Samyukta Part 6 - The Feast - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: lashy

omg ill reply in detail later minzy.... i was bowled over by your comments and couldnt help but reply

the reason why the language feels simpler because the episodes are lighter now... 😆 i basically wanted to only make a story starting from dharam veer's youthful bachpana to their falling in love.. not the entire thing... only reason the parts were a bit heavy so far because i wanted the episodes even if fun to be based on something plausible..

oh and daksha.. is just a silly girl but an excellent tomboy of a friend.. she is not shera honey 😆 just someone bowled over by veer 😆 (who wouldnt..😆)

and dont worry your shera will also be slightly different to the shera in the serial.. 😉

so itzz not my shera!!!!😆gosh!!..u r makin another jwala here!!...😆but i lov her!!!!😛u put her as an eg n representativ for all deewaani's here😆😆

do make me like shera too...cant wait to see how u'll introduce her!!!!😍

yes,u see once funnyy scenes come i cant help but replyy bigger!!.....😆aww!!...
now cant wait for haram Sia mulaakaath and daksha's fainting...😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12

o wowwww!!!

my most fav chapter till now! 😛

u r getting me addicted to this shrads..

Specially loved the discription of kitchen when nanda stroms in.. and DV's dinner! 😆 .

Edited by ketaki_ry - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy

neeri no hun daksha is another friend of Siya thats all... oh me giving away the story here.. but me dont want her taking place of my shera.. 😳 she is a very nice silly happy go lucky friend.. 😆 u know the girls who are kabhi idhar kabhi udhar types... 😆

i think its smaller characters like this that are actually missing in the sagars version and we have to always rely on veer and sia's dad for some entertainemnt.. 😊

ah but u r there to provide us with perfectly cute characters... 😊 thank u for that 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh my gosh lashy di....you make my weekends....i read this bfor watching prc....tis funny......and ya bhalla lefts unserved poor thing......and veer's putting on weight ......dharam is truly conscious about veer's health....and could you plz describe daksha a little more....like how does she look like....i am having a bit trouble imagining the girl who likes veer.....she is tomboyish...i need sth. more too.....like wat kinda clothes does she wear....how she looks like....how tall sth..like this....plzzz...plzzzz...tell me....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: minz~12

so itzz not my shera!!!!😆gosh!!..u r makin another jwala here!!...😆but i lov her!!!!😛u put her as an eg n representativ for all deewaani's here😆😆

do make me like shera too...cant wait to see how u'll introduce her!!!!😍

yes,u see once funnyy scenes come i cant help but replyy bigger!!.....😆aww!!...
now cant wait for haram Sia mulaakaath and daksha's fainting...😆

nahiiiiiiiiiiiiii not a jwaala... looooooool no becoming insane.. sacrificing for love types here.. 😆

and yes will definitely keep all of your ideas in mind... 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: shimmer

could you plz describe daksha a little more....like how does she look like....i am having a bit trouble imagining the girl who likes veer.....she is tomboyish...i need sth. more too.....like wat kinda clothes does she wear....how she looks like....how tall sth..like this....plzzz...plzzzz...tell me....

sure aapne pukaara aur ham aa gaye... 😛

definition of a tomboy is a girl considered boyish or masculine in behavior or manner. Unlike the petalline royal girls of the 13th century, she is a plump little fair maiden with a very cute face. She doesnt fear speaking her mind and a very practical girl😛.

She is someone that brightens anywhere she goes. obviously her happy-go-lucky attitude might end up putting her and her friends in trouble. Much as she would be a forward-thinker for her day and age... she would still be draped in dresses available in her century 😳

How i imagine she would be dressed

a colourful lehenga, a matching choli, dupatta

simple jewellery as fashion would not be one of her strongest points! - pearls mostly (cheap and cheerful) chains, anklets, earrings, bangles

long hair braided as a simple plait possibly done by her mother maybe with a few flowers when she is in a good mood... 😆

Enjoys her food...😆

was that enough for a description... 😳

Edited by lashy - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
omg
that was brillient lashy di
i loved it

daksha n veer make a brill pair

plz continue soon!!

shona
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy

sure aapne pukaara aur ham aa gaye... 😛

definition of a tomboy is a girl considered boyish or masculine in behavior or manner. Unlike the petalline royal girls of the 13th century, she is a plump little fair maiden with a very cute face. She doesnt fear speaking her mind and a very practical girl😛.

She is someone that brightens anywhere she goes. obviously her happy-go-lucky attitude might end up putting her and her friends in trouble. Much as she would be a forward-thinker for her day and age... she would still be draped in dresses available in her century 😳

How i imagine she would be dressed

a colourful lehenga, a matching choli, dupatta

simple jewellery as fashion would not be one of her strongest points! - pearls mostly (cheap and cheerful) chains, anklets, earrings, bangles

long hair braided as a simple plait possibly done by her mother maybe with a few flowers when she is in a good mood... 😆

Enjoys her food...😆

was that enough for a description... 😳

that was awesome.....and i knew wat tomboyish is but i need wat you told after......now i know.....its a lot easier to imagine her now....pehle to woh atak gayi thi....ab peice finalise ho raha hai.......🤗

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks for the description of Daksha dee...and OMG...brilliant part! Loved it! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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It must be excellent as usual .. hum yeh ankain band ker k bhi keh saktay hain ..... 👏

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