OS : Dreams on Fire (Kastur's POV @ pg 3) - Page 2

Originally posted by: angel_cake

omg!!!!! this was a great os for mohan POV (point of view right??)!!!
im new on this forum and started watching it recently ... so yeah won't remeber you (lolol) .. not active member but come on when i get a chance ... but yeah will be waiting for kastur's pov soon .. keep wrting .. this was perfect!!! 😊

Originally posted by: komal jagdesh

areyyy def i remember u jyo

and awesome OS loved it

Originally posted by: vaishali667

very very nice& fabulous os

fabulous OS...luved mohan's pov..waiting 4 kastur's pov...

Originally posted by: sparkling-star

Good Job Jhoti ! ( :
Loved the OS .. It felt as if those words were stealin' off of
Mohan's mind .. 😉
He's not a bad person but all the circumstances make him look like a bad person . 😒
Hope to see Kastur's soon. (:

Originally posted by: ushmi

excellent jyoti...👍🏼 bt whrs kastur's pov... hey continue soon yaar...😊

Originally posted by: madhuri16

fabulous OS...luved mohan's pov..waiting 4 kastur's pov...

Hello all the Dharampankhas 🤗

How r u all...

first of all...i owe a BIG apology...SORRY.....

i got so caught up with studies and other work, that i forgot to write Kastur's POV...SORRY once again...

but now i am back...with the next part...hope u all like it...😳

Title Courtesy: Song 'Dreams on fire' from the movie Slumdog Millionaire

the OS will be like a POV from the both Mohan n Kastur's character..

first there is mohan's POV...which you have read...so now...the next one...

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DREAMS ON FIRE

Kastur's POV

I can't believe it is happening

All my dreams...no...no...my one and only dream...which i cherish the most...it will become true...

I will now be Mohan ji's Dharampatni...his better half...who will always be with him...

through thick and thin...through life and death...

no no...no death for now...only happiness...

i am so excited...

When Mohan ji came back...I was in a different world...

I wasn't able to control my emotions

Seeing him...i forgot to speak...forgot everything around me...

But then as i talked to him...it felt like i was talking to a new person...a changed person...

it felt like he was not my Mohan anymore...it felt like i am talking to a stranger...

But when i had lost hope...and accepted him as he was...he proposed...

i still can't believe it...he wanted to marry me...

i am in seventh heaven now...

I promise myself that i will fulfill all the duties and responsibilities of a wife...

agni ke pheron ke saath liya har vachan nibhaungi...

i will be his better half in each and every sense...

i always asked my baa what is the meaning of dharampatni...but she always said to me that when the right time will come...she herself would tell me...

and now when i asked her about it...she smiled and said do you know your mother?

i was surprised and shocked...of course i knew my mother...

but then she said have you seen her handle situations...??

i was again at a loss of words...but i said..yes ...she always keeps everyone happy...and solves their problems like they never happened...and she takes care of everyone's need...

then it struck me...

baa just smiled ...she knew i now know what it means...

she said to me...this is it...you go to a new family...everyone is a stranger...but you have to make them your own...you have to take care of everyone...to see to everyone's needs...and as for your mohan...i know you know what you have to do...

and then i knew...

and i made a promise to myself...

he will be my life now...well he always have been...

i will do everything in my capacity to keep him happy...

no matter what the condition is

i will always be by his side...never leave him...no matter what...his dreams will be my dreams...

no...they will be OUR DREAMS.

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Truth time : this did not turn out as i hoped it would...sorry...

but i just went with the flow...i just kept on writing what was coming in my mind😔

i know it is not good...

n also is it after DP has finished..😆

Sorry to keep you all waiting and then disappointing (i am still not satisfied)

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hope u all liked it..

if u did press the like button n leave a comment..😃

if u don't then let me know 'so that I can improve'😊

will be waiting'😍

love

Jyoti