Vishvaas:PG85The End!-preview of VW2 pg1!

Rashmi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#431

Thanx,,, i can't wait for the next

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Spandita

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Posted: 17 years ago

#432

very thrilling part
u start off with a gr8 deal of suspense and then happy ending (in almost evey part)
this is amazing.viswaas is 1 of the most entertaining stories I have ever come across.
vishwa and Veer both r so smart.....
But did not understand that bit abt a girl who looks like Shera.Where did she cum from or she is Veer's creation?

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Spandita

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Posted: 17 years ago

#433

very thrilling part 👏
u start off with a gr8 deal of suspense and then happy ending (in almost evey part)
this is amazing.viswaas is 1 of the most entertaining stories I have ever come across. 😃
vishwa and Veer both r so smart.....
But did not understand that bit abt a girl who looks like Vishva.Where did she cum from or she is Veer's creation? 😉

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Megha

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Hmmmm Awesome work once again Shona...Great script writing kitne mazedaar twist & turn dete ho tum story ko...Maza aa gaya dekhkar ki Vishwa ne apne dakoo pita ko pechaane se inkaar kar diya...Waise I was quiet sure ki yahi hoga because she is really dedicated to veer 😉 😃 😳 Next part jaldhi bejna...aur ho sake toh thoda romance bhi add kar dena....ki kis tarah veer vishwa ko admire karta hai while she is dressing up for the engagement 😳

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Megha

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Hmmmm Awesome work once again Shona...Great script writing kitne mazedaar twist & turn dete ho tum story ko...Maza aa gaya dekhkar ki Vishwa ne apne dakoo pita ko pechaane se inkaar kar diya...Waise I was quiet sure ki yahi hoga because she is really dedicated to veer 😉 😃 😳 Next part jaldhi bejna...aur ho sake toh thoda romance bhi aad kar dena....kis kis tarah veer vishwa ko admire karta hai while she is dressing up for the engagement 😳

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Megha

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Hmmmm Awesome work once again Shona...Great script writing kitne mazedaar twist & turn dete ho tum story ko...Maza aa gaya dekhkar ki Vishwa ne apne dakoo pita ko pechaane se inkaar kar diya...Waise I was quiet sure ki yahi hoga because she is really dedicated to veer 😉 😃 😳 Next part jaldhi bejna...aur ho sake toh thoda romance bhi add kar dena....ki kis tarah veer vishwa ko admire karta hai while she is dressing up for the engagement 😳

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Shraddha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#437

wow you have fixed the engagement dates yayyy.. 😳 loooool me havent read the last three parts as i have been so busy.. but me will read everything together and reply this week.. 😳 great going shona.. 😳

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