The Kidnap : Obros One Shot

Madhura

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: AngelicTomboy
I loved this kidnap.. OmRu !!! Please do this to Shivaay once in a while so that he does come to is senses and so that we would get OBros moments..
Coming to the story.. Madhu, this kidnap was so unique.. It was interesting too.. I do wish this happens in the show as well..

Thanku..

Yes, true!
Glad you liked the concept. You are welcome but show, we know this will not happen.

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Madhura

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Toota_ShiSha
Idiots these omru are ...dats y wouldn't let them kidnap kyunki woh nek kaam I'll do hahhh ...har din tadpaungi jaise usne humko kiya huhhh

madhu loved it ya for me shivaay is already dead but d. concept of it and dis fic coming in drought time of OBbros made it awesome ...

Lol Jessi!
Yes he is lost. Glad you liked it, he must be revived.

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Madhura

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: FlauntPessimism
Thanks Madhura for finally coming with it, this was so much of guilt ridden Shivaaaye and Boss Om
Will share a detailed comment tomorrow

:)) Welcome! Thanks for having patience and yes, it is that. Awaiting!

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SNOWWHITE83

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Posted: 8 years ago

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loved it.plz continue soon.missing kitchen moments,talk besides d pool,om shayaris,dbo moments.

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Madhura

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: .SNOWWHITE.
loved it.plz continue soon.missing kitchen moments,talk besides d pool,om shayaris,dbo moments.

Thanks Anju! Will do.

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Good stuff, Madz! (: I really liked the concept that you came up with. I don't watch the show nor do I know enough about Obrothers which is why I read the OS only because you wrote it. I don't know the nitty gritties of writing but as a reader, I could give a suggestion or two. The concept of the OS was a good one but it probably would have been more effective had it been a light-hearted/comedy tone all throughout. This how you begin to make your way though and you've done a rather good job at it!

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