21st Jan’08 -:- Written Update [Detailed]

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Epi starts with The info about arya rajya
backgorund man say's
"yeh kahani hain uss jamane ki jab humaara desh chote chote rajjyon me bata hua tha aur un me se ek tha Aryavrat Rajya aur ek tha Shramiko ka Rajya"
Then showed shramik wer doing hard work😭 (man itz so like crying) and sainik of Aryavrat wer htting them by tht chaabook😡
again Background Voice sayz
"Aryavrat jitne bhi Mehel me rehete hain ye saare in shramiko ne apne mehnet se banaye hain👏 lekin aryavrat unko gulaam samjhakar unse kaam karvaate hain"😡

in next scene One man is Staring at those sainiks who are hittiing those shramiks suddenly one old man taking stones one side to another fall down 😭saying "Koi paani pilaa do,paani paani"😭😭😭 sainik comes from behind and hits him with tht chabook😡

One man came from behind in black suit He's Jaivardhan younger brother of aryavrat He shouts at tht old man "ye pathar tumhari jaan se bhi jyada kimati hain ise vaha le kar jaao"
sainik came n again start hitting tht old man😡 "Hum tumhaare bhagvan hain"shouts Jaivardhan "Aur tum sab ko humaari baat maanni padegi" and he start hiting tht old man again 😡
the man who was staring at those sainiks came near Jaivardhan n stops his hand fom hitting tht old man Jaivardhan look at him angrily
the man sayz "Tum humaare bhagvan nahi ho" Jaivardhan looks at him angrily "Kya kaha tumne hum tumhaare bhagavan nahi hain to kaun hain tumhara bhagvan ek baat samjhalo hum aryavrat hi tumhaare bhagavan hain"
one gal came n her face is tensed and she's looking at tht man
Jaivardhan sayz "Sainiko le chalo isse"looking at tht man
"Ye baat to maharaj ko battani hi padegi" and he leaves taking tht man with him

Next scene in darbar Maharaj came and seats on singhasan after some time Jaivardhan came with tht man
Maharaj asks him "yeh kaun hain" Jaivardhan sayz "yeh shramik hain isne humaare usulo par naa chalne ki jurrrat ki hain maharaj"
"kyon kiya tumne aisa" aska maharaj to tht man
"aap humaare bhagvan nahi hain" sayz tht man
"lekin kyun humne tumhe sab kuch diya ghar diya kam diya paisa diya aur kya chahiye tumhe" said maharaj asking tht man
"nahi chahiye hume ye sab" in between Jaivardhan is pointing out tht see he's making wat statement (afterll villian hain naa😆)
"to kya chahiye tumhe" ask maharaj "ajaadi chaahiye hume aajadi" said tht man "dekha maharaj kaise baath kar raha hain ye..." said Jaivardhan BUT maharaj stops in between to him
"thik hain de di humne tumhe tumhaari ajaadi,Jaivardhan jaao ise aajad kar do" said maharaj "par maharaj" said Jaivardhan "humne kaha naa" said maharaj
"thik hain maharaj chalo tumhe tumhaari ajaadi deta hoon" said Jaivarhan looking at tht man

Next scene a ground near one river all shramiks r der standing around jaivardhan come with tht man "agar tum us padhav tak pahooch pate ho to hum tumhe kya tumhare saare shramiko ko aajad kar denge" said jaivardhan pointing to opposite side of them wher they wer standing "yaa to tum use padaav tak jaa kar dikhao yaa phir mere pairo me girkar kaho ki hum Aryavrat hi tumhaare bhagvan hain" sayz jaivardhan seating on his chair or wateva😆
"main ye kabhi nahi maanunga ki tum humaare bhagavan ho"sayz tht man looking at jaivardhan
"kholo isse"sayz jv with anger
one gal came to tht man "kyun kar rahe ho tum aisa"sais tht gal
"pari dil chota mat karo main jaanta hoon ki aaj main yaha par akela khada hoon aur ye log mujhe jinda us taraf pahoonchane nahi denge,lekin jald hi koi aisa aayega jo tum sabko ek din yaha par ek saath khada karega aur inko bataayega ki humare bhagavan ye nahi balki humare bhagavan khud hum hain" saying this man turns back "Baba" said his small girl,he seat on his knees"Baba ro mat aap jit jaaoge" sayz his girl
JV came from behind and heat him😡
man starts runniing all sainiks were thrwowing arrows he's running at one point one stick came out from inside of flour ground and he falls down all aroows touches him n he dies(oh man so cruel is tht)
his wife get's uncouncious as she is pregnent

next scene itz night all shramiks seating n talking one of them said "hume ab is tarah jine ki aadat pad chuki hain" other scene tht mns wife having pain all ladies gathered together next side another shramik asyz "humaari to kismat hi aisi hain,ab hume kisi aise ki jaroorat hain jo hume iss nark se bahar nikal sake" other hand mans wife having pain and atlast she born up a guy the lady sayz "ladaka hua hain" and goed outside and give baby to mans hand he sayz "aa gaya humaara masiha aa gaya"😃

Next scene some baba of maharaj seating under hanging light suddenly get up and said "aa gaya unka masiha aa gaya" tht time maharaj n jv came
"kaun a gaya aap kiski baat kar rahe hain" asks maharaj "unka masiha aa gaya" sayz baba
"kiska masiha aa gaya" asks jv
"shramiko kaa vo tumhe tabaah kar dega vo sadiyon se chalti ayi huyi parampara ko nasht kar dega aryavraton ke rajya ko meeta dega" all shocked
" ye aap kya keh rahe hain" said maharaj in worried voice
" aap chinta mat kijiye maharaj kal aap ke bete dharam ko pehela janmadin hain aap yagya ki taiyari ki jiye aur baaki sab main sambhaal loonga" sayz jv
maharaj goes from there
" us singhasan ki taraf koi aankh utha kar bhi nahi dekha sakata kyon ki vo singhasn aage jaa kar mera hone wala hain" sayz jv with wierd expression on face

other hand in next scene maharaj came with maharani and dharam,yagya starts
here jv and sainik goes and start burning shramiks homes😡 all started running tht mans wife worried the old man sayz put her baby into cave
----End of 1st epi----

Precap:-
the lady came to maharaj n sayz i got this child in one cave and Entry of Rajjy n Vikrant😳

Note:: JV means Jaivardhan😆

Guys this i first time wrote update for any serial so plz forgive if any mistakes😭
I$hu😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thx minoo 😃
gosh so hard yaar but i hv to it daily lagata hai 😆 😆
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ohh i was abt to do the update
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Thank you sooo much for the first update

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thank you i can't wait to watch the episode and well done it was good i couldn't tell u did it first time u deserve 👏
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Thanks Ishu 👏 🤗 .....cant wait to watch it 😍 ....I just really want to watch the precap 😳
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thxxxxxxxxxxxx ishuuuuuuuuuuuu luvv yaaa...
wonderfulll epii man... seems lyke dharam's father is a really cruel man...
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Hey Thx all of you 😃 Glad u like ma first update here 😛

@shona srry yaar i know itz u'r turn today but all were very eager to read the update as many cannot get imagine channel der 😉 so i did it srry once again
BUT from tommorow make sure u come early n do the update otherwise all will start bashing on me to do the update 😆 😆
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thanks a lot for the lovely update ishu

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