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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwwwwww cho chweeeett.naina from MUMBAI TO NASHIK.eheh that was so kewl....naina stayed apart from for 3 DAYS that was itself a rewrd hehe....lovee her suprise meeting......wowwo YUVI's house is so preeety.........btw can u tell me why dey r leaving separately.......looking forward for ur next part do write soon............
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4th day' (2nd part)

Naina was happily enjoying yuvi's closeness n the comfort, in his soft hug, when she slowly tried to open her eyes n it took few seconds for her to register about her sweet dream n that she had slept in Yuvi's house' n the time was half past noon' The dream brought a smile on her lip'

Now fully awake, she admired her room'A little old fashioned house with a modern touch' An old fire place with intricately carved edges which hadn't seemed fired for decades' n was replaced by a beautiful electrical room heater' There were two antique model single sofa chair n a teapoy over the carpeted floor near the fire place ' Above the fire place, 19th century double barreled gun showcased the wall' n an olden style cupboard n a drawer chest occupied the other two sides of the room' n few classical antiquities decorated the walls'

Naina's eyes n senses observed a folded paper lying, underneath two red roses on the drawer chest' The letter said

"Naina,

Had a good sleep? *she smiled* I know you would' Now surely, you'll be hungry' Go for a lite snack with soup' N dear, I promise, I'll join you for lunch'

With love,

Yuvi'"

Naina felt her tummy now, which requested for some food' She was surprised that she didn't notice her hunger this far' Had some water from the jug that lay on the teapoy' n she started towards the door, to answer her tummy' Just then, Mrs. Seetharam entered'

Mrs. Seetha : Nainaji, I came to check if are awake' Had been checking for the past one hour' Yuvi baba told me too' You please wait here, I'll bring you some soup'

Naina simply nodded 'yes' with a smile' She was astonished beyond words, recollecting that day's Yuvi from morning till now, holding his letter in one hand' he had started caring for her' She couldn't remember from when on' She just realized how much she had grown used to that comfortable care of Yuvi's, missing which care for two days, had brought her to him' though he was not near, she felt secure n at peace of mind, which she was missing for the past two days n was unable to recognize what she actually missed' N now it dawned on her that she could never leave Yuvi's side for her life'

She had the supper n refreshed herself n adorned herself with a lavender coloured, glossy silk cotton with intricate self coloured embroidered churidhar kameez, n a suitable light weight jewels' Dressing herself carefully, thinking whether Yuvi would like her in this style'

The hero dominating her thoughts, Yuvi knocked the door n stepped in' She turned around from the mirror to face him' n Yuvi's eyes relished her beauty in his usual style n the similar way, Naina turned red'

Yuvi : *walked closer to her n took her by the waist' n his other hand lifted her face'* Did you sleep well?

Naina : Yes'

Yuvi : You liked Mrs. Seetharam's preparation'

Naina : How did you know that I'll be hungry'

Yuvi : Ask something new Naina'

Naina : Do I care for you as much as you look after me'

Yuvi : That's why I'm this way' It's from you, I learnt to care' You were the one to understand me' N someone who came forward to share a beautiful life with an iron hearted guy' So you taught me love n I'm trying my best to give you a happy life' I don't know whether I'm succeeding in my attempt'

Naina : Oh' So you want to know if you are succeeding in your attempt' What percentage do of mark do you expect Yuvi? *Playing with his emotions'*

Yuvi : *A little tensed what Naina would say about his love n care' Hesitated a little, but regained with a smile n* Whatever my queen awards me will be taken with pleasure by your, this humble lover'

Naina : *Unable to move on with her teasing, immediately threw her hands around his neck n kissed him on his cheek'* No one on this earth could ever give me this love n care that you are giving me'

Yuvi : *Now teasing her back'* But you haven't yet given me my percentage of score'

Naina : *She blushed again n hid her face in Yuvi's chest'* Yuvi'

Yuvi : But I want my reply'

Naina : What if I say, I won't reveal your score'

Yuvi : *Hugging her tightly'* I'm not going to let you without getting my reply'

Naina : *trying to get herself out, from his strong arms n firm grip'* Yuvi' Yuvi' Leave me' I'll tell you then'

Yuvi : *Bringing her to his control, to his firm grip'* You will tell me first' *His curious eyes pierced hers making her to blush again'*

Naina : *Her face portraying a blush n a little temper for making her blush, n a smile admiring his tactics' Stammered but with clear words'* Yuvi' I'll' your score' k' You get cent percentage, right' *n both grinned'*

Now Yuvi let her go n took her to the dinning' Jiggy was already waiting for them'

Jiggy : Yuvi, you said you'll be back with Naina in two minutes'

Yuvi : See' I have come with Naina, like I said'

Jiggy : But do you call two minutes as twenty minutes in your place'

Yuvi : *Casually letting Naina to sit n making himself comfortable on the next chair' Coolly'* Is that so? Did we take twenty minutes? *Looked at Naina' Naina blinked n looked away'*

Naina : Yuvi' *Called out for his ears alone' Feeling little heat thinking over their word play n the situation of the word play'*

Jiggy : You both are playing tricks on me' *Getting irritated'*

Naina n others helped themselves with the food n Mrs. Seetharam left the room as Naina gestured that they could help themselves'

Yuvi : Seriously Jiggy, your watch must be running fast' It was really two minutes Jiggy' *In a serious tone'*

Jiggy : *A little confused'* What is this Naina?

Naina : Enough Yuvi' Don't play with Jiggy' *In a commanding tone which got Yuvi's careless grin in return for her command'* Jiggy, it was' Actually it was' Yes I was late' I took some time for refreshing n Yuvi waited for me in the room'

After a chit chat lunch, n settled down for a game of carom, with fun n chat' Yuvi teasing both Naina n Jiggy then n there, but without spoiling the moment or hurting their ego while Yuvi indirectly gave way for Naina to win the game' n looking into the matter that the game moves smoothly also encouraging Jiggy n keeping up the spirit of fun' Finished the game with a tea as it was already half past four'

Yuvi : Jiggy, I have got my friend's bike for you' *Handed him a key'* Just go around n have some fresh air n catch up with some colourful scenery' *Winked at him'*

Jiggy : Oh wow.. Thanks Yuvi' Bye Naina' *Jiggy happily got the key n walked out'*

Naina : *With a naughty smile'* Why don't you Jiggy for a colourful scenery?

Yuvi : It's Jiggy's fate' He has to wander out for beautiful scenery' But I'm lucky'

Naina : Hmmm' How much lucky do you feel about yourself?

Yuvi : *Bringing her within his arms'* My luck is always in my hands n hold' *Both smiled n as Yuvi walked her out to the vineyard'*

P.S : Guys' 4th day, Part 3, from the vineyard, to be continued'

Edited by Tushtih7 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sups2222

awwwwwwwww cho chweeeett.naina from MUMBAI TO NASHIK.eheh that was so kewl....naina stayed apart from for 3 DAYS that was itself a rewrd hehe....lovee her suprise meeting......wowwo YUVI's house is so preeety.........btw can u tell me why dey r leaving separately.......looking forward for ur next part do write soon............



i guess u should read from pg.31, where the ff starts....

actually the scenes here r taking place in the current scenario of the show... obviously lol they r not married now, so they r living separately...

n thanxx for the comment supri...
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Posted: 15 years ago
yamiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii🤗
thanx for posting the part as you had promised.....was waiting for it...lolz.....
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Originally posted by: Starry_night

yamiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii🤗
thanx for posting the part as you had promised.....was waiting for it...lolz.....



pri, thanxx.. *hugs*

actually i had some work.. thats why i couldn't
post it earlier...

it was like i had a holiday for the past two months... a break after a year... now i'm back to my work... that's y i'm unable to stay for some more time here...

so what happened to roka n everything...
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Wow !!!!! this part is fantastically amazing........it was shoooooooo sweet of Yuvi to write that letter....and then Naina getting ready and thinking about his likes....sooooo adorable.........and then both of them having their private moment in the room...😍.....and also you made Yuvi tease Jiggy.....lolz...now thats my Yuvi....and later he also gave him the bike keys and asked him to enjoy so that he could spend sometime alone with his Princess........awesome.....and also the way you have penned the conversation between Yuvi and Naina throughout the part is superb.......and also your description of the room is great !!! You are an amazing writer....update soon...lolz...love you*hugs*
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heeey yamiii🤗, I loved it lolz your Amazing🤗
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Originally posted by: Tushtih7



pri, thanxx.. *hugs*

actually i had some work.. thats why i couldn't
post it earlier...

it was like i had a holiday for the past two months... a break after a year... now i'm back to my work... that's y i'm unable to stay for some more time here...

so what happened to roka n everything...



oh ok.....I can understand...but still you kept to your promise....am glad....and roka...lolz....I don't think its over yet....today bhavi and me were fighting over dahej......lolz....so its still on.....these days even sumi and sneha and the others are not showing up much....hence the delay...lolz
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Originally posted by: Starry_night

Wow !!!!! this part is fantastically amazing........it was shoooooooo sweet of Yuvi to write that letter....and then Naina getting ready and thinking about his likes....sooooo adorable.........and then both of them having their private moment in the room...😍.....and also you made Yuvi tease Jiggy.....lolz...now thats my Yuvi....and later he also gave him the bike keys and asked him to enjoy so that he could spend sometime alone with his Princess........awesome.....and also the way you have penned the conversation between Yuvi and Naina throughout the part is superb.......and also your description of the room is great !!! You are an amazing writer....update soon...lolz...love you*hugs*



lol never thought that this will part out to branches...

i just have a outline for the whole seven days...

but lol whenever i start penning down, i mean typing down, the conversation n the moments seems to extend themselves...

will try to update the next one soon...
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Originally posted by: anjananazir

Heeey yamiii🤗, I loved it lolz your Amazing🤗



hi anjiiii *hugs*.... n thanks

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