Sid Ridz OS:-What I could never say-final part pg5 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
superb OS!!! extremely hilarious!!!!

arman is superb in this .... haha sid n armaan share a great bond together... please continue!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: supercool3

loved it yaar 👏

this line especially cracked me up
You may have felt India
may not be open as America is so here I was just ....


🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣



Thanks Supercool. I will continue today or tomorrow.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: uppaas

It was really good..........Please continue and yes this needs to happen real fast.

CVS please read this post and get going with SR



Thanks for your support.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Pocahontas

Armaan(Happy that Sid finally is opening up):- Accha, Now I understand why you did what you did. You ASSUMED(puts lot of emphasis on this word) that Riddhima would be happy with me, She wouldn't want to leave you because of marriage and that if you pushed her away with your hurt words and taunts she would find solace in me and we would be happy someone in future. WOW.
I must say Kaamal ka assumption hai yaar. You have crossed all borders of imagination with your theory.



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This OS is FANTASTIC , Sarady! This is exactly how i expect Armaan to handle Sid. I hope creatives do it this way- Armaan breaking down Sid layer-by-layer!

Please continue soooooooooooooooooooon!

Love and luck to you always,❤️

GOD bless always.🤗

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Poco you really think the OS was good. I mean coming that from you would be like the best compliment.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: wow123

Thats the problem of the show that knows talk straight forward.

If all sit talk what their hearts exactly mean than every one comes at peace.



Yup I too want the show to go straight now. Enough of going in circles and some more circles.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: nikita_88

Awesome OS!

I loved how you showed Sid's realisation!!



Thanks Nikita. Glad that you liked it.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#17


Thanks I will update it today or tomorrow.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
Great start
This is how Sid should know about the DP and everything else
Pls continue 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Lennie

Great start

This is how Sid should know about the DP and everything else
Pls continue 😊



Thanks Lennie. Tune in for the second part.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
This is the second part of the OS.

Recap:- Armaan finally gets Sid to realize that Riddhima never signed the divorce papers because of him but infact wanted to move on in life with Sid.Sid is now extremely sad that he pushed Riddhima away with his behavior when she was trying to be his wife.

Ab aage

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Part - 2

Sid is still sitting on the Sofa after Armaan tells all the truth regarding Armaan Riddhima's Lonovala trip and the reason why Riddhima has signed the divorce papers. Sid is now feeling extremely bad as he pushed his wife away and more than that he hurt her a lot with his taunts and his angry words and caused her to feel extreme pain. Sid just sits there unable to do
anything and looks lost as he remembers each and every taunt he said to Riddhima.

Sid(Thinking):- Riddhima what did I do. I have heard that people lose their most precious things by chance but here I have done the same but rather I thought you wanted it. Poor girl she was so happy to see me break her fast on Karva Chauth and I taunted her and her commitment towards our marriage. Isn't it one of the oaths that a husband takes that he will abide by his
wife in all her happiness and in sickness and health and what did I do. I gave her the grief that is going to last a long time.

Armaan(seeing that Sid is just sitting):- Sid what are you now thinking. The time to think and plan is long gone. If you want Riddhima back in your life, you know what you should do. Come on Man what are you waiting for. Go on and get your love back. Love rarely comes back to us the second time Sid and when it does you should grab it and never let it go. Trust this as it is coming from me.

Sid(at the last sentence looks up to Armaan):- Armaan I don't know what to tell you. I taunted you too a lot but still you came and told me the truth when there was least chance of me listening to you. I don't know how I can thank you and even if a simple thank you is going to suffice for all that you have done. I am .....

Armaan(cuts short Sid):- No need to thank me Sid. You already did that by taking care of Riddhima when she was down in life after Panchagani. I will say the truth. I came all along to Sanjeevani to get Riddhima back but now I am happy that Riddhima is with a man who deserves her. Maybe some other life I will get my Riddhima back and at that time I will be sure that I will
not repeat the same mistake again of leaving her. Now you go and get your wife back and tell the people in your apartment that you are not gay. Samjahe(and slaps him slightly).


Sid is happy and wipes his tears and gives a bear hug to Armaan and rushes out of his house.

Sid(while taking his car keys):- Armaan I am leaving now. Please feel free to be in the house and if you want to leave, lock the house and give the keys to Su. Here is the lock. Bye.

Sid drives like maniac to Dr.Shashank's house. He rings the bell and waits.

Sid(thinking):- Riddhima please be safe and please be in house. I want to talk to you and take you back to my house as my life, my wife. I can believe I was such a fool. Oh god please I ask you this one great favor. Please let Riddhima listen to me just this once.

The servant opens the bell and Sid's eyes searches for Riddhima.

Servant:- Siddhant Babu Aap. How did you come in.

Sid:- Haan. I came by to meet Riddhima. Is she in. Tell her I came to meet her or better yet I will go talk to her myself(and tries to go to Riddhima's room).

Servant:- Rukhiye Siddhant Babu. Riddhima didi is not at home. She left around 2 hrs ago and she just gave a letter to me to give it to Bade saheb when he comes home.

Sid:- Nahin hai. What do you mean Riddhima is not at home. Where could she go at this time. Can you show me the letter.

Servant:- Ji rukhiye. I will get it right now.

The servant goes and gets the letter and gives it to Sid.

Sid opens the letter and tries to read it.

The letter


Dear papa,

Kya baatao aapko. I had never felt this weak and kamzoor all my life. Since the childhood you were always my strength and the person I looked up to and now I am feeling defeated in my life. I so want you here but I know you are gone out for duty and I have learnt from you what commitmment towards duty means. Papa today I have lost it, papa. Lost all my hope and all my dreams. Lost all the feelings and the desire to live.

It was my fault Papa. Solely my fault. When Armaan came back myself and Sid were growing close and were getting to trust each other. I should have said to him that Armaan is back in our lives, No I should have said to him that though Armaan is back in our lives I want him to be with me and with him besides me I can brave my past. But I didn't do that. I didn't realize at that moment that Sid has already made his impact on me and I was slowly and gradually getting attracted to his good nature. I was confused and I didn't know what I wanted. I just kept on crying and didn't decide anything. Sid tried a lot to ask my opinion but since I was so confused I couldn't tell him anything straight. I don't know what I wanted back then papa but by the time I realized that Sid has become my husband not only in name but in feeling too, it was too late.Haan papa I think I have lost Sid in Lonovala papa. Ironic isn't it. It was in Lonovala that I realized that Sid has become more to me and has become my husband in feeling too and there I lost him. I couldn't gain him back in Sanjeevani and in his house. Now I have no hope of him coming back to my life. I can't bear to be here in Sanjeevani with him so I am going.

Aapki beti,
-Riddhima

Sid is like getting the second shock in his life that evening. How can this happen to him. He lost his love and now after Armaan telling the whole truth he thought of getting Riddhima back and now she is gone somewhere. Gone and she didn't say where.

For a moment there Sid is tensed.

Sid(thinking):- Where could she go. At this time. I need to find her. Riddhima I have let you go once. Not any more. I will find you my wife.

Sid(to the servant):- Do you know where she went. Did she tell you where she is going.

Servant(thinks hard):- Ji, She didn't say anything. (thinks some more) Haan Yaad aaya. She said she is going where she can get some peace for a few days.

Sid(Hearing the last line):- What peace for some days.

Suddenly Sid realizes where Riddhima could have gone and he has the brightest smile on his face.

Sid(to the servant):- Do me a favor and don't tell Dr.Shashank anything till I tell you. I know where Riddhima has gone and I will get her back. Let's hope I do it before your Bade Saheb returns.

Servant(nodding):- Ji aisa hi hoga.

Sid takes the letter and leaves from Dr.Gupta's residence. He sits in his car and thinks he will get Riddhima to him at all costs and then starts the car.

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Please do post comments and let me know how you are liking this OS so far. Most probably the third part would be my last.

Edited by psarada - 15 years ago

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