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Part 19




Sejal couldn't think straight. her mind was too fuzzy. She heard the two man holding her, saying things , but she didnt understand. One of the guys said " let's take her to the boss, he will defiantly like her."

The short one says " we got lucky today. it seems she came from a rich family"

" your right, after boss have his way with her, let's take a picture and blackmail the family for money."

They both grin. When they reach the door, sejal was asking where she was. " your in paradise baby" one of them said

They walk in with sejal and saw their boss sitting with two other ladies. " boss we got another, just how you like it"

The man told the two ladies to leave, they frown before getting up. The man was tall and chubby with a moustache. They shove sejal to him, causing her to sit on his lap. looking at him, she got scared. She tried to move, but was too weak. " let me go" she says

" why should I, your in my club. That means, your my property."

The two guys leave while the man tries to kiss sejal.

(with teni)

Teni drinks some water before deciding. She grab her phone and go to her app that tracks numbers. When she found the location, she change clothes and walk out. If parth won't pick up, he will defiantly follow me, she thought.

teni got in the cab , she had call and told the driver to drive fast.

( with parth)


Parth is scene with a vicious dog, who was barking at the man behind bars. The man was cuff to the bar. He kept moving back Every time the dog teeth was near. parth told him to hurry up and say the names before he puts the dog in the cell. He describes what the dog would do to him and the man shivers.

He spilled everything, even the location. While he was spilling it, parth and his man had already move. Catching and arresting each of the guys involve. When he got in his car, he got a call. " parth sir, we have a situation"

" what is it"

" the thief escaped again"

parth took out his phone and saw miss calls. He wonder if something happen at home. " Krish, send me the location of her whereabouts"

Their was a pause " it would seem, she stop at the club."

Once he got it, he start driving. That girl is so hard headed, but why is she at the club, he thought.

( At the club)

The guard stops teni from entering. Saying she needs an I.D. She cursed forgetting to grab it. Teni says theirs someone in their she needs to get and she will be on her way. The man says no I.D no Enter.

Teni curse, she looks up to see a window. For a second she thought she saw sejal banging on it. She realize it wasn't her imagination, but in fact sejal. She saw a hand grabbing her hair and she stretching her hand.

I don't owe parth family anything , I shouldn't be helping her, but I cat just let her suffer. she decided to imagine this as a robbery attempt. She close her eyes trying to form a plan before getting an idea.

She got back in line, pretending to listen to music. She jab someone , pushing them against another person. That person turn to glare at who pushed him, but no one was their, so he blames it on the guy in front.

They started yelling and grabbing on too each other, soon a fight broke loose. While they were fighting, some people turn to watch. teni , cut in the line and did the same thing , this time with two girls. Soon it was a huge fight. The man had to come and stop it. This was her chance.

She quickly walk in without getting noticed and searches for sejal.

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Part 20


When teni enter she heard music. She couldn't help humming to the beat. She saw a man walking with some drinks and decides to take one " don't mind if I do" she says drinking it

The man frown " that wasn't for you miss"

" your right, it was terrible anyway , you can have this back"

The man open his mouth to yell at teni, when someone stops him. " leave it , its on the house"

Teni looks at him, he wasn't bad looking, but he wasn't her type. She wonder what was her type, suddenly parth came to her mind. She shook her head and turn to walk away, searching for sejal.

" wait!"

" what do you want?"

The man moving close says " why don't you join me in the v.I.p section"

Teni smile sheepishly " I see what's going on, you already fell for my charm"

The man rub his hair, embarrassed to be found out. Teni was about to decline the offer, but stop when a man appeared, looking at the guy, she recognized the watch from the window earlier. He must be the one that has sejal.

" you know what , I will join you. Where exactly is the v.I.p"

The man smile and points upstairs. Teni says in head, hopefully by the time I grab sejal, parth would have arrived. The man wrapped his arm around teni waist and took her upstairs.

( with parth)

Parth parked his car far away , before coming out. He told his man to stand by until he gives the signal. They all nod, parth in normal clothes walk in.

the place was crowded as usual. He could smell alcohol in the air . he look around searching for teni, wondering where she could be. He stop, when he saw a person with the same hair as her. " you think you can run from me" he says grabbing her Han

The girl turn, and parth let go. " well hello handsome"

Parth apologize, " I thought you were someone I know"

The woman thinking this was parth way of trying to hit on her, move closer " well whoever it is, must be stupid to run from you"

Parth definitely agreed to that. The woman tried flirting with him, but he excuse himself. While walking, more female tried talking to parth. He brushed them aside. i need a high area to look for Her, he thought.

He walk on the stage, where the DJ was and search for her. The DJ told him he can't be up here unless his going to dance. Parth ignores him. He stops searching when he spotted sejal holding the stairs while sobbing. Her face was full of bruises and her clothes were half ripped.

When they made eye contact she calls him. The man that had her came and slap her " your brother isn't here beach" sejal falling on the floor tried crawling away, but the man step on her leg.

" you an that other beach will pay do ruining my face "

Parth taking his hoodie of jumps down the stage. He was beyond angry, his eyes were bulging with rage. not only did teni escaped, he found out his cousin lied and came to the club. parth grabs a bottle near the staircase while walking up.

When he reached, he saw the man dragging sejal back. He threw the bottle and it hit the man in the head. The man let go of sejal and turn around. " how dare you harm me" " you will pay for this" he says before calling his man.

They all came from different rooms, surrounding parth. The leader smirk, before telling them to kill Him while he deal with sejal. He grab sejal while she screams and told her to shut up.

parth counts how many mans they were, and warn them to stand down. They taunt him , calling him weak and scared. Parth decides it was best not to use his gun at the moment.

one of the man attacks, Parth retaliates with a big right overhand punch to the guy. before the man could bring his hand up to defend , parth drove his shoulder into his chest , slamming him into the wall, where he started landing solid punches into his gut.

He move out the way when he heard a footstep, and saw the next guy hitting the wall. The second guy , tried again to aim a blow on parth, but failed. Parth catching his hand twists it , breaking a fraction of his bones. Hi scream could be heard from downstairs.

Two big man came , one grab parth squeezing him while the other sent a blow to his gut, knocking the wind out of him.
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Part 21



Parth gags, even though he had felt this pain plenty of times, it still hurt . his legs were still dangling , while the other guy was holding him.

When the man tried punching him again, parth was ready. With difficulty, he twist his body and sent a heavy kick straight to the guys rib. The guy fell on his knees , feeling fresh ripples of pain through his torso.

The man holding parth, squeeze him tighter. Parth grab his hand and scratch his face, causing the fourth guy to let go. The guy tried to go for a blow , while holding his bloody face. He could have hit parth, but with his blurry eyes , he missed.

Parth wasted no time , and threw three more punches that did land. Each time he defeats one, another would attack. It was like a repeating cycle.

( with teni and sejal)

Teni plan had work at first. Going in the room, switching the man glass that contain the drug he put in her drink. Drugging him, and going to the room that held sejal. It was going well, until the leader came back from the bathroom and caught her, freeing sejal.

by that time, the drug they put on her was wearing off. Teni could feel her hand shaking. She told sejal to run while she distracts him. Sejal refused at first. The man glares at teni, " I knew something wasn't right about you"

Teni told sejal about parth arriving. This caused her to agree. The man grabs teni hair " listen to me when I speaking"

Teni taunts " I don't follow weak dogs"

The man threw her on the floor. " we will see who is weak"

Grabbing his gun from his counter. He loads it up. Teni signal sejal to run. When she did, the walk to teni. Teni grab something from her pocket and throw it at him. Turns out , it was acid. She had picked it up from one of his mans.

Holding his face, the man scream. with a shaky hand, he aim his gun and shoot.

Sejal running , cried hearing the gun shot. She shouts for help, but no one could hear her because of the music. Holding the stairs, she spotted someone on stage, that resembles parth. She shouts his name, and their eyes connected.

( back to the present)

Teni sigh seeing the leader bringing sejal back. She couldn't help her now because she was injured. Her leg was shot. Luckily it didn't fracture her bones, but it still hurt. The leader, dumps her near teni. " you two caused me a lot of trouble. Now, which one of you want to die first."

Sejal was holding teni, while weeping . the man took pleasure seeing her fear. He reload the gun again, while teni, was hissing in pain. the man decided on teni. He pressed his gun on her injury. Earning a scream from her. " whose the weak dog now" he says

Just than the door was kicked open. Parth with his gun loaded, points it at the leader. The leader quickly grabs teni as a hostage. Pulling her and making her stand on her bad leg. She gritted her teeth. " if you try anything, I will shoot her. " he says

Parth stare at her, and she look at him. He was surprise to see no fear in her eyes. teni smile at him, not her usual cocky smile, but a genuine smile. One which for a second their made his heart thump. while the man hands were around her neck, and the gun pointed beside her head.

Teni bites the leader hand really hard, causing him to let her go. Teni ran towards parth. The leader quickly reacts by pointing his gun. to parth it was like time was going in slow motion. He watch as teni knee gave out, making her fall.

He ran and slide on his knee, while twisting his body. Pointing the gun and shoot. their were two gun shot and a scream, follow by a body falling. " I don't take command from anyone" he says before standing up.

Few hours later...

police cars were everywhere. So was the F.B.I . parth was busy explaining what happen while teni hides. She cursed under her breath " I didnt think the F.B.I would come. If they catch me I'm screwed"

Sitting on the ambulance bed, she turn to leave. Parth noticed this and walk in her direction. " hey thief" he says causing her to quicken her pace.

She cried, when her leg gave out. Reopening her wound. Parth bends down to her level " are you crazy or just stupid. Didnt they tell you not to reopen your wound "

Teni looks away, embarrassed. " why were you running anyway, is it because of them. What exactly did you do to them"

Teni now turn to parth " I killed my foster parents"
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This was thrilling, interesting update. I can't wait for the next. thank you for updating this.
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sketch: the intervention

where the characters play realistic roles.


Cheers were heard everywhere, as the spokesman , who never says his name walks in his PJ. The crowd grew silent when he greets them before speaking " today we have two couple who wish to say something to one another. Teni and parth"

mumbles were heard left to right. The spokesman shush them again. " Teni, concern is her boyfriend terrible snoring. She sends me a video of her situation and how she handles it, but before i role the clip let's bring out the couple"

The crowd cheered when they came and sat Down. Refusing to get close. " I can already see the problem"

" you don't know the half of it" parth says frowning

" so parth did you knew, your girlfriend was bring you here?"

" she always made a joke about it, but i never expect"

The spokesman laugh and turn to the camera " lets take a look at the video"


Scene



Teni is scene sleeping on her side, when she heard a sound. Knowing what it is, she hits him while still trying to sleep. It had work for a second and she smile. five minute later, it came again, but louder. Sitting up, she turn to parth who was laying on his back. she grab her pillow and hit him in the face. Parth woke up " what's wrong, honey"

" your snoring"

" I was?...sorry I will keep it down"

And so the couple went back to sleep. It was three am, teni heard it. She had thought it couldn't get worse, but she was wrong. She took the blanket off and shook him , telling him to turn to his side. When she got no response, she took matters into her own hands, literally. Trying to turn a heavy parth over was no joke. When she realize it wasn't working she starts pushing both legs.

( the viewers laugh)


Teni looked like she was break dancing, with the way she was pushing him , she stop and blow a hair from her face, annoyed. Suddenly she got an idea, getting up she walk out the door. when she came back she had a clear glass of water in her had.

( audience oo oh, knowing what's coming)

She walk to his side of the bed and sprinkle water, telling him to wake up...but he didnt. Matter fact it just got louder. Giving up she dumps the whole water on his face. Parth quickly sat up, " that bad huh" he asks

" you think"

getting up, he decides to use the bathroom. By the time he came back the door was locked. Shaking it, he calls for teni, who was smiling before shutting her eyes.

End of scene

The spokesman chuckles " well everything ended we'll at the end,we will hear what the couple have to say after this break."

( After break)


" we are back, lets find out what the two have to say" he turn to the couple "so everything ended we'll at the end" he asks


" yeah except for the fact that I had to sleep out in the cold with no blanket." Parth mumbles

The spokesman turns to teni " why didn't you just sleep on the couch, if you were so annoyed"

" that was because, I don't like sleeping Alone, but his snoring became too much, it was so loud that one night I thought their was a pig in our room. "

" that bad " the spokes man says

" bad isnt half of it. it was like two lions roaring while fighting over meat. Like a train with no ending button... If our house is surrounded by police, and A robber Had to choose between surrendering or stay hidden in our closet, he would gladly surrender."

Parth disagree. The spokes man says " by you know, sometimes some females prefer their partner snoring because its reasurring them of their existence"

Teni says " we'll...that is true"

"
" Is their anything you would like to say to say to one another"

Teni grabs parth Han " I dont mind you snoring , but can you just tone it down like the fishes in the fish tank staring at you while trying to say something...but no sounds comes out"

" I can try,just like how I've been trying to tell you ...you stepped on sheet earlier"

" what " she says letting his hand go, and looking at her heels.

" I kept calling your Name , when we were entering the building, but you refuse to stop"

The spokesman says " so thats where the smell was coming from" he fan

Embarrassed teni, turned red. Parth took something out , while the crowd awed. " I went to shop after the break, and got you a new shoe. "

Teni face return to Normal. " thank you parth"

" anytime" he says

While the two hug, the spokesman look at the camera " so everything ended we'll with the monster who snores, hopefully the couple will sleep better now. Well until we learn to communicate an be at ease. We will see you later"

" and that's a wrap" the director says

Stay tune for the next intervention , with a mother in law who wont let her daughter spend time with her husband. And a husband whose about ready to move out from their own house.



- bye
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Part 22


After some time, teni starts to chuckle which soon turned into a big laugh. Parth confused asks why she was laughing. Teni whipped the extra tears that was on the edge of her eye. " I Can't believe you fell for that"


" I mean seriously, me...murder, its not in my agenda"

Parth annoyed sigh " so why exactly were you hiding than"

Teni stops for a second to think. she tried to remember what she actually did. " that's right, I may have conned the F.B.I leader and stole his money from the bank. His technically broke, but turns out those weren't even his money to begin with. Can you really blame me. His wife wanted me to teach him a lesson after she found pictures of him cheating"

" so you decided to go along with it, knowing you would be target for the rest of your life."

Teni nods " yeah pretty much."

Parth gets up " you are one crazy woman. Aren't you scared for your life?"

" whats their to be scared, I know one day I will die. So I always say its best to live your life to the fullest,and don't think about what will happen next."

Their was a short pause before Parth removed his jacket. Teni made a comment about him stripping. Instead of getting a remark. a jacket was thrown on her face. " I'm not trying to help you. I just think dadaji will start questioning"

Teni smile underneath. " this is nice and all, but how will I get to the car. If you haven't noticed, I was shot"

Before she had time to say something, Parth picks her up and drags her to the car.

Once seated, sejal got in. The car ride was awkward. Sejal tried making small talk with Parth, but Parth staid quiet. He was upset at sejal for lying to them. Especially him, he thought she could count on him, but she proved him wrong.

When they reached. They got out...well except teni, who couldn't walk because of the pain. Parth walk to her side " give me a good reason why I shouldn't leave you to struggle"

" I save your sister"

" and"

" well that's something big"

" oh come on its your sister"

Parth given up , bends to pick her up while her arm snaked around his neck " you disobeyed my order even when I told you not too, and you put yourself in danger instead of calling the office. Your seriously a pest"

" no way...could it be, you were worried about me
" She teased

Parth stops " I would advice you not to speak such nonsense"

" what ever you say officer"


Parth heads in the house. he saw sejal waiting by the steps " bhai...can we please talk"

Parth climbs the steps ignoring sejal. He could hear her sobbing. Teni turn and look at her. " you should hear her out. you shouldn't hold a grudge over what happen"

" you wouldn't understand how I feel since your an orphan" he says

Their was a short pause before teni spoke " put me down"

" no...not until I reached the room."

even though he said that. Teni wasn't haven it. She kept fussing, even when Parth entered the room. Parth noticed her voice getting loud , puts one hand on her mouth. "You will wake my parents up, do you really want them to know what happen last night"

Teni calms down. Parth puts her on the bed and walk away to grab a first Aid kit. While gone, teni kept recalling what he said. She recalled running after a car, while yelling her sister name. " Didi where are you, why did you leave me" she mumbles

She quickly compose herself when she heard Parth. As soon as he bends down to help her, teni tells him to get out"

" I'm not leaving until your legs wrapped up"

" I don't care ... If you don't leave I will scream "

" teni" he warns

" get out"

" this is my house, and your just a guest"

" your right, I will leave than"

She got up with little strength. Trying to leave , but Parth grabs her hand. " enough...I will leave" he let her hand go and left the room, about to go to his, but stop when he realized this was his room. Parth twist the nub, forgetting the fact that he locked it. He groans " what do I do"

He was busy in his thought that he didn't see his dad stopping " lovers quarrel already" he says smiling

" no...she's just being difficult"

His dad sigh " whatever it is makeup, before things escalate"

"Yea, I will" he says before saying in his head especially if I want her to reveal where she hides that money.
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Wow . I love this update so much. Thank you so much. It ' s a very cool one. The update I waited so far.
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Part 23




Couple of days later, teni was coming back from the doctor with parth. She still refused to speak to him after the comment he made. The family were worried, especially Indu. She wonder what could have caused the two to act like this.

Teni with her crutches tried coming through the door the same time parth was. They both glare at each other " don't you see I was entering first"

" you purposely cut in my way. "

" no I didn't, besides you never heard of ladies first."

Parth dryly laughs " I don't recall you ever being a lady"

" unbelievable, this is exactly why I can't stand you"

" I couldn't agree more" he says right back, both trying to push through the door.

Teni thinking , use her crutch to hit his leg. Parth move back to rub his leg. he glares at her , " I just need to find that money and evidence than I can get rid of that barbarian"

Dadi looking at Indu says " we need a plan to help them" they both smile at one another getting an idea.

(5:00pm)

Teni sleeping move closer to her pillow that was between her legs. She moved the other pillow that she was hugging near her enjoying how it feels. She stopped wondering how her pillow became hard like a rock. She touch it a few time, before feeling something warm on her neck.

" stop moving so much, your disturbing me" parth says

Teni body froze, she was afraid of who she might see. It couldn't be...she opens her eyes and it was exactly what's she didnt want. Parth...she tried moving back and found out she couldn't. She tried again, this time waking parth from his slumber.

He look at her, and she look at him. It took a second for him to comprehend what was going on. " what are you doing in my bed?"

" I don't know, did you move me?"

Parth sitting up thought about it. " no I didnt"

This confused then both. They both remember being in their room and indu came to them with snacks. Than they went to sleep, so how did one of them end up in the other room. Parth thinking about it realized one of his family members must have moved teni. Something fishy is going on, I should speak to mom, he thought

Getting up, he moved to leave. Teni yell causing parth to turn around. What he saw definitely dissatisfy him. Teni was laying on the bed, with her hand stretched. on her right hand was a hand cuff, which apparently was cuffed to his hand. He groans " this is getting too much now" he says

" come on I know my family had something to do with this."

" why would they do this"

" I don't know...that's why we need to find out"

Teni moving to his side, tried moving. Her leg still hurts after the stitches. she look around for her crutch, " how will I move, my crutch is in my room"

She was right, he thought. They forgot to bring her stuff, unless this was what they wanted. Sighing , he walk back. Before she could say something he picks her up in his arm. Teni secretly had to admit she kinda like when he picks her up. She gets to feel his muscle on his arm.

Not realizing she was smiling, parth tells her not to get to comfortable. She quickly hide the smile and wrap her hands around his neck. And so the two fake couple walk downstairs. Parth calling his family, but it would seem the whole house was deserted.

He walk to the kitchen and found a letter hanging on the fridge. Grabbing it...he reads it.

Dear parth, we went to our friends wedding, we won't be back until tomorrow, please take good care of yourself and teni. Also, we took the key so you wouldn't detach yourself from teni. This should help build your relationship, it help me and your father, so I'm sure It will bring you two closer.

Parth took a deep breath. He look at teni to see her face so close to his. It was so close that he could feel her breath. He accidentally stared at her moist lip, he wondering how it would feel pressed with his. " parth...
Hello" she says

He wonder if he just moved a bit, would their lip touch. Teni seeing him in a daze, got an idea. She moved her head really slow, closer to his. Parth gulp, when she was so close. She changed her direction and blow in his ears. This caused him to snap out of it.

" what are you doing"

Teni smirked " just getting you out of your fantasy dream"

" I wasn't fantasizing about you"

Teni smirk " who says you were"

He cleared his throat " so we are stuck like this until tomorrow"

" that's not good, I don't know how I will hide myself from you"

" why?"

" you clearly wanted to jump me"

Parth quickly denies the idea, he wonder what gave her that idea. " believe me , I wouldn't dream of it."

" I will remember that" she says

Parth hope nothing bad will happen because something always goes wrong when she's around him. " parth" she calls

He once more look at her " what?"

Teni cheeks turn a few shade " I have to use the bathroom"

It was At this moment parth realize this idea his family came up with was a bad idea.

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Very nice update. Poor Parth and Teni. They have to wait till next day .

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