AR/AK FF *Dil Vil Pyar Vyar* parts 17&18 NEW - Page 9

Originally posted by: Jodubai

WOW! meethi, loved it....I don;t think you need any
suggestions, you are good, as it is 😉 . I think you have a very clear idea how
you want your characters to behave...which is great!
Loved the interaction between the 2 couples so far...its nice...rch spolit brat
& gussewali ladki....ladkiya bhav nahi khaegi tho kaun kayega???
Very cool....do continue soon...thanks for the pm

thanks soni

i thought all had forgotten my ff already....

will update soon...
meethi 😊

OMG Meethi I Loved it!👏👏..It doesn't seems it ur first FF😉!..
Loved the two couples😳😳!..
Ladkiyaan hoti hi hai bhav khane ke liye!!😉😆😃....Ladkiyan nahi bhav khayengi to kya ladke khayenge!😆😆😳

Thanks for the PM hun!...Continue soon!😉

-Kanika❤️😳

amzng superb prt... armi angad convo was small bt superb!!!!!!!! sapna n mothers convo was gr888
kripa was a very responsible gurl... n d sisters dey r amzng n daruwala n atul... wow dat was hilarious......
gr88 prt.... charachters r amzng n evolvng day b day.. thnxx 4 d pm... update soon.. luvd dis prt 👏

really a nice one just superb please continue it soon and thanks for the pm 👏

Koi khwab in aankho ne sajaya hi nhi, Hmare dil ki gehrai ko koi smajh paya hi nhi. Kisi ko mehsus ho KAMI hmari, Khuda ne hame aisa bnaya hi nhi.

Zindagi hai chhoti, har pal mein khush raho…
Office me khush reho, ghar mein khush raho..
Aaj paneer nahi hai, dal mein hi khush raho,
Aaj gym jane ka samay nahi, do kadam chal ke he khush raho..
Aaj Doston ka sath nahi, TV dekh ke hi khush raho..
Ladki pataa nahi sakte to us ke Sapne dekh ke khush

hey,nice part...tooo gud....continue soon...m very xcited...
thanx 4 d pm..

Hey Meethi..U r tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oo good yaa! 😃 I loved it very much..Ladkia v naa 😆 😆 😆 Do count soon & thanx 4d pm. 😃 👏

Originally posted by: *K@nik@*

OMG Meethi I Loved it!👏
👏..It doesn't seems it ur first FF😉!..Loved the two couples😳[:
$]!..Ladkiyaan hoti hi hai bhav khane ke liye!!😉😆😃....Ladkiyan nahi
bhav khayengi to kya ladke khayenge!😆😆😳

Thanks for the PM hun!...Continue soon!😉

-Kanika❤️😳

thanks kanika 😳 😳

meethi 😊

Originally posted by: meow23

amzng superb prt... armi angad convo was small bt
superb!!!!!!!! sapna n mothers convo was gr888
kripa was a very responsible gurl... n d sisters dey r amzng n daruwala n
atul... wow dat was hilarious......
gr88 prt.... charachters r amzng n evolvng day b day.. thnxx 4 d pm...
update soon.. luvd dis prt 👏

hey thanks!!
meethi 😊

Originally posted by: kvn1983

really a nice one just superb please continue it soon and
thanks for the pm 👏
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thanks nidha
meethi 😊

woww 👏
nice part
keep it up
continue soonn