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Posted: 16 years ago
#11
that was cool jaanu!!!
this weekend is so dead....where is everyone?
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
finallly u guys updated..lol...loved both scene!!!!!! awesome parts by both of u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
those scenes were really good! someone continue soon pleasee!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I'll continue....

Muskaan: Rahul yeh galat hain...
Rahul: Muskaan....tu yeh kaisey keh sakti hain.... (he said as he pulled himself away from her but still held her by her shoulders looking right into her eyes)
Muskaan: Rahul humara rishta.."iska koi future nahi hai"...yahi kaha tha na tuney jaaney se pehlay...
Rahul: Muskaan...uss waqt main khud nahi sure tha kay main kya kar raha hoon...kahan jara hoon..per abb i am here...main teray saamne hoon...teray pass...teray saath...kyun nahi shamajh parahi hain...
Muskaan: (tears rolled down her face as his grip got tighter with his intense tone) rahul you are hurting me...? (thats all she could say)
Rahul: (looked at her then his grip and abruptly let go of his hold on her) No muskaan you are hurting me...(he said looking into her eyes then they just stood there in silence looking for answers in eachothers eyes then rahul walked away leaving muskaan who fell to the floor against the cupoard and started to cry)
*** Rahul walked out the room and then stopped himself he walked back against the wall and held his head in his hands....his anger was his biggest flaw and now it was his turn to regret it...he stood there thinking as flashes of todays moments played in his head..then he sighed and walked himself back to the room where muski was crying and talking to herself...she had her head against the cupboard facing away from the door she was hitting her hand against it and crying...as rahul entered he herad her say the following...she didn't know he was there as she had faced away from the door where rahul stopped himself*
Muski: Voh kabhi nahi badal sakta..ajj bhi uskay liye zindagi sirf aik mazaaq hain....kyun usay main apney se dur kar kay bhi usse dur nahi reh sakti...(rahul stood at the door frozen... tears formed in his eyes hearing her sob infront of him helplessly, he couldn't move)..Iss rishtey ne mujhay sirf dukh diya hain ...rahul tum meri zindagi mein kyun aii..(she once again hit her hand against the cupboard crying as rahul looked on with tears in his eyes) Na tumse dur reh sakti hoon na tumharey pass reh sakti hoon...(saying that she fell to the floor..lying in an awkward position her fist clenched she had her eyes shut, she was crying...rahul looked down and then at her..he took a step forward then back again..he reached his hand out then hesitantly pulled it back...hearing her sob he yet again walked away from the room without muski knowing..)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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gr8 part imanee!!! someone continuuuuueee
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Continuing:
Rahul was sad the whole day after he saw muskaan. muskaan took a leave from dr. keerti and went home. He went on the terrace to get some fresh air.Armaan followed him because he noticed that something was wrong with him.
Armaan: Oyee
Rahul: Hmm
Armaan: Kya hua?
Rahul: Kuch nahin.
Armaan: Jhoot mat bol Rahul.
Rahul: Kaha na kuch nahin.
Armaan: theek hai mat bata.
Silence
Armaan: toh main jayun?
Rahul: Kidhar?
Armaan: Yeh time ghar jaane ka hota hai...
Rahul: haan tu ja..
Armaan: Tujhe night duty hai?
Rahul: No
Armaan: Toh phir tu bhi ghar ja na.
Rahul: I just want to be alone Armaan, please.
Armaan: Okayy sorry. Take care man, but you know that u can tell me right?
Rahul nodded.
Armaan left from there and Rahul was alone. He didnt know how to fix this situation anymore, he tried all he could. If because of him Muskaan would be hurt then it would be better for him to leave. But then again he didnt want to give up as yet. One more time, he thought.
So he went home and tried calling muskaan. Muskaan seeing his number didnt pick up the phone so rahul left the house to go to muskaans. He rang the doorbell three times when finally muskaan opened the door.
Muskaan: tum kyun aye ho Rahul?
Rahul: Tumhare liye. Agar mujhe sari raat tumhare liye uss bench pe behtna hoga toh main behtunga.
Muskaan: tum joh bhi kaho isse mujhe koi farak nahin padta. Now get lost.
She shut the door in front of rahuls face, and as rahul said he wont leave from there, he sat down on a nearby bench. It started to rain badly but muskaan still didnt open the door.
In the night muskaan felt bad for what she did, she got up and went by her window and saw Rahul drenching in the rain. She ran out the door.
Muskaan: Rahul yeh kya bachpana hai? tum puri tara se bheeg chuke ho.
Rahul: Tumhe kyun farak padta hai muskaan?
Muskaan: Rahul tum andar aa jao please.
Rahul: No muskaan, main yahan se kahin nahin jayunga.
Muskaan: tumhe ho kya gaya hai rahul?
Rahul held muskaan tight by her arms.
Rahul: kya ho gaya hai? Pyaar karta hoon tumse muskaan. I love you dammit.
Muskaan struggled to get out of his grip but failed to do so.
Muskaan: Rahul let me go.
Rahul: Fine go.
He let go of her, and muskaan was surprised that he let her go so easily.
Rahul: Lekin ek baat yaad rakh muskaan, main tab tak tumhare liye wait karunga jab tak tu khud mere paas ayegi.
Muskaan: Rahul baskwaas band kar. tu ghar chala ja.
Rahul: Main yahan se nahin hilne wala.
Muskaan: toh behta reh.
She left him in the rain, fighting the tears that were coming out from her eyes.
Rahul: Woh bhi mujhse pyaar karti hai phir keh kyun nahin dehti?
Hope you like the part, now please someone continue!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
totallly awesome nam!!!!!!!! mind blowing!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow...excellent ......truely awesome parts by everyone
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Posted: 16 years ago
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excellent part nam and imane!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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**She went inside and drifted off to sleeping crying...thinking he will eventually go away...next morning she woke up from the loud thunder...it was still raining she thought as she got up lazily from her bed and made her way out to her balcony…she opened her arms as she willingly drenched herself in the rain looking up the sky…she thought to herself how perfect the rain was…it mirrored her mood at the moment, the storm of emotions that she held inside her continues to rumble and the unstoppable tears that emerged in her eyes were like the raindrops that she felt dripping down her skin at the moment she finally opened her eyes and just as she was about to go inside she glanced down her balcony and was shocked to see rahul still sitting on that very bench completely drenched and shriving at this point..she looked at him and he looked up as well then at her sight stood up noticing…he spread his arms open gesturing that "look I am still here" she had her mouth opened in surprise and shock…she didn't know what to do she ran out the balcony in to her room then down the stairs….she ran as quickly as she could…just as she was about to open the front door she stopped herself and picked up the phone…she looked out the window as rahul too looked eagerly at the door but upon the vibrating phone in his pocket he reached for it and picked up the phone…

Muskaan: (looking out the window)

Rahul: (looking at his cell "muskaan calling" he looked up towards the house then found her standing at the downstairs window, he picked up the phone) Hello…

Muskaan: Rahul, yeh sub karne se kuch farak nahi parey ga please yahaan se chaley jao…(saying that she hanged up without even giving rahul a chance to say anything, but he smiled he now knew that she still cares, she still loves him… he again looked at the window from where she stood in a worried expression knowing how bad of a cold he might get from doing all this…she saw him smiling sheepishly at her instead of going…this got her agitated no matter what he had done she couldn't bare the sight of him getting hurt she ran out the door this time .. and drenching in rain walked up to him…he stood there smiling watching her come to him…finally he saw her he thought…he didn't care if she was angry at least she cared that all he was thinking at the moment…

Muskaan: (folding her arms in front of him) Please yahaan se jao rahul meray neighbors kay saamne yeh sub mat karo… (she was now pleading) please I request you…

Rahul: (he nodded and looked at her noticing how beautiful she looked, then politely said) Theek hain main jaraha hoon…lakin tum please ander chali jao nahi toh tum bemaar par jaogee…(she looked at him surprised and shocked he cares about her so much yet he was standing outside in this heavy rain all night and morning…he too looked at her for a while…just letting his heart beat skip a little due to her beauty and simplicity…then he broke their trance and said)…okay main jaraha hoon… (he walked to his car sneezing as muskaan stood on her porch watching him leave and sneeze thinking "oh god he has got the cold now, and I am to balme" his car left and he made her way inside to get change dout of her drenched clothes…she was running late for sanjeevani…)

**The entire gang were now in Sanjeevani…locker room to be exact**

Atul: Uff guys iam so tired…Raat kay 9 bajey tak hum duty pe hotey hain…aur voh hitler subah 4 bajey phir bulaleti hain..phir raat kay 9 bajey tak duty, phir doosrey din hitler subah 4 bajey ICU mein bulaleti hain…yaar yeh 9 se 4 ne toh mujhay thaka kay rakh diya hian….

Anjie: Abb doctor baney hoon toh yeh sub karna parey ga…why are you complaining?

Ridzi: Di artul complain nahi kar raha hain..he is just tired…

Anjie: whatever…

Armi: Waisey kahan duites hain ajj ki…

Muskaan: well yeh toh whaan jaakey he pata chaley gaa…

Rahul: (Walks in sneezing) Achooo…!

Atul: Kya hogaya bahi?

Anjie: Sardi…

Ridzi: Ya baarish..lagta hain aj kal bearish mein kuch zaayada he bheeg rahey hoon…

Muski: (who had turned herself away from the gang and armaan was setting stuff in her locker turned and looked at him and rahul too gave her a glance while sneezing)

Armi: Abbey kuch leytay kyun nahi hoon? meds and stuff?

Ridzi: Rahul tumhay araaam karna chiyay ghar per…you know take some rest…

Rahul: (Achoo!) Karoonga na ridihimma jub uss kay…I mean muskaan kay cehray per voh khud ajaye gee (he looked in her direction and said as she too gave him a glare while the other interns just stood there smiling at their cuteness)

Armi: Yeah…good point..lagey raho and good luck…

**Announcement** Sub hi interns nurse station per report karey…

Atul: chalo bulawa agaya hitler se…

**As everyone left muski too shut her locker and was the last one out along with rahul who was walking next to her sneezing the entire way..she looked a little guilty but rahul didn't notice that, he continued sneezing even when Dr.Keerti assigned everyone their duites…

Dr. K: Abb app sub apni apni duties per jaiyeyay…

Rahul: (walking away sneezing) Achoo! Achooo!

Muski: (goes after him and pulls out the medicine from her lab coat but then stops and thinks how Should she give this to him…rahul was still in the hall slowly walking away….just then sister lovely bumps in to her)

Sis Lovely: OH jee sorry jee.dr.muskaan…

Muski: Nahi jee koi baat nahi…

Lovely Je: Okay jee main chalti hoon…

Muski: Aik min sis lovely app mera aik chota sa kaam karegee?

Sis Lovely: Oye iss mein poochnay waali kya baat hain app kahay toh sahi…

Muski: (hands her the medicine vile) yeh app please dr.rahul do day de…unkay liye hain yeh daawa…

Sis lovely: Oh jee theek hain…

Muski: (stood there watching sister lovely approaching rahul she wanted to make sure he gets it)

Rahul: (bumps in to sis lovely while sneezing) Achoo! oh sorry je…Achoo!

Sis lovely: Oh jee..yeh app kay liye..appko sardi lagi hain na iss liye…

Rahul: oh thank you jee (he takes the medicine vile) so sweet of you…

Sis lovely: Thank you mujhay nahi unhay buliyay (she points to muski who was standing looking worried at the end of the hall…rahul looks at her she looks down and away…he looks serious then loudly says) Mujhay nahi chiyay… Main yeh dawii tub tak nahi loonga jub tak uss ki hansi nahi sun loon…. (muski looks up as he says that addressing her)

Sis lovely: (confused) uski… Kis ki?

Rahul: Jis ki main baat kar raho hoon voh jaanti hain…app he ussi say pooch lay..(he looks right at muski as he says that) Achoo! Achoo! Ahhh…

Sis lovely: (confused looks at muski and then walks away) Khair batanay ki zaroorat nahi hain jee…Mujhay sukhaam nahi chiyay…

**Muski just stands there as Rahul looks at her..smiles thinking "she cares" then muski irritated leaves to do her rounds and so does rahul…they both check patients in the ICU and do their respective duties..after a while rahul returns to locker room and is looking for something in his locker when he finds some medicine in his locker…muski too come right then to pick up her files from the locker ***

Rahul: (Takes the medicine and goes to muski) Muskaan yeh lay lo..mujahy nahi chiyay…

Muski: (slams the locker in anger) Kyun! kyun apni tabiyaat kahrab karney per lagay hoon…bus bahut natak hogaya…yeh dawaii loo chup chap aur chai piyoon…har baat ki had hoti hain tum choti si baat nahi shamajhtey…!(she walks away as rahul follows)

Rahul: Chalo kum se kam yeh toh pata chala kay tumhay bhi meri fikhar hain…(muski looks up then again looks for the file in her locker rahul follows) Thoda natak toh tum bhi kar rahi hoon muskaan…tim meri fikhar karti ho..hain na?

Muski: (once again close sthe locker loudly and says) Nahi! (she is walking away but rahul holds her back by gripping her hand)

Rahul: Har baat ki had hoti hain..hain na? toh phir tum apney app se aur mujh se jhoot kyun bol rahi hoon

Muski: Mera haath chooro rahul…mujhay rounds per jana hain…

Someone Please continue…

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