Fan Fiction - Omkara Gauri (part 2 updated on pg 2)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 1


He was trapped in the room when he was heading over to Gauri's room and he heard kaali threatening her about something and she saying not to threaten and save someone
He could not hear the whole conversation clearly

He was still upset that Gauri had put Tilak on the sword to sacrifice Chulbul and if he had not pointed the gun at Kaali then Chulbul would not have been saved but something had his head but he had heard Chulbul is safe so that gave him some relief

Being the thakurain that Gauri was showing to be she had gone to her room and since she was the future wife
Only male member allowed to enter was her to be husband Kaali Thakur and no other male
Her room was befit a thakurains room with an adjoining heated swimming pool in it with roman column covered from the top

Her room was guarded by two women as no other male members even if the security were allowed in that section of Thakurs house except the owner itself
Anything the future thakurain needed would be delivered only by female member no one else
If any security male member he would be welcoming his own death and face the wrath of the Thakur

Admist all this happening Omkara heard Kaali leaving Gauri's room and tried heading but knew he would have to wait till the Thakur left to the function with his security which was compulsory for the Thakur to attend as it was a business party organised by none other than Omkaras father and his associates and there was no place for Omkara to be there other than Thakurs home

He had to find Chulbul and see himself .
He quietly returned to his room and pretended to sleep as he heard the Thakur opening the room door and barking orders to the security guards who looked sleepy themselves to keep an eye on him and that the Thakur would be returning the next morning

He heard the sounds of Kaalis keep and other guards leaving
He waited till the security guards fell asleep and then slipped out of the window from the room making sure that he had put pillows to make it look like someone was sleeping if someone peered when opening the door to check
No one really bothered in the middle of the night

He reached where he wanted to reach
The ladies outside gauris room were asleep .
He had to reach her room without waking them up to find out where Chulbul was hidden and she was the only person who he knew apart from kaali who would know where Chulbul is hidden but he had to approach her alone .

The window from his room led him to a room next to Gauri where he slipped and peered outside her room
He knew there had to be a window leading to her room as well so that would be his way in
He went back to the room next to Gauri's and used that room window and hoped his luck would work to find a way in to her room
He just prayed for Chulbul safety and hoped his dear friend was fine .
Luck gave in and he found a window latch open to her vast room



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely,, 👍🏼 interesting...
please continue...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is so interesting.
Continue soon. I can't wait to read further.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Premise interesting... please continue soonish
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Interesting chapter
Wonder what will Omkara find in Gauri's room

I am happy that u took back to the
Chulbul revealation track
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I do appreciate all the positive comments and am glad you like the reach it's going to
I know though in the serial that the Chulbul revelation has happened but I have had like so many scenarios running in my head on how the chances but I wonder if that would actually be televised so just pouring my thoughts through the story on how could it be
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2

He entered her room through the window and unawares the main bedroom area was dark but the only lit area was the swimming pool and what he didn't expect to find was a long haired Gauri swimming in the pool but with nothing on except for a towel kept near the pool

The area was lit in blue light so he was hidden in the shadow on the side but in front of him was a sight to behold he could see fair shoulders and glimpse of her long hair behind her the rest of her body was immersed in water

He didn't want to alarm her and alert the female asleep guards outside the gate so he decided the next best thing to do was confront her now so she couldn't scream or alert the guards

He came down from the window and thumped on to the carpet without making a sound and removed his brown jacket and white shirt but kept his black dhoti on and removed his slippers and slowly slipped in to the pool

Gauri felt some ripple of water in the pool but she was sure she was alone so she thought something must have just fallen in to the pool from the ceiling

Omkara entered the water slowly as his prey was directly was in front of him and she was unaware if his presence as he was hidden in the darkness of the pool only hint of blue light cascading around the long swimming pool with the beautiful Roman columns and the moonlight only helping to light the pool but it didn't help Gauri to notice who was there enjoying the pool with her

He waded forward in the water to her and she then felt something behind her and it is not what she expected to see was Omkara with no shirt and his hair tied wet and his glistening built body coming towards her
Her words were stuck in her throat and nothing would come out as he was coming nearer to her

She was rooted to the spot afraid to move
She realized then she had nothing on to shield her from what was coming her way not in terms of safety but in terms of her damn clothes not being there it was on the bed and the only thing she could reach quickly was her towel but that was even at the other end of the pool

She was cursing herself and her luck and wondering how did he manage to get in when she had locked the doors from inside and there were guards placed outside the room and no one would dare enter until they wanted to make a suicide attempt and be killed by Kali .

She knew Kali would kill Omkara if he came to know about him being with her when she was in this state and especially in her room and she never saw Omkara coming towards her like that or that he would even seek her out while she had no one around her let alone be alone in one room with her as his hatred for her was so much that he couldn't bear her

She knew he was hot but right now she was thinking a damn way to get out of the pool and racking her damn brain on how to get out of this predicament



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Edited by amoreedamicizia - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting update..such a khidkitod twist..our gentleman om's new avataar is quiet shocking..eargely waitig for next update..
Edited by lakshmi32 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That was an unpredictable twist.nice one
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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting...you surprised me...I never expected this
seeing om like this is unbelievable...Ya but every person has a hidden side...I am really loving this

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