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Posted: 17 years ago
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Aryanagar – Village of Sawai

OSUM 🤣 Lubbd it shoo much! 😆 Wow!! shera is myy Heroine now!😎 Shezz such a marvell!!!...😆Sometimes i feel i too am like her to a great extend! 🤣 Her smile made the shopkeeper fall,and he took Veer to be a MLA(Mouth lookin Agent)🤣 wow!!..Lashyy dii...😆M njooyin this soo much!!...😆
Whyy wat happened to Bigg baashan Veer today??..😆LolZ! 😆He cant stand to a Gurl!!!🤔teress somethin fishyy there boy...Better knoww it soon,or else it would be too late🤣 Dharam,poor fellow he cannot let Shera go coz of izzath problms! 😆 wowow!!..So tat says Shera will stayy along!! 🥳


Enroute Aryanagar

shera singin folk songs....n Bhalla likin it!😆Who knowss this Balla might in future get glued to Shera🤔 🤔hehe but i lovvvv it! 😆DV has to ride faster!!..haha serves thm right! 😆"Never take a Girl for Granted"
"On the way to Niphaud, we had to only put up with Bhalla… now…on the way back, we have to put up with both of them…" 🤣 🤣 🤣 How i wish i could accompanyyy u guys on tis osum n thrillin journey!😆aww..with all such laffer doses,no1 will feel bored! 😆

"Let it be… I don't think we should debate now. Let's talk about it later…at Aryanagar"🤣🤣🤣 wow!!..😆so u knoww itss hard to fight with gurlz!🤣good good...in future it will be really good! 😆

Yup,so finallyyyyy i hope Veer would win his debate!😃eeeek....Aryasabha,ooops...theyy are completlyy useles..nothin shud be told to thm! 😆

Aryanagar - Outside the palace

So the boys are bak! 😳 wowo!!..Shera impressed by the welcome they are gettin 😆hehe wayy to go gurl! 😛

Bhalla replies charmingly, in genuine awe of her talent "Oh…no…it was our pleasure to ride with you…. You entertained us so beautifully…"🤣🤣🤣Balla do come on for myy B'dayy partyyyy😆u can entertain myyy guests so well🤣

She grins at Bhalla "Thank you sir…" ooohhhhh🤣🤣🤣did she call him Sir..???🤣🤣 wow..Bhalla wont leave her noww!!!😆

"Do you always tell strangers, all about yourself…in this fashion?" 🤣🤣🤣whyyyyyy u wanna interupt alwayyzz??....😆samjo tho acha wen gurlzz are bossin around,donot interrupt or else it wud prove bad for u 😆🤣 *Ting Tong Warnin Bell*😆

"I don't tell strangers my name…"👍🏼🤗aww!!!..will givv anythin to see Veer's xpression at tis! 🤣wow...me impressed Shera tooo is hving a wittyy toungue like me!!!

Just as she is about to bow, Veer becomes wary of her intentions and immediately springs backwards, pulling Dharam with him.🤣🤣🤣whyy Veer are u feelin uncomfortable??....😆u feel u'll looose ur dignity if Shera onlyy boww Dharam right? 😆🤣neva ever think she will givv u a bow!!

"Veer… off late, you have started behaving very strangely with girls…it is very embarrassing…"🤣🤣🤣so true!!!😆hehe Veer has reasonss buddyyy😉

Yes…I was right…I knew it…she steals things off people… my sweets are missing…I told you…she is a thief…"🤣haha....who told u to givv it least importance??....😆Serves right! 😆

Frightened by Veer's temper, Bhalla discloses meekly "Actually, I was hungry...so...I ate them on the way.."

In a funny predicament, Veer stares open mouthed at Bhalla; not knowing what to say. 🤣🤣🤣wow.....wat a splendid escuse!!!😆i feel veer is noww thinkin he should hvv give in to Daksha!!!🤣no regretiin Veer..u invited all tese mess!!! 🤣

Unable to relate to Veer's outburst, Dharam asks him irately "you weren't interested in them when the poor girl presented them to you…now suddenly you miss them…"🤣🤣🤣Veer i can see him in a cage with sher on both sides😆wow..Bhalla n Dharam are njooyyiinn🤣

"Lord! How did she do it?"🤣🤣🤣even while goin she hasnt forgottn to take a momento of Veer to herself!😆wowow!!!...go gril Go👍🏼 Noww we'll hv Veer on tailin mission!!!🤣


Palace of Nipahud – The queen's chamber

"My friend…Queen Vaidehi of Chatarpur had sent me a message four days back" she sighs happily and continues "Her son, Rajkumar Harsh has expressed a desire to ask for your hand in marriage…"🤣🤣🤣so tere we see!😆who vaidevi is!!!🤣so Harsh brainyyyy is goin 2 make his entryyy tooo....🤣 Veer time to act noww!!!😆

she subconsciously remembers Dharam's words "Trust me, nothing has changed… you will meet your prince and you will still have many beautiful moments with him… I am certain of this....don't worry…🤣🤣🤣tatsss Great..Dharam also has left dialogues tat Sia can gladlyy remmber..in this wayy he can come in her memories...These boyyss hv learnt looadss in gurukul🤣🤣

Palace of Aryanagar - Veer's waiting chamber

Failing to catch sight of him anywhere, she hurriedly walks back into the waiting chamber, until she notices a veiled girl sitting there quietly...🤣🤣🤣so she has come bakk..much expected😆

The girl slips back her veil and replies softly "I am waiting for Rajkumar Veer…"🤣🤣🤣mast dialogue to tell ur gonna be mom in law😆

Not knowing what to make of the unusual situation, the baffled queens stare at each other and break into astounded smiles. With numerous remaining errands to attend to, they ultimately leave the room murmuring gossip to each other.🤣🤣🤣gossips gossips evrywere..not a place to stayy!!...🤣

"Yesterday this knife fell into my basket unknowingly…I am waiting for Rajkumar Veer to return, so I could return it personally…I was asked to wait here." 🤣🤣🤣personallyy too!!!!😆🤣dharam samjo teress some thing fishyy somewere~😆or Bhalla ko bulaaoo....😆🤣

Dharam becomes increasingly troubled by her statements, while she persists "Rajkumar Dharam… I fully support you in this matter…whatever you said was right…you seem very level-headed….time and tide wait for none…if an urgent situation is coming up, any moment is the right moment to speak up…why wait to think...investigate…"🤣🤣🤣wat a Trap1!...no doubt Dharam will fall to it!....😆Were did u take Masters in Tellin Lies??🤔May i also knoww??....😆

You? Here? At this time? How did the guards grant you permission? Oh Lord! Did anyone see you here…imagine if Dharam came here… what would he think…"🤣🤣🤣haha....gurlss never leave anyy charmin knights theyy get their wayyyyy😆Look out!!!😆

"Oh yes...I can even picture how it crawled into your basket… anyway thank you so much for this…you may leave now…"🤣🤣🤣Veer itss high time u too strt learnin lyin!!....😆or else Shera will not let u livv peacefullyyyyyy🤣

"Rajkumar Dharam might not agree…but…pertaining to your dilemma yesterday, I support you… speech is silver but silence is golden … never speak, always act…you are right…always wait for the right moment to speak…make sure you have the evidence…"🤣🤣🤣so all set to stand on both shores??...😆Mischiefff Gurll!!....🤣lovvv uu looaddzz!!!!😆

Before leaving the room, she smiles at him assertively "I am telling you Rajkumar Dharam is at the temple…attending the ceremony…you can wait here if you want to…"🤣🤣🤣Make an impact and thn go!!..wooww!!..amazin!!!😆

@Lashyy dii....Shoo Shooryy for being late!

M in love with Shera! 😛shezzz like me to a great extent!😆haha....at times i feel as though i am on her shoes in the scenes...n laugh out loud....soon mom shoutzz frm kitchen...

Lottzz of lovvvvv
Minzy😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Shraddha di gr8 job.your lucid,captivating and vivid language only adds to the delightful plot and being a Dharam fan myself,it adds to my pleasure on seeing wonderful justice being done to Dharam's character. 👏
Are the Sagars listening 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I posted the previous reply and in a fraction of seconds your pm arrived.Abhi bahut kuch type karna padega 😭 Actually I am very lazy 😉 By the way,Spandita's meaning is interpreted in different ways by some people(jo apna aap ko kuchh zyaada hi intelligent samajhte hai)But actually it means dhadkano mein rehne waali and also dil ko dhadkaane waali(both related to heartbeat).As for my matured language,sab meri didi ka kamaal hai.Rahi meri thoughts, woh maine zyaada logon ke saath share nahin karti.Par aapko bataya kyunki aap mujhe didibhai ki yaad dilati hai.Woh is waqt higher studies ke liye Gwalior mein hai and she is sick know so I am missing her a lot as she is my best friend.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Lashyyyyyyyy........ 🤗 🤗 🤗
Fantastic part again...Hmmm..."Start of Something New" for Veer n our gypsy girl!!!
I liked this part a lot...the confronatations between Veer n d Girl were witty n brilliant...
Like the way she bends down to pick up her basket n Veer mistakes it for sumthing else..."I don't tell my name to starngers" was another kicker...
I think...If U cud have shown a bit more of converstaion between Veer-Dharam-Girl in the cart..it wud have made the part much more intresting..Like 2-3 dialogues here n there...n a few giggles n Veer's angry moods... 😆
The Gyspy girll...Hmmmm..She seems to be an intresting girl...I am unable to understand her completely...so plzzzz..PLZZZ...PLZZZZZ in the next part show her character n qualities n uska n Veer ka confrontations...I'll be eagerlyyyyy waiting for it...VERYYYY EAGERLYYY!!!
On the whole I lovedd reading the part..It was light hearted n cool!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ arshoo baba

wow i admire you for taking time out to read this amidst your busy schedule arshoo.. hope everything is going on fine in your studies department.. 😊

and you liked this part? aur kyaa chaltaa hai mere dimaag main 😆 kyun aise kyun kahaa? main bhi shera ki tarah hoon kyaa? 😆

and bhalla bichaara.. is innocent brahmachari... it just goes to show how enticing shera is, ki innocent people like bhalla too... cant say NO to her.. 😊

awwww you are meant to like dharam and siya only now arshoo.. jab veer aur shera ka turn aayegaa tab kehna.. ki woh pasand aa rahe hain ki nahin.. 😳

thank you so much for your complements.. 🤗

@ minoo

awwww you liked this part? thank you minoo... 🤗

i am original with my script? 🤔 as in ....par...main hi likh rahi hoon na... 🤔

scheming street-smart gal ahem... after your heart? 😆 why minoo in which janam were you like this hun? awwww just kidding hun...yes she is very intelligent...😊

thank you so much for all your complements... and yes she is such a cool-head... 😎 and Veer is very intelligent too.. so no doubt he feels better avoid her than get into trouble.. 😆

awww happy you liked Dharam Veer interactions and what is MC? the only MC i know is master of ceremony 😛

episodes more than once a week.. and then you want to threaten me with mafia and pelt my house 😆 waah... kyaa tarekein hain kaam karvaane ki.. 😆

awwww thank you so much minoo glad you enjoyed this part.. 😳

@ moreremix

thank you so much for your comments 😳 and glad you liked the part.. 😳 and am happy you find her perfect for our hero.. 😛

aww next part will be up soon dont worry.. thank you so much for your comments.. they mean a lot.. 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow Shraddha di...ur an amazing writer-but u know that already of course

i loved each and evey bit...very dialogue and the whole part was...it was just too gud...i cant simply describe ur writing skills

im eagerly awaiting for next saturday!!

a suggestion: GET THIS STORY PUBLISHED!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy

@ arshoo baba

wow i admire you for taking time out to read this amidst your busy schedule arshoo.. hope everything is going on fine in your studies department.. 😊....oh.....😳....haanji everything goin well.... i cant watch DV but i can certainly read this lovely FF....😛

and you liked this part?yeh bhi koi puchhne ki baat hai? aur kyaa chaltaa hai mere dimaag main 😆 kyun aise kyun kahaa?....dont know why i said tht.....but after reading the story i felt tht...so i said... main bhi shera ki tarah hoon kyaa? 😆....no one can be like shera....shez different🤢...lolz........

and bhalla bichaara.. is innocent brahmachari... it just goes to show how enticing shera is, ki innocent people like bhalla too... cant say NO to her.. 😊..lolz so he too is bal brahmchari like me.....cool😎

awwww you are meant to like dharam and siya only now arshoo.. jab veer aur shera ka turn aayegaa tab kehna.. ki woh pasand aa rahe hain ki nahin.. 😳,.....woh to dekh lenge hum........

nyways whoz this "arshoo baba"??

thank you so much for your complements.. 🤗... u r welcome diiii🤗

@ minoo


awww happy you liked Dharam Veer interactions and what is MC? the only MC i know is master of ceremony 😛.Di......😡😡 MC means Mugdha Chaphekar,,,.......😃.......now please note this down......😆....jk

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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ minzy

Sometimes i feel i too am like her to a great extend! 🤣

minzy.. tum bhi aise jhoot bolti ho kya? 😲

MLA(Mouth lookin Agent)

hai Raaam.. ye saare terms kahaan se lekar aayi? i havent heard of it so far... 😆

How i wish i could accompanyyy u guys on tis osum n thrillin journey!😆aww..with all such laffer doses,no1 will feel bored! 😆

awwwww dont worry imagine yourself there too... and then it would still be fun.. 😛

minzy tumne to poora ka poora girl power dikhaayaa hai... you like girls winning over boys all the time kyaa? 😆

🤣Balla do come on for myy B'dayy partyyyy😆u can entertain myyy guests so well🤣She grins at Bhalla "Thank you sir…" ooohhhhh🤣🤣🤣did she call him Sir..???🤣🤣 wow..Bhalla wont leave her noww!!!

😆


Just as she is about to bow, Veer becomes wary of her intentions and immediately springs backwards, pulling Dharam with him.🤣🤣🤣whyy Veer are u feelin uncomfortable??....😆u feel u'll looose ur dignity if Shera onlyy boww Dharam right? 😆🤣neva ever think she will givv u a bow!!

no minzy he pulls Dharam back because he thinks, she is coming to steal something off them... he doesnt trust her.. 😛

"Lord! How did she do it?"🤣🤣🤣even while goin she hasnt forgottn to take a momento of Veer to herself!😆wowow!!!...go gril Go👍🏼

awwwwww 😳

Dharam also has left dialogues tat Sia can gladlyy remmber..in this wayy he can come in her memories...These boyyss hv learnt looadss in gurukul🤣🤣

tum aaj serious scene par bhi kyun has rahi ho..😛

wat a Trap1!...no doubt Dharam will fall to it!....😆Were did u take Masters in Tellin Lies??🤔May i also knoww??....Veer itss high time u too strt learnin lyin!!....😆or else Shera will not let u livv peacefullyyyyyy🤣

awwwwww 😆

M in love with Shera! 😛shezzz like me to a great extent!😆haha....at times i feel as though i am on her shoes in the scenes...

haila minzy she like you? you also con people kyaa.. to phir tumse bachke hi rehna padega 😆

@ spandita

awwww thank you so much for your comments and you do have a very sweet name.. thank you so much for following on the story and commenting on it.. its a pleasure😳 i was on cloud 9 reading your comments..

@ ashoo

🤗 ashoo jaan.. nice to see you here....

Start of Something New" for Veer n our gypsy girl!!!

yes it is start of something new...

I liked this part a lot...the confronatations between Veer n d Girl were witty n brilliant... I think...If U cud have shown a bit more of converstaion between Veer-Dharam-Girl in the cart..it wud have made the part much more intresting..Like 2-3 dialogues here n there...n a few giggles n Veer's angry moods... 😆

actually na aashi.. i thought it would not look very natural.. bcos neither Veer nor Dharam are interested in what she has to say... Veer knows she is a thief.. and DV are so worried about the war coming ahead.. it would take the emphasis out of their mission..plus she is also intelligent and strong girl.. wouldnt jaan boochke speak to catch their attention...😛 dont worry all you want will happen slowly.. it will all happen naturally through the flow of the story.. dont worry there will be interesting conversations.. but as part of the flow dont worry.. 😊 and i have strictly noted your requests 😆


The Gyspy girll.....She seems to be an intresting girl...I am unable to understand her completely...so plzzzz..PLZZZ...PLZZZZZ in the next part show her character n qualities n uska n Veer ka confrontations...I'll be eagerlyyyyy waiting for it...VERYYYY EAGERLYYY!!!

actually i dont know if you went through the last few paragraphs properly.. but anyway what she is doing and why she is doing it is still hidden only na.. so its totally understandable that you seem confused.. within the next 2-3 episodes you will understand her better... i purposely sketched her conversations and her actions in a gray manner... so readers would be interested to know what she is doing and why... 😳

@ shona

yayyyy so nice to see you here buddy 🤗 going brilliant with your FF too...

and thank you so much for your kind words and your support and wow kyaa ending line likhi ho... 😆 awww thank you so much for all those complements... you are lovely 😳

Edited by lashy - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: divareena

abhy 🤗 🤗 - hi sweetie, hulllooooo!!!!! 🤗

let me answer your question for you

How did Shera know he was in his bath!!?and why is Veer is so shell shocked about her and other three persons finding her there? What would they think anyway? -

Shera knew that he was in the bath because she went and saw him and came back running out. 😳😆😆

how does she take a peek?didn't his bathroom have latch or guards??shollliiiee I've this bad habit of questioning everything 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Preview posted (dialogues subject to slight change) 😳

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