Little Hearts - An Arsh FS - Ch 4 updated

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Hey Divs,

Finally we get to read something from you. I loved it. A beautiful concept & very well executed.

I loved it Divs. Loved Ammy & Shona. My heart went out to them as their parents told them about moving away from India. Seriously they share such a strong bond that it'll be hard to stay apart.

Looking forward to the next part.

Update soon.

Love..

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Hey Divs,

Liked the concept and the first update too. Poor babies being separated by fate 😭

Though I read only on ASYA, but there are only three writers who have been able to make me read other couples, Tamara and Juliet for SAHIL and Vini for Arsh. I hope I can add your name to the list too 😃

I would love to receive PMS for this story. Looking forward to the next update ❤️

Edited by ChocoBerry - 10 years ago

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

hey...That was such an awsumm concept...and beautifully written..!! Too good..!!

M so eagerly waiting for next part..!! Plz if possible do pm me for ur next part..!!

continuee soon..!!

take care..:)

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prachi

@Ar_Asyafan

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Nice one dear..
Do continue soon...

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Miss-Appy

@Miss-Appy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Awww my sistzr !!!! 🤗 u dont know how much i missed u ! ❤️
Divya, why the hell did u hide this talent of urs ?! 😡 😆 u should have started writing before, my writer sis ! 😳 ❤️
Coming to the concept, i loved it ! ❤️ ArSh as kiddoes !! 😆 as if they were not when they r adults !! 😆
Loved their bonding ! 😳 and Ridz as a despo as usual ! 😡 😆
I absolutely loved Ammy's gift to her !! ❤️
Aswww they r getting separated ! 🥺
Amazing sissy !! Update soon ! 🤗

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

interesting...

amazing...

luv it...

fabulous concept...

thx fr the pm...

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Divya.S.R

@Divya.S.R

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: vinita459
At last it's here 😊

Great job Divs 👏

Interesting concept and I totally love my chutku Ammy and Shona 😳

Weird and chubby Riddhima is a treat 😆

Okay... Now update the next part fast 😛

Love u 🤗

Awww... Thanks didu.. 😳😃

couldn't have done it without your help.. 🤗

I know.. Chutku Ammy and Shona are always cute.. ❤️

Will update next week if the update is done.. 😃

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Divya.S.R

@Divya.S.R

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: aman93
superb story.. u wrote so well

Thanks a lot Aman.. 😃

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Divya.S.R

@Divya.S.R

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: moonlight2630
Amazing start
Nice. Love ARSH bonding.
Thanks for pm and update soon.

Thanks a lot..😃

will pm for the next update on.. 😊

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Divya.S.R

@Divya.S.R

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll
First of all welcome to the arsh story town...
And wow...
It's awesome and mind blowing prologue...
Just loved it...
Ammy and shona...
To cute...
Hahaha...
Weired and chubby riddhima...
I liked it...
Do continue soon...
And please pm me..

Thanks.. I used to read the stories.. This is my first shot at writing.. 😳

It's the first chapter not a prologue 😃

Ammy and Shona are always cute... 😃

will pm you for the next update... 😊