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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hii Everyone, I am doing WU today as Aanchal told me to do so. (as she has entrance exam..sowwieee aanchal late yaad aya so i update the post now..)
Viraj at the hospital, talks with Jhanvi's dad. He tells him that dadi ko hosh to aa gaya hai par ye poolice wale hume andar jane nahi de rahe.. to that Viraj says me andar jake dekhta hoon... in the room: doctor is trying to ask dadi: aap ko meri awaz sunai de rahi hai? me apko dikhai de raha hoon? dheere dheere bolne ki koshish kijiye. Ek minute me aaya..left the room for a while..Viraj starts walking towards dadi in suspicious manner.he gets closer and tries to touch dadi (*woaa may be trying to check or threaten her!) that is the freeze point doctor comes says: excuse me, viraj: g doctor (*swetting*) Doc starts checking for broken bones and also to see if she feels anything when the hammer touches her (*can't blv they have small hammer to check that😆 ok i am not insensitive.😛) another freeze point after doc's analysis: inki jaan to bach gayi hai par ye paralyzed ho chuki hai...(viraj and uniyal are in the room) uchai se girne ke karan inki rid ki haddi me chot ayi hai..jiski wajeh se nahi ye bol sakti hai aur nahi hath pair hila sakti hai.. Uniyal smirks at Viraj and slight smile on Viraj's face. (*relief*) Viraj to doc: "bach gayi dadi" (very innocent way*) Doc: muje inki family ko inform karna hoga. Viraj: G. G doctor. umm doctor aap ek kam kijiye aap zaroor inform kar sakte hai..par thodi der ke lie unko andar mat ane dena.. doc: G? *puzzled* Viraj: umm wo kya hai ki inspector ki thodi formalities puri karni hai.. to that Doc: muje nahi lagta ki ye sign kar payengi..jesa ki mene kaha k ye hath pair nahi hila payengi. Unial: usse kam chalega, padh to payengi na? Doc: I'm not sure fir bhi aap try karke dekh lijiye. Uniyal: Ok. Doc leaves the room. Viraj laughing slightly manically! (uff..what is wrong with him 😭) he gets closer to dadi. holding dadi's hand and moving up..said: bahot lame hai aapke hath dadi..kanoon se bhi...jo Viraj dobriyal ki gardan tak pahochne wale the..puts her hand near to his neck...says..Too bad..leaves her hand.. ab ye hath kisi kaam ke nahi..nothing (uhh this remind me of Gabbar😎...cutting down Thakur's hands..ye hath humka daide thakur..naiii 😆😆 ok..that was just for fun) dusre ke mamlo me tang adane ka bahot shaukh hai na apko dadi, hath gaye so gaye tange bhi gayi (pulls up her leg and puts it back.) his evil laugh (ok not evil but u know how he laughs at her sarcastically!) gets closer to dadi: sab aap hi ki galti hai dadi..chup chap agar aap muje wo file de deti kal rat ko to aaj is sab ki naubat hi nahi aati..sits closer to her..itni zidd karti hai aap...hadd hai.(😡 so true!!) sach batana hai sach batana hai...batana hai ab sach aapko? asks her: puri family bahar hai bulaao unko? laughs (slight) aap bhi..janti ho dadi kyon bachi ho aap? kyonki aap ka bhagvan jo hai usne muje puch kar (sorry for bad audio didn't quite get dis right) bachaya hai taki aap apni poti aur damad ki love story dekhe, aur ye bhi dekhe ke me apki poti se kitna pyar karta hoon. " Jhanvi comes to hospital. talks with the receptionist: suniye..meri dadi is hospital me hai..wo..sees her parents...papa...ma..dadi dadi..kaha hai..her mom: jhanvi beta..beta dadi thik hai ab...Jhanvi: abhi dadi se mil sakte hai..(wow sriti hats of to ur expressions!!) nahi beta..ek baar chalte hai na ma...ek baar...thodi der ke lie mil lete hai..(broken in voice and teary)...Viraj with dadi inside the room.."aap ne apke parmeshwar ko to nahi dekha hoga..par apki poti k parmeshwar ko zaroor dekh lijiye..wo bhi inhi ankho se..bagair kuch bole bagair kuch kie..smirk. laugh(slight) ab itna mat ghoorie dadi warna ye ankhe bhi bahar tapak ayengi (😆, well what can we say...😳) laughing more and looking at Uniyal...he also laughs..laughing more n more..😃 and stops...watching Jhanvi outside from the blinds of the room, expression changes.."worried" Jhanvi yaha kya kar rahi hai...flashback of the 2 days..realising she might have seen him...scary expressions..to himself..kahi usne..jhanvi ko sab kuch pata to..uniyal takes dadi's thumb paint onto his register. Viraj comes out of the room..and looks worried looking at jhanvi and their family..Sia: Jiju!! eye contact between RajVi...he is still worried...pasina nikal raha hai use.. her family starts approaching Viraj.. Gangadhar: beta ma kesi hai? hum jaye andar? viraj: nods. all went inside.. Jhanvi is still standing away from him...(she is fearing that V might get angry as he told her to stay home & V is worried that what/how she will react if she has seen him?) Jhanvi remembers the incident from past: "aree aaj aap itni jaldi aa gaye office se? kaha gayi thi tum? hamari estate me walk karne gayi thi...Muje bagair puche? aap office me the issilye disturb nahi kia..aao come sit...he lets her sit on the sofa..walk karke thak gayi hogi me tumhare lie pani lekar aata hoon..nahi me le lungi...shhh mene kaha na sit..me pani lekar ata hu..she smiles..Viraj with HOT water container(.uff...his evilness thank goood it is from past...*relief*) puts it closer to her legs..walk karke ayi ho pav thak gaye honge ha? *she is freaking out..* lo garam pani me apne pav dalo aaram milega..are dekh kya rahi ho jhanvi..pair dalo isme...jhanvi tries to place her leg...aaahhh garam hai...isilye to...dono pav dalo jhanvi..akhri bar keh raha hoon dono pav jhanvi...she doesn't listen..he puts her both legs into boiling water...viraj please bahot garam hai viraj please..bagair bole kahi bhi bahar jaogi tum jhanvi..she says no...puch kar jaogi ha??? ha?? plz viraj bahot garam hai pani viraj...plzz...aaahhh... she comes back from flash back.. starts crying, V is approaching her..before she starts explaining why she is there..he says: me janta hoon tumhe dadi se milna tha..aur I am sorry me tumhe nahi le gaya tha wo...khud hi aa gaya me...muje khamkha tum par..stress nahi dalna tha..*jhanvi is just looking at him*. dadi ab thik hai tum mil sakti ho..lekin..abhi nahi..wese bhi bahot sare log hai andar doctors keh rahe the zyada bheed achi nahi rahegi..jab tak tum..betho..he puts his arm on her shoulders and lets her sit..standing in a way so that his back faces jhanvi..jhanvi thinks: me inse bina puche yaha chali aayi..fir bhi inhone gussa nahi kia.." Viraj on the other hand thinks: "isko budhiya ke sath akele me bat karne ka mauka dena padega ab budhiya to kuch bol nahi payegi par agar jhanvi ne muje chat pe dekha hai to wo zaroor kuch n kuch bolegi..aur mera doubt wahi clear ho jayega." looks at Jhanvi..
family comes out Jhanvi: papa dadi..gangadhar: bhagwan ne unki jaan to bachadi lekin...Jhanvi: lekin kya papa...anxious.. Gangadhar: ma ko paralysis ho gaya hai beta..to that Jhanvi: runs to see grany..V tries to stop her..follow her but Ganga stops him: pata nahi ma ko kya ho gaya ...laying his head on V's shoulder..Ma..papa aap sambhaliye apne aapko bethiye...V tells J's mum to sit as well...Jhanvi in the room..cries and hugs grany..Nahi roungi dadi.aur kyon roungi..koi nahi royega...aap bahot jaldi thik ho jayengi na dadi...aapko mera khayal rakhna hai na..apke par nati ka bhi khayal rakhna hai na..hum dono ki malish karni hai(😭 emotional scene..) aur gond ke ladoo aap banayengi na mere lie? muje kaha aata hai banana? aap bilkul fikar mat kariye dadi..hum bahot bade doctor ke pass jayenge aur aap bahot jaldi thik ho jayengi..aur kanhaji bhi to hai na apke..wo apki bahot sunte hai na dadi..? aap bahot jald thik ho jayengi..wo to bahot bade doctor hai na..unse bada koi doctor nahi hai...wo apko bahot jaldi thik kar denge..cries further.. Viraj listening to all this thinking: "kya faltoo ki bakwas kie ja rahi hai..muje terrace pe dekha hai ki nahi..dekha hoga to ye dadi ko zaroor batayegi.." Ganga disturbs his thoughts..."beta age kya karna hai.(uff what annoying question is that?) Viraj: aap hausla rakhiye papa me doctor se puchta hu, dekhta hu wo kya kehte hai.G: beta jake apni mako samjao, dekho wo kitna ro rahi hai...mene bahot samjaya par wo samjti hi nahi hai...shayad tum samjao to.." Viraj nods. Jhanvi in the room: muje ane me der ho gayi na dadi? par dadi Viraj ko meri bahot chinta hai na..wo nahi chahte ke muje koi bhi pareshani ho..unhe aapki bhi bahot chinta hai dadi...jab se apka accident hua hai..wo..wo bahot pareshan hai wo..har waqt apki tabiyat ki khabar lete rehte he wo doctor se..agar unhone waqt par sab kuch sambhala nahi hota aur apko kuch ho jata to..she keeps crying...unka ehsan hum saat janmo me bhi nahi chuka sakte..isiliye to apko jaldi se hosh me ana hoga dadi aur..unhe ashirwad dena hoga dadi...dengi na ashirwad..to that a tear from dadi's eyes drops.. aap jaldi thik ho jayengi dadi..bahot jaldi thik ho jayengi aap...dadi's second tear...Viraj outside..hosla rakhiye ma..u rone se kuch nahi hoga me hoo na! sab kuch thik ho jayega..J's mom: tumne kitna kuch kia hai humare lie..V: ma ese waqt par aap esi bat karengi..muje to afsos is bat ka hai k me dadi ko bacha nahi paya aur unke sath esa hadsa ho gaya..J's mom: honi ko kaun tal sakta hai? tumne to wese bhi apna ji jaan laga dia tha aur shayad isilye ma ki jaan bach gai..V: haan lekin fir bhi kash dadi ko girne se bacha lia hota.. (OMG!! he is uttering nonsence..comon ab sab kuch bata hi doge kya! shhh) J's Mom: me zara jhanvi se milke ati hoon..V tries to stop her..choti holds his hand: V says choti sab kuch thik ho jayega..wipes her tears..J's mom in room: nahi beta tu himmat mat haar..tu himmat har jayegi to Viraj ko kaun sambhalega (exactly what does she mean again, dadi viraj ki hai ya J ki? ) ma ke sath jo hadsa hua hai uska gehra sadma pahucha hai use.. (uff can't she see her daughter first? aah ignorance at peak) jo kuch bhi hua hai uske lie wo apne aap ko zimedar maan raha hai..her dad and V comes inside the room..V and J eye locks...V thinks: abhi tak kuch clear pata nahi chala k usne budhiya se kuch kaha hai ya nahi..us raat muje dekha k nahi pata to lagana hi hoga..
Precap: someone looking through drawers in RajVi palace..ooh who's this new jasoos now?😆😉
Sorry I am just too slow in typing and I tried my best to write all the dialogues w/o miss. I hope u like it.
Edited by Krrish87_sweet - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey tday i didnt understand why that fellow, who was hired by viraj took daadi's thumb imprint... i thought viraj had a fortune 😕 to give away and not daadi... and jhanvi doesnt even remember seeing viraj on the roof... while viraj is too busy thinking that jhanvi might tell something to daadi... he doesnt know the poor thing wont murmur one word abt him...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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The thumb print is precautionary I suposse... As Viraj is too smart... In case Dadi gets better, they will write a statement otherwise and prove that Dadi is lying... Just a guess...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the wonderful update Krish!

Can't wait to actually watch the episode.

Cheers!
Naina
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Super update! There is something about Dadi😊. She brings out the wittiest, naughtiest and the wickedest side of Viraj. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the update Krishu..
Viraj is such a cutie pie.. Love the way he is troubling D 🤣 so Jhanvi didnt see Viraj.. Bechara Viraj.. He is so restless 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks Ramona! 😃 hawww mere super antihero ko trouble ho rahi hai aur tum has rahi ho.. how mean!! 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you everyone for appreciation!! & OMGGG this thread is already pink 😆 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww.. so cute 😭 🤣 🤣
btw, who is in ur new dp?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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btw how was ur exams?? i never get to chat with u after u returned...
Edited by Krrish87_sweet - 13 years ago

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