RiKara TS - Traces of You (completed)pt 3 pg 12 (28/6/17)- Page 11

Amazing end to a beautiful story

this was beautiful and lovely👏

wow amazing

This was so so beautiful and so in tune with the current track. Even that Omkara is coming around trying to understand things through Gauri's perspective. It was amazing really. Keep writing always :D

Sakura ... hiii.. this is so calm so serene m so much love. Someone go tell cvs that stories can be handled this way too.. memory loss track is something where shows go horribly wrong but here it's so smooth.. shows your prowess girl.


The way you go about it there's not a moment of bore. M hooked right from the word go. Shivay Gauri are beautiful. N even Rudra is fun. I love the way they go about bringing RiKara together. N Omkara is so real. That's the Omkara we know n this is what we expect outta him but am not sure why makers don't wanna explore him. N there first meet is beautiful n red. I loved Gauris reaction to him. All that sindoor. N then it keeps flowing from there. Each meet is more blissful then the other. N fun too. N then the temple scene. How I want this scene in the show. We had a lot of ideological tiffs between RiKara n then it fizzled out. But this temple scene is so picture perfect. I saw it all. N then she fell ill n reality tumbled out. But the way you handled it is so mature n I love Gauri taking things in her hand. That's my girl. The end is perfect.


Thanks Sakura. What you do to RiKara is magic. I simply adore your version.

Bye for now

Awesome story!!