Sarcastic update 24.03.08-29.03.08

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Posted: 17 years ago
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This weeks epi starts in avidi ka rajmahal. Everyone is sitting at the breakfast table with empty plates and katories with only the ever present bowl of fruits and one plate of jelabies. Veer offers the jelabies to pandit ji, he forgot that he himself is the guest in that palace, however maharaj natrajan who was feeling very hungry and didn't want the panditji to eat all the jelabies asked veer to pass the plate to him. This angered panditji very much and his empty stomach started troubling him. Looking at his discomfort maharaj asked panditji what was troubling him, panditji that time was thinking of her daku family enjoying playing holi and drinking bhang, in his hunger panditji screams out bhang with all the longing. However realizing his mistake he says that his teesre aankh is troubling him and coz of this everything will be destroyed. So the maharaj shd hv a pooja done for his mukut to stop this destruction. Veer the only intelligent person present at that break fast table wanted to know what was the connection between a eye, a crown and bhang. However sia who didn't want to waste anymore time sitting next to harsh told him everything was ok and to drop the matter.

Pandity ji does the pooja and in the pooja creates a lot of smoke. Using the opportunity panditji hides maharajs crown in his jholi. However our clever veer opened one eye and saw the panditji up to his tricks and exchanged the crown with a coconut. Veer then cornered panditji in the corridor and explained to him how he had fooled panditji.

Here in some cave of aryanagar a sainik comes to jai and agni and informs them of kishans dead body they hv found in the jungle, jai turns to agni and tells him ur dead body is found. Agni is very confused to hear this but smiles at his father going deaf slowly due to age.

Jai comes with maharaj and the rajya sabah next to the dead body and by seeing the dirty feets of the laash declares him to be agnis dead body, no one else in aryanagar had such dirty feets. The leader of the rajya sabha orders the sainiks to go and find some clues nearby, the sainik confused with the leader always ordering them abt addresses him as maharaj, while the maharaj just keeps standing there with a shock expression on his face.

The sainiks bring one belt, looking at it jai says its not agnis, it must be dharam veers, but since veer is absent it must be dharams, but no date was mentioned on the belt.

The rajya sabha now summons dharam into the courtroom. The members of the rajya sabha have a memory charm done on them and so they sometimes become sharmiks, sometimes the sainiks and sometimes members of the rajya sabha. The leader of the rajya sabha blames dharam for agnis death. Dharam refuses to accept this and asks for one day to prove himself innocent.

Dharam goes to gopi and brings him to his mahal to give evidence in his favour in the morning. Gopi however realized that if he told the whole truth to the rajya sabha abt how he left his aging father all alone in the jungle with dharam chasing him and ran in the opposite direction to save himself, the rajya sabha is going to punish him. So he tells the rajya sabha that he saw dharam killing agni. Rajya sabha now asks maharaj to give his verdict, but there the director asked maharaj to again postpone it for one more day as veer still had 1 day left for his stay in avidi. So the maharaj says he will give his faisla in the morning. Now only avidi ki maharani had heard him, she then wld have realized that she neednt mourn her dead brother as maharaj only is her long lost brother.

Here in avidi ka mahal harsh found one stupid stone lying around so nicked it and presented sia as a token of his love. Sia got very angry at this and said she would kill him if he ever again gave such a useless gift to her.

Our panditji now enters the mahal as a nai. Now our maharaj ke forefathers had a very large head and had the crown made as per there head size. The crown is loose for Maharaj natrajan so instead of having the crown resized to fit his head and hurt his forefathers sentiments he decided to leave the mukut in the khazane ke kamre mein safely. However he wants the nai to cut his hair in such a manner that incase if he ever requires to wear the crown it wont slip and cover his eyes. Nai so to show his professionalism asks him to bring the crown and he will accordingly cut maharajs hair, maharaj very pleased with this suggestion goes and brings his crown. Today morning in avidi no breakfast was served, when maharaj entered his room and saw the nai eating some churan he cldnt control himself so snatched the pouch out of his hand and had the churan himself.

Eating the churan maharaj faints and nai takes the crown and runs with it, at that time only veer enters maharaj rooms andunderstands everything. He orders the sainiks to go and catch the nai, the nai here with magic changes his disguise in an instant to that of a sainik and informs veer that he had seen himself running in the other direction. Veer immediately runs in that direction but suddenly remembers that he had not met any male sainiks in the palace who spoke in a girls voice like the panditji and so throws his knife and stops the nai. Both have a talwar bazi competition in which the nai kept changing with magic. One moment shera, one moment someone else. Veer was so confused with this and using the opportunity shera jumps from the window and escapes but veer manages to snatch the bag with the crown in it from her. He brings the crown back to the maharaj who is happy to have his crown but finds the himor ka pathar missing, however consoles himself with at least the crown was saved and so forgets abt the pathar.

Shera comes back to her father place. Her father seeing her in new clothes is very upset with her for again spending money. However shera gives him the two pathars and tells him that in acquiring these two pathars her clothes got spoiled so she had to buy new ones. Sheras father wanting to replace the loss of buying new clothes immediately takes her to a baba who can maybe help them understand the nishan and thereby help them get the khazana. Baba sees the nishan of a natrajan and thinks if he just tells the father and daughter that it's a simple nishan of natrajan all his reputation will go down the drain, so changes his voice tone and says in a freighting voice that the pathars are manhoos and that they should throw them away immediately in some river, now this sounded more like what a baba shd say.

In the morning in aryanagar maharaj refuses to sentence his own son so decides to step down from the throne, dharam thinking even if his father steps down from the throne the new king will not pardon him so its better he surrenders himself and let his father keep the throne. Anyways veer will be coming back today and will save me, then my this gesture will deeply impress the rajya sabha.

In avidi engagement preparations are going on. Veer asks maharaj natrajan where maharani was, maharaj replied in the pooja room. Veer asks him to go there and keep maharani in the pooja room for some more time. He then brings harsh with him out of the pooja room and makes him accept the fact that he is marrying sia for avidi ka dhan. Hearing this the maharani is very angry. As it is her useless maharaj had not been able to acquire much dhan and they were all living in a tent, now this harsh wanted to take that away too, so she comes and slaps him and declares the engagement off.

Dharam had send charusena to get veer from avidi, just as harsh and his dad were abt to leave charusena comes there and reveals veers identity, this makes veer very angry now all his work of last 4 days was for nothing. Harsh now not knowing how angry veer was tries to push him but gets told off nicely for that. Poor guy literally started shaking seeing the anger in veers eyes. After veer leaves from there maharani again declares the engagement on but this time maharaj natrajan fed up of this on and off business cancels the engagement.

Veer realizing something is very wrong with dharam reaches aryanagar by apparating and goes to the prison to meet dharam. Dharam now had been put in the same cell where bhimsen was kept, bhimsens residual presence has effected him. As soon as he spots veer he hold his hands and start kissing his hands. Veer shocked at the effect the prison was having on his brother immediately starts pulling him out. He explains to dharam how he will help him escape from there and then both of them will search for evidence to prove dharam innocent. Dharam remembers that the last time he tried to play james bond and find the messiah he got labeled with agnis death, now he does not want to take any more risks, so asks veer to do all this himself while he will safely wait for veer in the prison cell.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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lol!!..awesome one dear!!..... 😛 😛

such a long one....u hv carried the whole weeek in it...good 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😲 How do u manage to type so much...and how do u even remember what happened on monday...I think twice even for yesterday's episode 😕 .....
But I must say....Amazing work..and very well written,Agni's dirty feet 😆 😆 ,Dharam's James bond antics 😆 Shera,maharaj Nataraj 😆 very well described...but y did u miss that Agni and Jai mama's aborigin dance...around the throne mistaking it to be some fire.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG Kiran ... FANTASTIC SU !!

Her father seeing her in new clothes is very upset with her for again spending money. 😆 😆 😆

As it is her useless maharaj had not been able to acquire much dhan and they were all living in a tent, now this harsh wanted to take that away too, so she comes and slaps him and declares the engagement off.
🤣🤣 🤣

reaches aryanagar by apparating 😆 ....bhimsens residual presence has effected him. As soon as he spots veer he hold his hands and start kissing his hands. Veer shocked at the effect the prison was having on his brother immediately starts pulling him out🤣🤣🤣

OMG I cannot possibly list every sentence that made me laugh as every single instance is soo funny... Please please please do keep updating the weekly SU's for loyal fans like me 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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🤣 crazy ji!!! i've not laughed this much even when jv and agni were doin their item number yesterday... 😆 😆 😆 kewl update!!!!!! 😎 and nishkala's right how do u manage to remember all that????? 😲 but good thing u do coz me loved it..... 😃 😃 😃 veer apparating to aryanagar was the best part... 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: minz~12

lol!!..awesome one dear!!..... 😛 😛

such a long one....u hv carried the whole weeek in it...good 😳

thanks😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: nishkala

😲 How do u manage to type so much...and how do u even remember what happened on monday...I think twice even for yesterday's episode 😕 .....
But I must say....Amazing work..and very well written,Agni's dirty feet 😆 😆 ,Dharam's James bond antics 😆 Shera,maharaj Nataraj 😆 very well described...but y did u miss that Agni and Jai mama's aborigin dance...around the throne mistaking it to be some fire.

u hv videos for that nish, waise on sat morn subah se pure week ka repeat aa raha hai😆

uske bare mein itna sab kuch likh chooki hoon ki now what more to add😆

thanks😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhuvana3

OMG Kiran ... FANTASTIC SU !!

Her father seeing her in new clothes is very upset with her for again spending money. 😆 😆 😆

As it is her useless maharaj had not been able to acquire much dhan and they were all living in a tent, now this harsh wanted to take that away too, so she comes and slaps him and declares the engagement off.
🤣🤣 🤣

reaches aryanagar by apparating 😆 ....bhimsens residual presence has effected him. As soon as he spots veer he hold his hands and start kissing his hands. Veer shocked at the effect the prison was having on his brother immediately starts pulling him out🤣🤣🤣

OMG I cannot possibly list every sentence that made me laugh as every single instance is soo funny... Please please please do keep updating the weekly SU's for loyal fans like me 😳

thanks bhuvi and after all it was ur brilliant idea that i write one for the whole week😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: kunataanya

🤣 crazy ji!!! i've not laughed this much even when jv and agni were doin their item number yesterday... 😆 😆 😆 kewl update!!!!!! 😎 and nishkala's right how do u manage to remember all that????? 😲 but good thing u do coz me loved it..... 😃 😃 😃 veer apparating to aryanagar was the best part... 😆 😆

thats a real cool compliment😊

thanks glad u like it😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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🤣 ...couldnt help myself from laughing......
just rocking 😆 😆 😆

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