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Fatima

@Rhimjhimsawan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

This is so nice. I love it. I loved the end 😊 I am glad you posted this separately.

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Nadaanmasakalli

@naadanmasakalli

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

girl this is damn good plz plz continue

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patakhaguddi

@patakhaguddi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Fary!!!! Thanks Darling 🤗
Perfangel- Thanks!!

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JK Dhillon

@Angelic_J

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

OMG Jaan you write so well👏👏 I loveddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd reading this OS😳 You perfectly captured all the character emotions and of course my favourite part was when he kisses her hand while she is tending to his wounds😆 That was just so damn cute😳 I hope we get to see that in the show as well😛

Please do write more😃

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patakhaguddi

@patakhaguddi

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+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Jot- Thank You!!😊 Thats one of my favorite parts too! I will surely write some more, now that you guys have praised me so much😳

Edited by Jaan730 - 15 years ago

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lovebapu18

@lovebapu18

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

just WONDERFUL!!

hope u write more SR oneshots!!

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patakhaguddi

@patakhaguddi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Bapu- Thanks so much!!! I will for sure write more.

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MagicalKash

@MagicalKash

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

It was beautiful.. I loved it!! It captured all the three characters beautifully . It was really really heart touching . Do write more OS if you get chance :)

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Lennie

@Lennie

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+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Hey Jaan - good to see your fic up 😊

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Sabz

@romiosugar1

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#20

Jaan: am back. Read it twice and absolutely loved it:)) You are such a creative/wonderful writer with so much talent as you have summed up all three together so nicely. I wish you were my classmate in English class...but that did not happen. Your writing is simply awesome. Standing ovation and hugs for you from my side:)) Have you ever thought of being a journalist? I would highly recommend you give a thought to it....as you can criticize and come up with such a beautiful stuff. Hats off to you Jaan sweetie!!

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