It Ain't Me - A Rikara 3 shot ( chap 3 pg 5 ) - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: senikada

Fabulous 👍🏼 plz continue

thank u so much 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
awesome update yar...
plz continue soon
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#23
it was a lovely part dear... and longer too :)
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Originally posted by: Mahira_khan

Nice episode!!!


Continue soon!!!

thanx mahi !
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Originally posted by: itsokaysammy

it was a lovely part dear... and longer too :)

continue soon..

thank you ...i know it was a bit longer than i write 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26

Chapter 3





jh-om use wapas leke ao
om sat down on his kness.His mind was tossing in the ocean of confusion .His heart wanted to stop her but his brain kept stoping it...reminding of how he assumed her to be .Atlast his heart overpowered the brain...maybe it was just waiting for the right guidance just like a teenager needs it when they can not understand the difference between good and bad.What they should do and what they should not do .And this guidance was given to him by his mother whom he kept above all in his life.

j- om bring her back ..woh waisi nahi hai jaise tu use sochta hai..agar woh swetlana jaisi hoti nah toh uske paas bohot se mauke the humse paise harapne ke liye ...chalo even if we forget that ...even u know this very well and even even i know it ki how many times she has saved our lives ..usne sari musibat apne upar le li just because she loves you ...

o-Nhi mom aisa hota toh woh kabhi bhi chulbul bankar ..

j- dhoka nahi deti right/...wrong ...i do not know why she did so ..but there must have been reasons ...aur tum bolte ho woh tumhe pyar nahi karti ...phir woh kyun gayi omkara tumhare ek baar bolne ki bas deri this and she left ...even you know how week she was ...usne phirse apne baar nahi socha beta ...her love you is selfless.Do not lose her beta ..it is your loss ,our loss .she is gem of a person beta .

o- woh aise nahi ja sakti ...i want my answers i want her ...

j- dekho dil ki baat zubaan pe aa hi gyi ...and u do not want her ..u need her..go bring her beta ..bring my bahu back .



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In the stantion gauri was sitting still in a bench with one hand pressing her wond and with the other clutching her suitcase tight .She never thought things were end so abruptly.Somewhere down there she was already missing her moments with omkara...but she had a satisfaction that whatever she was doing gave omkara pleasure and that was enough to bring a smile on her face.


she was too tired because of her wound and went to drink water from the public water bank.This was when she heard a scream which did sound a lot familiar


Gauriii...


Omkara ame forward with the forever so prominent frown on his face.He held gauri by her arms and jerked her twice


o- samajhti kya ho tum apne app ko ..aise hi bina bole chali jaungi ..do you even know meri halat kya ho gyi thi...

g- par ap hi ne to kaha tha

g- toh mein kahuga tki khudjao is track par ...kud jaogi kya

o- ap bolkar toh dekhiye...waise bhi kisi ko pharak bhi nahi parta ki hum jiye ya mare

gauri went out to jump when omkara held her by her waist and pulled her closer ...


o- tum pagal ho kya agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh mein kya karta ..aur kisne kaha ki kisis ko pharak nahi parta ...tumhari ma...tumhare students ..meri family mujh...


g- apko toh pharak nahi parta na ...boliye nah ..nahi parta nah...boliye ...bolieye omkara ...

o - are yar parta yaar...

g- kyun /

o- woh nahi keh sakta ...

g- pphir rehene dijiye hum nahui mante ..hum kudne ja rahe hai ...

o - arey tum pagal ho kya ...

g- phir boliye kyun parta ...

o- Beacuse I LOVE YOU dammit
yes i do...adat ho gyi hai mujhe tumhari ...nahi soch pata tumhare bina kuch ...sone jata hun hun toh tumhara kyal ata hai ..ki tum thik toh ho ...kahi dard toh nahi ...uthta hun toh tumhara chera dekhne ko dil jata hai ...dur reh kar bhi reh nahi pata ..nafrat karna chahu toh kar nahi pata ...arey i love you yaar aur kya sunna chahti hun


g- kuch nahi ...yeh bohot hai hamare liye ...she smirked

o- ho gaya ab chalo chili ayi vapas jane ...

he pulled by her arms when her wound ached

g-hum nahi chal ayenge omkara

o- toh hum kis liye hai ...


He picked her in his arms ...



all those wedding flashbacks came running through in their minds...

Mangalam Bhagvaan VIshnu ...


.(played in background )






the end hope you guys like it ...

did not proof read sorry for typos


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it😳
Edited by ....Anabella... - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it...

Read 2 & 3 part...

Superb...

Continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you so much 😊
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Originally posted by: Mahira_khan

Loved it...


Read 2 & 3 part...

Superb...

Continue soon...


Thank you so much Mahi 😊 means a lot

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