RiKara TS - Traces of You (completed)pt 3 pg 12 (28/6/17)

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: whity.007
Good👏

Thank you dear 😃

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Vrinda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Fantastic update

What exactly has come.over Omkara

Memory loss played its role well

Omkara doesn't remember the bad memories

But they weren't true

Glad no MUs

Gauri has gelled in so well with Oberoi's

Loved how Omkara is noticing Gauri

Her relationship with every member

Glad Omkara took the step

Talked to her

Gauri will see the old Omkara

Wonder what u have in store for them

Waiting eagerly to read more

Update soon

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Zarmina

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Love it!👏

I miss this Om so much.. With his morning walks and happy personality

I love getting to relive it through this story😃

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: zeenucharm
Awesome awesome awesome... . I love it yar... Plzzz continue soon dear... And all the best

Thank you dear! Very glad that you loved it. Will be back with more soon😳

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: coolove
Sooo good
You have to update
Can't wait to read more of this

Thank you so much dear! Will update the next chapter soon!😃

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Tellywoodaddict
This is beautiful I always wanted this memory loss and you made it even better I am loving this om as I always did ...the gorgeousness of their relationship..
Thank you for this .

I know right? You can't help but love old Omkara and I miss him terribly on screen too. I so wanted a memory loss but alas we're not gonna get it. At least in this fic we can have that!

You're welcome dear! And thanks for giving it a chance. I hope you'd enjoy the next update too. Looking forward to hear from you!

Love,

Sakura

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: rikara94
i love this update...
beautifully written dear..
i always wanted this track in show
shivaye did not let gauri go away
Love this om and sindhoor part and their conversation, concern for gauri
Awesome yaar..
Update soon

Thank you dear!

So did I, but the show hardly gives me what I want. So this is my way of snatching it. I'm very happy you enjoyed my version of the aftermath of the coma track. Hope you'll enjoy the future updates too.

Love,

Sakura

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome Loved it yar...
This is the same scenario i wished to see in the show
when om wakes up as the old om and his curiousity about gauri...but wat now showing in the show is exactly different...now fake pregnancy drama...again missunderstanding...but i am glad that you really gave me this superb story

I wanted this too. It was a great opportunity to get the old Omkara back on screen even if it was for a couple of weeks. But alas cvs don't think so😕

I'm very happy you liked my take. Please do enjoy the next shots too. Will look forward to hear from you!

Love,

Sakura

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: MyLoveisMyLIFE
awesome update !!

Thank you!😳

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: vrindagupta
Fantastic update
What exactly has come.over Omkara
Memory loss played its role well
Omkara doesn't remember the bad memories
But they weren't true
Glad no MUs

Gauri has gelled in so well with Oberoi's
Loved how Omkara is noticing Gauri
Her relationship with every member

Glad Omkara took the step
Talked to her
Gauri will see the old Omkara
Wonder what u have in store for them

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon

If we agree that he is what he is due to circumstances then a memory loss would revert him back to his old self right? I'm fed up of their mus so I wanted to rid them this once.

I belive old Omkara would have melted down seeing how well his supposedly wife had bonded with his family and also he is this kind of person right? Who used to care about other's feelings.

Glad you're enjoying the story Vrinda, please keep reading! Will be updating the next part soon!

Love,

Sakura