new ff part 1

hi

its my first fanfic n i am starting from last episode

ridhima=ri,arman=ar,atul=at,angie=an,muskan=mu,rahul=ra

here it goes

part 1

in lonavla (next day)at night

ra=hi ridhima,kam ho gaya

ri=ya,thak gay hun sooch rahi hun soo gaoon

ra=abhi tu sab bache lohri khelne lage hain ,ap humare saath join karein gi?it would be my pleasure

ri=ok .......lets go

next ide at muskan house

ar=kahan phaas gay mein ,dill karta hai abhi ur kar wapis chala gaoon

muskan enters

mu=are yaar tum yahan kia kar rahe ho tayar nahi hoi ,gana nahi hai kia lohri keh lia?

ar=tum ...tumhein tu dill karta hai mar hi dun .......

mu=are yaar yeah kia bol rahe ho ,plzzzzzz galdi se tayar ho gao aur neeche a gao,nai to mein mar gaon gi

ar=acha chalo mein a raha hun

n they go down ,arman n muskan play lohri........arman was enjoying n suddenly relisis abut ridhima n gets up set where as muskan was enjoying .......arman stop n go at side

mu=kia hoa .yahan kiun a gay ho

ar=kuch nahi wese hi .chalo chalein

at other side

rahul n kids play lohri while ri was sitting on the bench n thnking of arman

ra=ap nahi khelo gi humare saath

ri=nahi mera dill nahi hai

ra=gesi app ki marzi

on next side announcment of arman n muskan wedding

arman shoked n hold muskan hand n ask her

ar=yeah sab kia hai

mu=humari shadi aur kia

ar=mein tum se shadi nahi karoon ga...i m sry

mu=tu tumhare saath kon kar raha hai ...jhoot ki karlo yaar...mere careear ka sawal hai...plz

ar=thik hai liken sirf mazak mein...aur yeah baat sanjeevani mein nahi pata chalni chahy

mu=paka nahi pata chale gi

then ......................after one day it was there marige some how it passed n now arman n muskan was coming back to sanjeevani.arman was really worried abut ridzzz,that if she nows abut this then what will she say....then he though keh atul neh kia kaha tha (not to tell to ridz)then he decided not to tell to ridz..after some while they arived hospital

ar to an=ridz ko dekha hai kahein

an =woh to lonavala gai hoi hai rahul keh saath abhi puhnchne wali hai

voice came from back hi di.............it was off ridzz....arman tensed

ri=hi di hi arman(n huged angi)

then every thing back to normal for one week ......one day at staires ridhima was walking some one pulled her hand n it was arman

ri=tum ....kia kar rahe hoo(he was holding her waist) muhe gana hai

ar=kahan mughe chor kar

ri=mughe kam hai bad mein milte hain ok

ar=ok then bye

in the locker room ridz was coming n no one there n she was putting things in locker room n some one pulled her hand n it was atman he hold her hands at back tightly

ri=tum yahan kia kar rahe ho

ar=jo tum kar rahe ho...acha tumhein pata hai mein nai tumhein kitna miss kia

ri=oh tu tum mughe miss bhi karte hoo

ar= han ji

ri=jhoote agar karte hote to mughe call karte ...tum neh tu ki hi nahi

ar=mein nai ki thi ..liken network nahi tha

ri=achaa choro mughe jana hai koi a gay ga..(arman coming closer)

ar=to ane do ...

suddenly muskan n atul came they both were in changing room

ri came out n arman after him atul didnt relize it

now days passed one day muskans whole family arrived in hospital

ar n mu shocked n looked at each other

now what..........................................

plz do leave comments i am waiting?.........................

yay first 2 reply
sound really gd
continue soon

hi,wow great yarh you are starting your story from the last episode,pls do continue soon.wanna know whats happening after this

To Every one

u can also comtinue
its not imp only i will comtinue ,bec i thnk every one shud get a chance
so every one can write here
share ur comments that what will happend next

heya plz continue soon.....i lyked it.....
luv ur ff
ishiqa

yeah ure rite everyone should get a chance to continue so plzzz someone do continue