SR OS humare bare main baat karni hain!!!

O.k guyz.my first effort.... I wanted to write an OS on today's Sid lines "Humare baare main baat karni hain!!

Sid had had enough of the coldness from Ridzy, he drags Riddhima to a dark room, Ridzy keeps yelling,, mera haath chodo Sid...

Sid's eyes burning red...blood rushing to his face!!! He pushes Riddhima against the wall and pins her and says "Tumhe mujse baat karna hi hoga!!!! Abhi isi waqt!! Ridzy slowly looks into his eyes and in a stern tone!!! "Main tumse baat nahi karna chahti"" Kya kar loge tum huh????""" Sid is "To tum mujse baat nahi karogi!!!! goes really close and Ridzy turns her face nahi"" and his lips brushes her corner of the lips gently!!!(by accident) Riddhima is quivering, confused, is at loss of words, She didnt see it coming !!

Sid is totally in shock, embarassed, confused..leaves the room!!!

Hai.....wait and watch something like that may happen. Maybe the cheek though darling. BT na..

it would had been great if this had happen today, i hate pagers now.

Originally posted by: aishu_25

O.k guyz.my first effort.... I wanted to write an OS on today's Sid lines "Humare baare main baat karni hain!!

Sid had had enough of the coldness from Ridzy, he drags Riddhima to a dark room, Ridzy keeps yelling,, mera haath chodo Sid...

Sid's eyes burning red...blood rushing to his face!!! He pushes Riddhima against the wall and pins her and says "Tumhe mujse baat karna hi hoga!!!! Abhi isi waqt!! Ridzy slowly looks into his eyes and in a stern tone!!! "Main tumse baat nahi karna chahti"" Kya kar loge tum huh????""" Sid is "To tum mujse baat nahi karogi!!!! goes really close and Ridzy turns her face nahi"" and his lips brushes her corner of the lips gently!!! Riddhima is quivering, confused, is at loss of words, She didnt see it coming !!

Sid is totally in shock, embarassed, confused..leaves the room!!!

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now if tht had happen it wouldve totally made my day but hopefully there is one in the near future

Originally posted by: aishu_25

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I didn't get the motive of this topic? Was it an SR or AR topic? Was this scene written to be droolworthy or disgusting? Sorry, I really not making fun of this topic I just honestly didn't understood the message.

I am neutral btw.
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No serious motive.. just a OS from my heart!!! SR topic by the way!!! it says so in the subject!!!!!!

now feel free to drool or get disgusted.. just kidding!!!😆😆

yeah but dude you should've made it more romantic. You used words like "quivering, embarassed, confused?" When two people kiss they are supposed to feel blissful, thoughtless, and in state of ecstasy. Haven't you see in movies? lol. 😉

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yeah but dude you should've made it more romantic. You used words like "quivering, embarassed, confused?" When two people kiss they are supposed to feel blissful, thoughtless, and in state of ecstasy. Haven't you see in movies? lol. 😉

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He he no probs!!! thanks for your honest comments Tarun!! but it is supposed to be like that!! they didn't know the kiss was going to happen and hence all these emotions!!!

next time.. I will make it more intense😆😉 more passionate!!

hi

nicely written aishu, enjoyed reading it

great first attempt

keep it up

norzar

OMG I wish that really happened... 😳