OS SR: Part 6: Don't leave me this way..pg 5

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nm21

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

=( 334 people have viewed, yet only 19 people like this post! Where did I go wrong guyssss??

Massively disappointed.

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mabel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

wow...it was beqautiful....so heart wrenchin....i had tears in my eyes while readin....i luv ur writing...its soooooo stupendofabulouslyfantastical!!!!!!!!!!

plz continue dis OS....wud luv 2 read....

n plz if possible pm me whenever u rite a ff or os

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mysterieux

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Beautifully written.......all the pain ...and the longing and the sadness......was so well written

I love this part.......

Yet, his feelings were so much deeper...he wanted her to feel the same without any undue pressure on his behalf. This had become the second justification as to why he had prevented himself from stopping her. Last time had just given way to false pretences, more pain. His confession had exposed him to vulnerability and he knew he had only himself to blame for the angst he felt today...if only she would realise...

No- he was better off without her; there was no point in stopping her when her existence in his life was for the wrong reasons. He was selfish enough to give her pain, yet selfless enough to give her up when he knew she didn't belong with him...

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JennyPenny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Superb.. No words. Am speechless. 👍🏼

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

that was magnificent! sid and rhiddimas feelings were amazingly put, i guess this is whats going to happen, but probably with a LOT more dialogue about haaths and thamas and saaths and chodas and basically every dialogue again...
lol loved ur interpretation though!