DOTW:the story of DV lacks originality. - Page 3

Originally posted by: luv_khwaish

I'm enjoying DV n it never crossed my mind tht it's being copied from PRC. I love the 2 romantic pairs Dharam-Sia & Veer-Ananya.

But the basic storyling was weak from day 1. Shramiks exist only in Aryanagar? Don't other cities and rajyas need palaces and temples? Why are they made to work day and night and getting exploited without anybody knowing? That dumb Raja is unaware of his praja's plight from so many years! He never steps out of his mahal.......What is this masiha aayega crap? It's as simple as going to their raja and complaining about yashwardhan...... If Raja Aryavardhan was bad, that would have explained the need for masiha...

More than Nivriti, I am scared tht Veer will know he's a shramik the story will lose it's charm. Veer will no longer be a prince 😕 No Dharam-Veer scenes 😕That bogus revolt 😕

Yes.... agree with what u said......

Even I loved two couples in the soap..... Dharam-Sia 😳 and Veer-Shera.😳

All that revolutionaries😡, freedom fight, shrmiks' story and that masiha 🤢everything looks dump and lacks lusture😕. Even audience have no feelings for shramiks..... they failed to create our attachment to Shramiks' story.

Shera's story is also good, but Mugdha is not so good as shera...... her rajnikant style stunts are too comedy. Want to see how they show her getting change and her father becoming villian in her life and how he tries to break her and Veer's relation.

Well I found Sanjam pretty good. Par yeh Tasha...... 🤔 yeh banda is soap mein kya kar raha hai?? we ve to wait and watch..... he has some main role or just a stupid enemy of Shera thats it?

Harsh..... his story is also ok..... but Dharam ke taqqar ka nahi lagta..... uske barabar ka hota toh aur bhi maja aata.

Agni and Jai...... they have to work except to make unsuccessful plans to kill Dharam. Boring

Nivriti... she looks gorgeous (till she opens her mouth) thats what i could say.... no comments.

I only loved scenes of four lead actors and off course Sia's parents😆

Originally posted by: ppiyu

Yes.... agree with what u said......

Even I loved two couples in the soap..... Dharam-Sia 😳 and Veer-Shera.😳

All that revolutionaries😡, freedom fight, shrmiks' story and that masiha 🤢everything looks dump and lacks lusture😕. Even audience have no feelings for shramiks..... they failed to create our attachment to Shramiks' story.

Shera's story is also good, but Mugdha is not so good as shera...... her rajnikant style stunts are too comedy. Want to see how they show her getting change and her father becoming villian in her life and how he tries to break her and Veer's relation.

Well I found Sanjam pretty good. Par yeh Tasha...... 🤔 yeh banda is soap mein kya kar raha hai?? we ve to wait and watch..... he has some main role or just a stupid enemy of Shera thats it?

Harsh..... his story is also ok..... but Dharam ke taqqar ka nahi lagta..... uske barabar ka hota toh aur bhi maja aata.

Agni and Jai...... they have to work except to make unsuccessful plans to kill Dharam. Boring

Nivriti... she looks gorgeous (till she opens her mouth) thats what i could say.... no comments.

I only loved scenes of four lead actors and off course Sia's parents😆

Agreed Piyu! 👏 😛 but i love only those scenes in which Veer is there...n not with Shera of course 😉

PRC, as a show took itz time to grow on audiences' mind...the emotions were nicely n strongly dealt with..there portrayal was brilliant! But in DV, they hv not even taken time to let us feel the magic of friendship between Dharam n Veer....in fact, they take recourse to few heavy...n few stupid n repetitve dialogues.

They do not have a concrete storyline....n they haven't done their homework. I hate to say it...but Sagars are simply cashing in on Rajat Tokas's popularity. Hez performing well...but how can the audience take interest in the serial wen nothing...absolutely nothing is being shown. DV is no where close to being nominated in any awards...let alone winning

I don't think the story of DV lacks originality.... in fact I find it very different from most other telly shows currently being telecasted.
But again, the similarity with PRC still exists. 😕
However, I am bothered not with it's PRC similarity, but with its lack of proper presentation. They could have really presented a chatpati-masaledaar story ..........😳

The directors and makers should actually make us feel the way they feel about the characters.
For example, its been more than a month into the show and we still dont sympathise with the shramik's plight.
Many of us, including me, see Pari and Sakshi , not as important lead characters, but as menace to DV's comfortable life and existence.
Why didn't they spend some time showing the mother daughter bonding? Why was Soma killed on the very first day of the serial?
Why didn't they show some happy flashbacks of Soma with his family........
the only memories Pari has of her husband are , those few dialogs on the last day of his life!!🤢
Why do shramiks live that moronic existence?😕

Why are they not shown doing other work apart from construction?...... like farming.......woh log KHATEY kya hein??????

Is Aryanagar surrounded by peaceful neighbours, who don't even try to create any borders problems?❓
the king can only think of big statues and maha arti?..... who deals with other day-to-day business of the kingdom?❓
where are the ministers? All we get to see is a humourist senapati

Again, from where I see, the main problem with the shramiks is not all the Aryavrats......... just the men in black who roam with a whip....... and
perhaps a lack of sympathetic attitude of the rest of the aryavrats.
Then why do they want to kill the king? He looks like an ignorant, underperformer to me....... certainly doesn't deserve assasination.
Why did they never approach the king in mass number, with a list of their woes

Why did Kranti die.......... even before we realised he is alive. .......They should have shown some touching affectionate scenes between Kranti and Sakshi.......😳
so we could also grieve his death along with Sakshi........... but he just came and went without making a mark👎🏼

And that mysterious sabha.......... an election committee of sorts....... why is it so powerful. 😕Why isn't the king shown interacting with them.
How do they decide who is better? Rajkumar D is not shown doing any commendable tasks except apple polishing his dad or fooling around with Veer.

D-Sia love story was started without any background. Well the best thing that hapened was D getting cross with Sia......... now I hope they will show Sia as a person undergoing some positive transformation

I can go on and on and on......... but I'll come to an abrupt halt here.😊

So its not the story that lacks originality but the emotional touch is missing, very good point 😊

Originally posted by: kirantarani2007

So its not the story that lacks originality but the emotional touch is missing, very good point 😊

yes in short perfect.itne bade bade petition padneke liye script writter ko 1 week ki leave lena padega!!!!

Originally posted by: pragy

yes in short perfect.itne bade bade petition padneke liye script writter ko 1 week ki leave lena padega!!!!

already leave par hi to hai wo aur ab kitni leave chahiye use😆

Originally posted by: kirantarani2007

already leave par hi to hai wo aur ab kitni leave chahiye use😆

woh nahi uska creative mind world tour par gaya hai.

are u really liking d way storyline is moving ahead??????????????dnt u find it bit absurd or annoying?????????????do u think rajat deserves way way better project den dis ??????????? mazid azam was best in prc,do u think new director(or may b his assistant) is fully justifying d characters in portraiting dem?????????????????

Originally posted by: minz~12

I am clules!!!..... 😆

I am liikin it!!..inded till todayy i lov the episodes!!..sumhoww i hvnt yet felt boring!!... 😛

im feeling bit bore now yaar,story is hell streching up i dnt no im missing some kind of magic vich was dere in prc times ........dere r so many absurd things in DV rupturing my mind ,i tell u minoo im forcefully watching dis serial for rajat n only rajat ,if he wud nt ve been in DV i wud ve kicked off dis serial...............🤢

hey dear i like DV and i think it is a great story and show also i like rajat in Veer role ,as we want to see DV a super hit show and we want rajat and his show win next year so it should be perfect in each area .
so i think DV is lucking in some parts which i think we should send emails to sagars so he pay more attention to it .

For example, the clothing ,Veer mom wearing one white cloths with same zewar from the beginging also maharaja .

Something is lucking in story too, not too much but just we want alittle more excitement and some good background music and singers for Veer and Dharam and all.
Also, i think Agni should get more lines as only his jai father speak and poor him says jee petaji 😆

well, my list is long but it is not that i don't like DV as i love this show and i really really want this show become number one so i want to make the perfect 😳

what else now i don't remember please don't get mad on me i only tell for the benefit of this show and our sweet brother
😃