SR - One Shot - the first touch - part 3

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prerna4rishav

@prerna4rishav

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

OMG I HATE suspense ☺️

LOVEDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD the OS.. OMG, we have such brilliant writers all around :D

Plz plz continue damn it 😃

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Maha_Sid-dewani

@Maha_Sid-dewani

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Mars35913062

Thanks ka7eela,😊 thanks for your support, but I think it would be difficult for me to survive by just selling one copy of my novel.
The flip side of this of post is that you can save some money by not buying a blush-on.😃

i'll buy a copy tooo!!!

u r brilliant!! loved it totally!!!
the last part was..................😳

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Sabz

@romiosugar1

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

OMG........my morning started with such a romantic OS. Am so great that I saw this OS. Aww.......so romantic and awesome (my stomach got a butterfly....lol). I loved it and throughly enjoyed while reading it. Superb job yaar. Keep it up. Well done. I hope, we get to see more SR os in near future from you.

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mabel

@mabel

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

it couldnt get more sensous...i was blushing so much dat i went pink forcin my dad 2 ask wat happend...lol....

wow...its amazing....luvd every bit of wat u wrote....

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Mars35913062

@Mars35913062

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: mabel
it couldnt get more sensous...i was blushing so much dat i went pink forcin my dad 2 ask wat happend...lol....
wow...its amazing....luvd every bit of wat u wrote....

I hope you made your dad read my little disclaimer too. 😳

Those consultants who gave me their valuable professional advice to proceed with this .. " haan haan theek hai chaley ga! koi khas baat nahin hai.😈...Tum logon se toh mein baad mein nibdhoon ga.😡

I have made my disclaimer more specific.😊

Edited by Mars35913062 - 15 years ago

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pavs

@pavs

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

this was just ultimate...da way uve written the scene sensuousness drips from each n every nook n corner ...plzzz rite some more romantic stuff..i thot dark humour was ur forte i was wrong..u hv equant penchant for sexy rromance

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Kaheela

@ka7eela

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

hey, please update soon 😳

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Isha

@isha1227

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

okay soooooooooooo this was obviously AMAZINGGG and i simply loved itt!! ahhhh i jus wish that they would show even a small part of it in DMG and if not that then just the way sidma interact with each other...but ur a brilliant writer and i love ur writing =]

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Zarqa

@indian_beauty

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVEEEEEEEEE ITTTTT...PLZZZZZZZZ WRITE MORE PLZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!

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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#20

oh my godddddddddddddd
im breathless and speechless
this is soo good
i love every bit of it
girll u got an amazing imagination
and we r the lucky ones
who are fortunate to peek in ur imagination
love u
love ur os
love sr !

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