Revengefully Yours (Updated Chapter 15 pg 15 28th May) - Page 10

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Posted: 8 years ago
#91
Please update soon yar ...waiting for four days...where are you?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92
A fantastic piece of work...I liked it...
Possessive omie...jealous omie...lusted omie...we got to see all the different shades of omie in this story...and I absolutely loved reading it
Update soon can't wait for more

~Maha~
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93
Loved the story very much.. When can we expect the next update.. Can't wait for omie and gauri s wedding..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94
Hey nandini...amazing writing..waaahh..!! ur possessive omie will be a treat to watch onscreen also...and gauri's emotions are perfectly described in ur story..loved it..plz update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sorry people, for the late update. I have been really busy these last few days. Thank you being patient and all the lovely comments. You inspired me to write the next chapter. Here goes...

Chapter 15


As Omkara led her out of the room, Gauri followed him mutely,in a daze,after his announcement.

They were going to get married...

Gauri could not believe it. It was all too much to take in. Suddenly she felt light headed, and stumbled. She would have fallen too,had it not been for Omkara's quick reflexes,as he caught her, his arms going around her. "Are you all right"? He asked,concern evident in his eyes as they raked her face,taking in her wan expression.

Then without waiting for her response, he simply swung her up effortlessly in his arms and started walking up the staircase. " I am fine, really". said Gauri weakly, trying to wriggle free. He just ignored her,merely tightening his hold on her. Gauri stopped struggling,she knew,she was not going anywhere. She felt cherished, cocooned. She wanted to rest her head against his shoulder and close her eyes, she wanted to stay there,in his arms,forever.

Omkara cursed himself as he carried Gauri towards her bedroom.How could he have been so crass and insensitive?. Last night had been her first time, yet he had shown no restrain. He had been a demanding lover, making love to her again and again. Fixated with the burning need to satiate the mindless hunger he felt for her,to claim her,mark her as his. He had been selfish. He had hurt her,his jaw clenching at the thought. No wonder she looked so pale,he thought angrily. She was so small, so delicate, he should have been gentle with her. But all good sense had flown out of the window as soon as he had touched her. All he had been capable of feeling had been this overwhelming need to possess her.


Omkara entered her bedroom and walked towards the bed, laying her down gently. He sat next to her, raising his hand as he traced a stray strand of hair and tucked it behind her ear,all the while gazing into her doe shaped eyes. "Rest for sometime" he spoke softly but the message was clear. It was not a request. "And if you are well enough, we will go out for dinner, does that suit you?" he asked gently. Gauri merely nodded her head.

Omkara got up reluctantly, his hands bunched into fists as he slid them into his pockets. He wanted to kiss her, just a peck on her lips. But he did not trust himself to stop there. It was as if he was physically restraining himself from touching her. He took a step back, "See you in the evening", he said gently, his eyes caressing her face. With that he turned around and walked out of the room.

As he walked down the staircase, he saw the female members of his famiy,huddled together,no doubt discussing his upcoming wedding,he thought fondly. In a way, it was good that he had found them together. He had wanted a word before he left for work. They stopped talking and looked at him expectantly as he approached.

"Will all of you please ensure that Gauri rests properly in her room. She is not well and I don't want her to stress herself." It was more of a command than anything else.

All of them nodded, too surprised by the quick turn of events, by the change in Omkara's attitude towards Gauri. Not that they had any issues,they loved Gauri. She was perfect for Omkara.

Just then Omkara's mobile rang, and anyone watching his face closely would have observed the sudden tightening of his features as he stared at the name flashing on the screen. But they were all oblivious to everything apart from his and Gauri's wedding that had to be organised in a short span of one week.

With a terse "Excuse Me", Omkara walked out of the house,his mobile held to his ear,making his way to his chauffeur driven car.





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Posted: 8 years ago
#96
Fantastic update
Omkara is just so much into Gauri
He feels bad of hurting her
If He feels so strongly for her
Why not confess

I loved seeing this caring side of Omkara
Glad he was with her
He even asked family to take care of her
Wonder why didn't anyone tease him
But why they would
They know him agreeing to marry is itself a big accomplishment

I am liking this Omkara
Authoritative, caring , loving n possessive too
Never thought om would have this side too

Wonder whose call was it
That Omkara got so tensed
Wish nothing comes in between their happiness now

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#97
Thanks for the update...awesome writing...omkara is like caringkara in this part..well I'm thinking whose name flashed in his mobile's screen...hopefully you'll update the next part soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98
Wow such a cute update omkara's concern after his ahem ahem.awwwh...

Putting his hands in pocket... Scene was too cute... Aisa lag rha tha he would slap his hand for doing naughty thing...


Awwwh... He commanded his family to let her rest... Good
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Posted: 8 years ago
#99
This was an awesome update plz update next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh man I am speechless right now
You are awesome 👏 👏
I have fallen in love with the omkara you have created
Read all the chapters in one go and I absolutely loved it
Thank you so much for giving us this story

Omkara is a passionate person and now he realises that maybe gauri isn't so bad
Maybe she was a victim to the circumstances
I cant wait to read further
Please update soon and keep it up you are a brilliant writer

Love, sonalika.

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