently caress her cheek. He began to loose control over himself by seeing her so close.

But this has to wait . He knows there is attraction n also care was there but he knows nothing about her life except what chachi told that she was an orphan . He needs to know why she married him in the first place while she refused all the time he proposed her indirectly. And her anxiety issues and fire phobia. He need what happened to her parents and everything about her . For that first he has to win her trust. He slowly released her.

Dristi who was caught in swirl of emotions by then looked up only to find rakshit looking into her eyes. Kya hua ?

Kuch nahi mrs shergill tum aisi hi mujhe dekhthe rahegi to main kuch aisa karunga ki tum ...

She got hold on her emotions by then and asked him playfully kya irada hai appka ..kuch gadbad to ...

Nahi mrs shergill till i dont win over your heart and mind completely i wont do anything that will break your heart and most importantly ur trust. That's my promise.

Both of them looked at each other and realised how far they have come. Dristi without saying anything further just hugged him and buried her face in nape of his neck and felt at home.

He hugged her back and felt at peace.

Precap. Heart to heart conversation between mr and mrs.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Fantastic

Beautifully penned 👍🏼

there is not a bit i disliked, totally in love wid the way u describe the situation n emotions of the characters

Wish to see ur Mr shergill in the show

Update the next part soon

thx for the pm😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wonderful updt

I loved each nd every scene..

Wow both remembered holi scene😍..the way Rakshit said tumhe fark padta hai it was so lovely.. beautifully written both of their emotions nd how Rakshit controlled himself nd their hug in last❤️

Lets see Ms Lava ka kya hoga wapas jane ke baad😆

Cont soooon

Thnx for pm

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Woah..it was amazing again..and the precap is super exciting! I really like heart to heart conversations and I was thinking about suggesting you something like that only that since they are having some alone time they can have some such moments and it seems you already had that in your mind😊 Waiting for next update keenly 😁😁 Also thank you for the PM 😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome update

Love it

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chit15

Fabulous update👍🏼


Thanks dear

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sobiya153

Fantastic

Beautifully penned 👍🏼

there is not a bit i disliked, totally in love wid the way u describe the situation n emotions of the characters

Wish to see ur Mr shergill in the show

Update the next part soon

thx for the pm😊

Hey sobiya

Thanks for the comment. Im glad u liked it so far.. will update soon stay tuned..

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ariyatogether

Wonderful updt

I loved each nd every scene..

Wow both remembered holi scene😍..the way Rakshit said tumhe fark padta hai it was so lovely.. beautifully written both of their emotions nd how Rakshit controlled himself nd their hug in last❤️

Lets see Ms Lava ka kya hoga wapas jane ke baad😆

Cont soooon

Thnx for pm

Aww rashi finally u did a comment other than awesome loved it.lol

Thank you so much dear. Lava ka kya hoga yeto next part mein pata chalijayega lol.

Will update soon

Hugs

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Silver_dew11

Woah..it was amazing again..and the precap is super exciting! I really like heart to heart conversations and I was thinking about suggesting you something like that only that since they are having some alone time they can have some such moments and it seems you already had that in your mind😊 Waiting for next update keenly 😁😁 Also thank you for the PM 😊

Thanks dear. Shreya right??

Ur comment means alot..thanks fore reading.im glad u liked it and yes im a sucker for emotional connect too more than romance . So it reflects in my writing

Will update at night. Stay tuned..

Hugs

Saru

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