Vishvaas:PG85The End!-preview of VW2 pg1! - Page 41

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: *Daxa-Dharmesh*

hi shona di oh i hope you don't mind me calling you "DI" and i have read everything and it's so cool so keep wrting DI and we all are waiting for the next part 😊



hi
of course u can call me di but how old are u?
im glad u enjoyed reading

oh btw welcome to DV forum

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: teju

lovely part shona

it's vishwa time to take care of veer

** TEJASVI**




thank u

yh ab vishva ki bari 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

fantastic part shona!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
guys im not gonna be able to update today because im on work experience so i'll try to update 2morrow

sorry everyone


shona
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Posted: 17 years ago
Woww superb part 👏👏 Loved it..such a sweeet part 😛 Hate Agni..😡 but who doesn't? 😆 All 4 - veer, dharam, sia and shera were amazingg 😃 Overall rocking part 😛 Waiting for ur next update =]]]
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey ur ff is 222222222222222 gd wow i hate 😡 agni hess soo annoying
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do carry on plzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
Shona next part kab aayega 😳 😃 I am waiting 😭 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
sorry megha dear(and everyone else) for the delay 😳 ok without further ado heres the next part:

Vishva: VEER!!dharam veer ko kya hua...kya hua veer...tum kuch bolte kyun nahin Dharam!!!

Dharam ignores Vishva and quickly orders the sainik to call a doctor

Vishva goes up to Dharam and pulls his colar

Vishva: baato na veer ko kya hua...woh teekh ho jaye ga na...baato....

she helplessly falls to the ground weeping
just by looking at veer's wounds she could tell how serious and delicate his condition was...

Sia looks at Dharam...she looks worried

Dharam kneals down and him and sia try to console Vishva

Dharam: vishva, veer ko kuch nahin hoga...woh bilkul teekh ho jaye ga...agar woh hota toh kehta ke ye toh mamuli choot hai...tum toh usse janti ho...usse kuch nahin hoga

Sia: haan hum sab ka pyar usse kuch nahin hoone dega...bas tum uss par bharosa rakho

the vaidji comes and immediately starts working on Veer's wounds

Vishva,Sia and Dharam are all outside the tent

Sia: par dharam ye sab hua kaise

Dharam recalls all that had happen and all that he saw

Dharam: woh hum dono dohd laga rahe teh aur Veer ageh nilkal gaye...jab hum wahan poonch tab veer ka ghoda bilkul kabu mein nahin tha...

Vishva: par ye toh Veer ka sabse kaas ghoda tha haina...Sheru

Dharam: hum bhi ye kabse sooch rahe hai...sheru ne aisa kyun kiya...woh veer ka pehla ghoda hai aur veer ke ek ishare ko samaj ta hai...toh phir woh aaj bekabu kaise ho gaya

Sia slowly speaks up

Sia: shayad woh bekabu na hua ho aur bekabu banaya gaya ho

Dharam and Vishva look at her...puzzled

Dharam: kya matlab

Veer: shayad usse kisi ne aise bakabu kiya ho...take veer ko mara ja sake

Vishva: koi aisa kyun kare ga

Sia: dekho hum sab jante hai Veer mein kitni takat hai aur junoon bhi hai ladh ne ka...aur agar woh chahe toh koi usse nahin hara sakta...bohat kam log hoge jo usse sabne se ladh ne ki himat karenge...agar sheru ko aise bekabu kiya jaye toh Veer ki jaan bhi ja sakti hai...hai na ...aur kisi ko shak bhi nahin hoga ke ye saazish hai...sab sheru pe he inzaam laga yenge

Dharam and Vishva take in what Sia had said...Dharam also thought of how intelligent Sia was becoming

Vishva: veer ki jaan ka dushman kaun ho sakta hai

Dharam: jo bhi ho mein usse nahin choodunga

Vishva gives him a look

Dharam: mera matlab hum usse nahin choodhenge

all three smile

Vaidji comes out

Dharam: veer kaisa hai

Vaid: shukar hai mein waqt pe poonch gaya warna isse teekh karna namumkin tha...zakhm kafi gehre hai par achi dekh bhal karo ge toh teekh ho jaye ga...iss waqt woh behoosh par kuch ghantoh mein hoosh ajaye ga

Vishva stared at Veer who is still unconcious...she recalls moments spent with him...a shiver runs down her spine at the thought of losing Veer like this...she is so thankful to god for giving her Veer and keeping him safe

They manage to take Veer back to the palace of Aryanagar

all are worried about Veer who is slowly recovering...everyone thinks it was the horse's fault...Dharam,sia and vishva had not yet said to anyone about their theory

a few days later when Veer could walk little independently with support Vishva went to the Shiv-Gauri mandir

She prays to god

Vishva: Shivji mere Veer par hamesha apni kripa banaye rakh na aur Gauri maa mere suhaag ki hamesha raksha karna

Veer walks into the mandir...he has heard Vishva pray for him

Veer: jai bholenath...waise humari shaadi abhi nahin hui toh suhaag...

Vishva: humari duniya ke samne nahin hui...par maan he maan mein mein apna sab kuch tumhe de chuki hoon...

Veer: agar aisi baat hai toh abhi,isse waqt bhagwan ko sakshi maan ke hum ek dusre se bandh jate hai janmo ke liye

They look at each other in the eye for a few moments

Veer holds Vishva's hand
she immediently feeling that comfort of being safe...that she only felt when she was around Veer


Veer led the way and Vishva followed behind him...Veer gave Vishva his first vow

Veer: mein Rajkumar Veer aaj bhagwan shiv aur maa parvati ko sakshi maan ke Rajkumari Vishva ko vachan deta hoon ke har janam mein mein uska ke honga...Veer Vishva ka he rahega

Vishva: mein Rajkumari Vishva aaj bhagwan ke baneye gaye is vishva ko sakshi maan ke iss janam aur mere ane wale har janam ko tumhare naam karti hoon

they finish their first round and take the next one

Veer: mein tumhe vachan deta hoon ke kisi bhi halat mein tumhara maan,sanmaan banaye rakhoon ga

Vishva: mein vachan deti hoon ke hamesha humari izaat karungi

they start their third round

Veer: mein vachan deta hoon ke mein tum pe dukh ya dard ki chaya nahin padh ne dunga

Vishva: mein vachan deti hoon ke har dukh mein aur sankat mein tumhara saath dungi

they begin their final round with Vishva taking the lead this time

Veer: mein vachan deta hoon ke har sankat mein kudh ki parva kiye bina mein tumhari raksha karunga

Vishva: mein vachan deti hoon ke jab maut aye toh mein usse tum tak nahin poonchne dungi...kudh ageh badh ke usse gale laga lungi..bilkul saanvi ke tarah

Veer looks at her....he is flattered by being loved so much...he recalled how Sanvi died in his arms and imagined what he wud go through if that happen to Vishva

Veer: mein aisa moka ane he nahin dunga ke tumhe apni jaan deni padhe...usse pe ab mera haq hai

Vishva unable to control herself hugs Veer tightly


Vishva: Veer agar tumhe...tumhe kuch ho jaata toh...

Veer: jab tak mujhe apno ka pyar mile gay tab tak mujhe kuch nahin hoga...tum veer ki premika ban ke itni jaldi kyun har maan leti ho?...aur waise bhi ye toh mamuli tha...sheru shayad gusa ho gaya tha

Vishva looks up into Veer's relaxed face

Vishva: nahin...veer ye ek sochi samji saazish hai

Veer: kya

Veer looked bemused

Vishva explains everything

the two decide to go back to teh palace and discuss this further with Dharam and Sia

on the way their Vishva's real Dad sees her

Dad: Shera...aise kapado mein...rajkumar Veer ke saath

He trys following her but loses her and Veer

Dad thinks to himself

Dad: ye Shera he thi...par woh yahan kya kar rahi hai...aur aise kapdo mein...mein kudh raj mehal ja ke paata laga ta hoon

he heads for the palace

Precap:

Vishva's dad comes into the courtroom shouting at samar
Dad: she is no daughter of yours...shes my daughter Shera

Vishva lookes uncomfortable
Samar looks at her

Veer looks disturbed

Jai smiles evily while Agni looks worried

Edited by **Shona** - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy_lil_gurl

Woww superb part 👏👏 Loved it..such a sweeet part 😛 Hate Agni..😡 but who doesn't? 😆 All 4 - veer, dharam, sia and shera were amazingg 😃 Overall rocking part 😛 Waiting for ur next update =]]]



thank u sarah
im glad u loved it!!
yh everyone hates agni
yh DV n VS are a rocking group
next part is updated so plz read n do comment 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mezbeen

hey ur ff is 222222222222222 gd wow i hate 😡 agni hess soo annoying
👏

do carry on plzzzzzzzz



thank u mezbeen
im glad u like Visvaas
yh agni is annoying

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