Rikara SS....Falling In Love Was Never Easy Updated part 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi all
Couldn't stop myself. There are so less SS, FFS on Rikara that I thought to begin one myself. I don't no how it would come out.. But... Am a big Shrenu fan and shrenal, if treated properly can give a big competetion to all chemistrilicious onscreen couples in tellyworld😳😉

Part 1 - pg 1
Part 2 - pg 1

The story begins just after yesterday's precap after when om sees gauri at om

Gauri is totally lost in singing her devotional songs as she also knows that the jagrata was for only women and men weren't allowed. So she had no chance of meeting om. Being a hardcore devotee and believer of god she was totally loving being Gaur again even if it was for few hours. She loved that reprieve from ever seething dilemma and tension. Unknown to her she was being watched by someone... Someone who was speechless seeing her after ages in his OM. This someone was Omkara. He couldn't believe that it was actually really Gauri and not his mirage like always. He didn't know how to react. Already in very puzzled state due to Svetlana this image of gauri had chilled his blood to a stone body. He couldn't decipher if what he saw was a truth or again a weird figment of his imagination. He was rendered frozen just when he felt her passing by him. Unwantedly, unknowingly, his hands moved and held her by their own accord. That moment he still thought that again it was just an illusion and in noways could gauri ever come here... Gauri the girl whom he had married Unwantedly, the treacherous girl who only knew to break houses and people, a shameless girl who could fall to any extent to get what she wanted... And finally even if it was his imagination he could at least speak out what he wanted to... No way could that bitch be real.
Gauri who was still in her own dreamland didn't even see what storm was coming her way... She didn't see Omkara watching her
Walking in her own trance she felt her hand being caught by a very strong hand.. She felt big bouts of current passing through her. Her eyes popped out just feeling and knowing that it was none other than omkara who had caught her and this time she had nowhere to run and hide. She was rooted to spot just as he was.
Slowly both turned towards each other while gauri scared to death of her truth being caught and omkara thinking it to be a nightmare which would not be going away anytime soon and wished it to just be a mirage. Sea of emotions was running in Gauri eyes. She felt suffocated, her heart was up in her mouth fearing the rage of omkara coz as chulbul she knew how dangerous was OM's anger and hatred and here omkara just still couldn't make out the storm riding in him at actually feeling a similar current or static that he used to feel with chulbul from gauri... Gauri the worst and hidden part of his life... How could it even be possible...



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello dear..
Lovely writing😳
I have seen u in ebp forum and have read few of ur ashlok stories.
Welcome to dbo forum😊
Hope u join us in Shrenu AT too..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely one... Hi I am too from ebp forum...
How are you...
I am eagerly waiting for the epi...
And also for the next part of your story...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome Loved it
it's too interesting
plz continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A nice one I want to read more update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aah Anna plz write more - evn I'm searching for more ffs.
I can imagine the angst and passion in this one
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanx all for ur comments...
Part 2

Gauri had nowhere to run.. His hold on her wrist was too strong... How in that moment she wanted the earth to swallow her up or somebody make her invisible. She was scared out of wits seen a very very very furious omkara. While omkara was still reeling under the shock of seeing gauri in om...amd it wasn't any illusion this time... But before he could even move he felt someone pulling him...just a fraction of moment and he felt a sharp pain in his palms... His grip loosened on gauri and he saw her running away even before he could comprehend anything... This girl only ever Gave him pain... But today... She bit him.. Bit omkara Singh Oberoi...damn.. She ran away... Thanx to.. This whoever pulled me... He turned and saw.. It was none other than soumya who had held him and was hiding behind him while his little effing brother Rudra was trying to get hold of...
" what the whuck???? Are you guys crazy? Grow up. Rudra.. Soumya.. I don't expect this from you..what are you two some kg students"
S- o bhaiyya... Not my fault... This dumbbell Oberoi is weird. He's fighting with me just because I went on a date with Reyan...when he's the one who set me up with him...
R-o Hello... I set you up but I didn't say to bring him to my house... How dare you sumo? O.. Why don't you tell your Paratha Wali sister to behave... And stop cozing around with loosers
O holds Rudra and asks sumo to go to her room... He says to rudra
"what's your problem Rudra? If you can bring your Gfs here why can't she bring her boy freind here... Why the hell are you irritating her? Stop being childish. Let her live her life"
R-O you don't understand. In fact I don't understand myself. Why I get michmichis seeing her with any guy... I don't understand my self.. How do I explain it to you?
O-Rudra why are you being insecure. She isn't your property..
R-ofcourse she isn't my property but she's my... I don't know even though I don't accept this shit of marriage but a certain kind of hatred comes off whenever she ignores me or she gets cozy with some other guys... Somehow I have this craving to be the most important person in her life...
O-Rudra this is stupid. It's just that u r confused. she is your Freind. Give yourself and her some space and time. A lot has happened recently and it's taking a toil on you. And see even if you like her... Jealousy is a wrong feeling... See even when I was with Ridhima I always gave her space and we had such good understanding.. Feelings like jealousy have no place in any relationship... Rudra grow up... Its that you are too much pampered and not in habit of being ignored by anyone ...so stop being a jealous freak and crybaby. It's either you love her or don't... Nothing in between.
R-O... How do I tell you... I hate myself for feeling like this... I don't love her... But I don't know what has changed... We don't even accept this marriage yet this feeling of... I don't know.. And.. I know nobody can understand ...especially you Mr. Poetic Oberoi...you just get married and then may be you can solve my problem coz then only you will exactly know what changes... Then you might know the feeling of being ignored or... Whatever... But for that you have to get married brother...
O. Was reminded of Bareily... Of a certain girl.. Of certain instances and then the moment when he saw her in on just few min back... But he couldn't say anything to Rudra... How could he say him that he never felt possessive, ignored or jealous ...he didn't feel anything for gauri except hate...
R-O where r you lost?
O- No where... I just know one can never be stupid enough to be jealous or feel ignored... Don't ever give such power to anyone to rule you Rudra... Except truth, trust and understanding nothing else is needed for any relationship...
R-O OK fine you may be right for now... But I will talk to you about this when something like this happens with you... By the way your hand is bleeding... Who bit you... What happened?
O-Rudra that day will never come.. Never... And.. This hurt...well Thanx to you and soumya... Your Tom and Jerry games... I got hurt... Now go and say sorry to Sonya... Now... And it's an order..
R-ok... I will say her sorry but it's a challenge.. Soon you too will be in same sea like me and bhaiyya... I have an intution...bye...
O thinks in mind... Yeah that day will never come.. I hate her the most in world... But how dare she follow me to my house... And then run away like this... He notices an anklet on the floor where gauri was standing a few minutes back ...this... Is hers... Gauri I will not spare you... This wound on my palm will remind me of finding you at anycost now... Where did she go of to?... But the most strangest thing was... When I held her... She felt eerily familiar... That static... Damn...this is weird... But why the hell was she here.. Omkara called up a private detective.."Prem... Reach at Bennitoes,the coffee shop... I am reaching there now... " Gauri Sharma how dare you enter Oberoi mansion...run.. Let me see till where can you run and hide...

Edited by dreamyjennice - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So omkara was this close but gauri being gauri she bit him ROFL and cherry on the top was rudra and soumya such a cute pair rudra explaining his insecurities and omkara listening explaining him to behave and let her do what she want was awwwh...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: IlaTanwar

So omkara was this close but gauri being gauri she bit him ROFL and cherry on the top was rudra and soumya such a cute pair rudra explaining his insecurities and omkara listening explaining him to behave and let her do what she want was awwwh...

Yups gauri is smart... Let's see how omkara finds her... Rainy are so darn cute... I wished to see such a scene on them.. Alas.. They killed ru🤢umya
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ss1609

Hello dear..

Lovely writing😳
I have seen u in ebp forum and have read few of ur ashlok stories.
Welcome to dbo forum😊
Hope u join us in Shrenu AT too..

Aww ebp...thanx...

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